Date: 01/10/09 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 11
Cliffhanger; you left us with a fucking cliffhanger. Oh you mean, mean person. *pouts* This is amazing, though, the backstory with the magic and the traditions and history is incredible and it seems you've put a lot of thought into it and, well, I love it. I don't like the Biorg, I just don't, but I do love your characters. Honestly, this is one of those stories I don't give a shit about the hot twincest sex that's bound to be coming up because I'm so interested in the way the plot is unfolding. Thank you for writing this story, and god, it needs more reviews. D:
Author's Response: Feel free to stone me for the cliffhanger. Even I can admit, that was pure evil.rnrnWorry not about the Bill/Georg. It's offically over, with Tom and Gustav now in the picture. Though it was fun while it lasted, mainly because I knew nothing was ever going to come of it and I was just fussing around with them.rnrnThanks so much for noticing the complexity and thought I've put into the plot. I really did think this one through, trying to make sure absolutely everything fit together. The plot and the characters really do come first in this story.rnrn<3 Your review is love.
Date: 01/07/09 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 10
Ahh!! They are sooo close I can't stand it!!! It's sooooo good. The story about Saki and Gustav's father and how Saki fits into everything its soo amazing. Poor Tom. He's so lost right now. I can't wait for 11 now. I'm so excited!!!
Author's Response: I never meant to prolong their reunion for so long, and I promise, it's coming, technically in the next chapter. And I was always kind of smitten with the idea of relating everyone to everyone else, either by relationships, blood or events, so the Saki thing just worked out really well. Glad you enjoyed.rnrnThanks so much for the wonderful review!
Date: 01/07/09 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 10
You're fucking loving his, aren't you?!
Is there any need really?
Honest to fucking God, even if you had Bill and the other two walk around the corner (holding hands with Georg so Tom beats the shit out of him) and Bill's all like, 'Tomi?' and Tom's all like 'Billa?'
Then they run to each other, kiss hug and cry. Then when they let go Tom opens a can of whoop-arse on Georg.
I'm not even joking anymore.
P.s.s.h.t.
Poor fucking Gustav! Bless him.
I still like Saki 'n' all, but poor little bastard.
I wanted him to kill Saki, but at the same time I didn't.
Guhhhh, you fuck me up woman, I hate not being able to decide.
All I could think about when Saki was telling Tom about why he was sent across the divide was EWWW! Saki/Tom. Sick and wrong.
I'd have been fucking scared if I was Tom during all that.
Tom's still adorable.
I know I say this a lot, but seriously, I love the way you write him.
You've left me incapable of leaving a proper review, I just wanna bitch at you for being a little tease.
I love how this pieces together, it really works, most of the time people fail with doing that, but thank God you're a good author. I love the plot and I think, no I know, that I'd hate to read it from anyone but you.
Seriously, update, or you're going to have some problems, *glares* BIG problems, lol.
Author's Response: Wow, I'm not sure whether to be amused by your need to have the twins reunited or fear for my life that I haven't done it yet. Seriously ... but I swear, it's coming. Technically, you'll get the reunion in the next chapter, instead of twelve. And I expect to have eleven finished and polished by saturday and posted by sunday, so wait just a little longer.rnrnBah, don't be a dirty fangirl. The Saki/Tom thing is platonic. Not even the slightest bit romantic. I mean, it's not intended that way. lol, now that I think about it ... that is icky :)rnrn*sigh* I love how you can threaten me and then compliment me all in the same review. I mean it, I really love it. It lets me know that I've made an emotional connection. And writing isn't worth anything unless you can make that connection. Of course some times you scare me a little bit, but it's worth it. <3
Date: 01/07/09 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 10
whoo.. so close and so far... talk about near misses...
Author's Response: I know, I'm ridiculously evil making them miss each other like that. But I promise, no more messing around. I'm reuniting them. I think they deserve it.rnrnThanks for the review!
Date: 01/06/09 04:06 am Title: Chapter 9
Aw! How sweet of Andi to help! :D
But they're still running out of time! D:
Great Update!
But PLEASE Update Soon!!! Dx
Date: 01/03/09 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 9
Pssht *glares*
Sure, update while I'm not here why don't you.
You know what, I'm going to leave Georg for a while, Andreas needs to get it on with Bill, then Tom has to come through the door, and beat the shit out of him.
Well, he needs to beat the shit out of someone (as well as the person who put Bill's name on the death warrant).
PLEASE!!
And I just really want some Bill/Andi, since it's like the second best pairing.
Btw, I loved that line in the last chapter, when Tom says 'Did you break Bill.' I just loved it.
I think I know about the "where the sky meets the water at three-fifteen at midnight.” thing. I don't know where, but it's not proper times, like, they're the old things, I can't remember properly, it's far too late for that, but 3 isn't 3, it's like oh god I can't remember, and I'm probably not even right.
Moving on.
PLEASE! Have them find each other in the next chapter!
I can't wait anymore, you're just evil doing this!
I really like how Georg and Andreas are together, it's cute, I think I found myself awing more than once.
I can't remember if you said where everyone's going to be after this is all over, but I hope both Geo and Andreas and Saki can cross the Divide.
Andreas' reaction to Bill amused me, so typical, and such and Andi thing.
Ergh, it's far too late, well early for me to be reviewing, so I'm sorry for how shit this was, my next one will be better, I promise.
And just for old times sake, Update tomorrow
Author's Response: Be thankful I updated at all. My brain is still semi mushy. For a while there was a possibility I wasnt' going to write anything for weeks longer, but then I decided to buckle down and get going.rnrnAndreas is love, and actually, he and Bill are going to get along quite well, much to Georg's annoyance. I can't promise any Andreas/Bill, but they're going to be good friends.rnrnTwo chapters away, I swear, from the reunion, and about that ass kicking, Tom won't be that pleased that Georg made some moves on his brother. When they all meet up, there's going to be a truckload of misunderstandings, and a lot of testosteron flying.rnrnNot saying anything about the riddle, refuse to spoil anything.rnrnAh, so thanks for the review, I was a tad worried when days went by and you dropped off the radar. I wondered if you'd completely hated the chapter and were sending me a message. Glad to know you did read and that you had wonderful comments as per usual.
Date: 01/03/09 11:01 am Title: Chapter 9
Bahaha, Andreas is so awkward, I love him! I spotted a few typos, but nothing that made me froth at the mouth or twitch, haha. I'm so glad you've updated!!
Author's Response: Come on, you know Andreas is totoally the best sidekick ever. rnrnTypos are evil ... yeah. My beta is still recovering from finals, trying to pick her brain up from the floor that leaked out at some point. They will be fixed eventually.rnrnThanks so much for sticking around through the break I took from this and commenting.
Date: 01/02/09 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 9
YAY!!! You're back!!!! Wow it's getting so good. I'm getting really nervous for Bill right now though. It is interesting that Andreas is so eager to help, but maybe my imagination is getting the better of me there. I wonder how the meeting of Tom and Bill is going to go down? We're getting closer:) I LOVE IT!
Author's Response: *sigh* Yeah, I'm back. I was ... dead after finals. I've never been so completely wiped out and I just crawled in bed and only got out for work. I went days without getting on the computer or turning on the TV. I was so not in the mood for any writing. But I'm recovered now and I'll be writing regularly. Thanks for sticking around while I got my head back on right.rnrnI promise, promise, promise the Tom/Bill stuff is getting closer. In just a few chapters the buildup will be over and they'll be reunited, and the way I've got it planned ... it should certainly be interesting. :) you can bet I'm going to cut it as close as possible, so the drama is going to be oozing from this fic.rnrnThanks so much for the support!
Date: 01/02/09 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 9
O.o oh wow... Andi is SUCH a brat, but at least he's a Helpful brat...
now I'm all but chewing my nails to see if they find David, Tom and Gus is time...
Author's Response: Aww, I love Andreas. He's meant to be the annoying sidekick tha you want to hate, but truly (and secretly) love.rnrnThanks for sticking around after I took that long break from this story, and I promise they're going to meet up very soon.
Date: 12/30/08 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 8
rawer
this is such a good story...
more chapters please :)
bitte
--TOKIOHOTELROCKS123
--sototallieradical
--xoxox :}
Date: 12/21/08 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 8
I liked very much. Please give they/us a happy end. :P
Date: 12/20/08 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 8
You misspelled 'lose' a couple times, but those were the only typos I found, I think.
But, omg. I was sitting bolt upright in my chair as I was reading this, and I was just, like, chanting to myself find Bill, find Bill, find Bill. xD
Date: 12/18/08 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 8
gods, poor Georg to know there is help out there and have no idea how to get to it.
Author's Response: I have ablsolutely too much fun terrorizing and traumatizing poor Georgie like that. I know.rnrnThanks for reading!
Date: 12/16/08 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1: When Meeting New People ...
You did it again. I love this more and more as I read it. You have everything so well thought out and all the back information is there when its needed. I think I love this story because I grew up watching and reading fantasy. Some of my favorites are Legend and Labyrinth. I think that it's cute that George is so sick in love with Bill and that Bill is still so devoted to his brother eventhough he thinks Tom tried to have him killed. Tom is very passionate about getting Bill back and I hope that it is true that Bill is strong enough to hold on, but I feel like they won't be together until it is nearly too late for Bill. Even still it makes for a great story and it flows so well. Really. You have done a great job with this. Chapter 9 ? I can't wait!!!!!
Author's Response: *sigh* Thank you so much. I adore this story so much, it's my baby, so to share that with other people who like it as well, is completely rewarding. I think I am pulling from all of those fantasy movies and books that I grew up on, because I was a total geek as a kid and fantasy/sci-fi was pretty much my love, and still is to a great degree. Thank you so much for kind words.rnrnChapter nine to follow when finals are over, because I'm busy stressing over those right now.
Date: 12/16/08 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
I really, really want them to get together...
Date: 12/16/08 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is way too weird...
Date: 12/16/08 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
He's having a seizure! Oh my god! I'm off to the next chapter. You sure know how to keep someone reading!
Date: 12/16/08 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 1: When Meeting New People ...
This is a very...interesting first chapter. I really want to know where, exactly, Bill is from. I like it!
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying!
Date: 12/16/08 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 8
Please, please, please, please, PLEASE have Tom and Bill find each other in the next chapter, I'm desperate for them too.
Seriously, you're just fucking cruel!!!
*pouts*pwease?
I don't like Georg, I've gone off him, and that's probably got more to do with me than how you've wrote it.
Unless you meant for that, which I can't see you doing.
I'm considering spending the next 100-odd words begging for them to meet up in the next chapter. But I can see that being a waste of my time.
I didn't think I'd like Saki, but I do...there's something about him which I like.
And I'm coming around to David more and more.
&heats;Tom♥
I proper love him, he just makes me 'aww' and 'bless' so much.
The small little sentences about the twins' life really makes me happeh.
Esp. the one about what Saki remembered the twins as.
But I am confused, if Saki crossed the Divide about 50 years ago, then how does he remember the twins?
I really, really hope that he gets to come back home, to the twins' land.
He deserves it.
I'd leave a better review but I'm too tired, but I will leave you with something to think about.
GET THE TWINS BACK TOGETHER IN THE NEXT CHAPPTER!
Author's Response: lol, sorry, but it's still roughly chapter twelve at this point where they're meeting up ... maybe ... maybe chapter eleven, depending on how things good, namely the editing process.rnrnGeorg is ... well, as I'm writing him right now, he's not completely likeable, that much I do get, but once Tom pops into the picture, I think he'll start to be a lot less annoying. He's busy being all sappy and emo right now.rnrnSaki is ... I really have fun playing with his character. He's a ball to write, and he's actually going to be sticking around for a bit. Oh, and unless there's some horrific typo, he's only been across the threshold for about fifteen years, and with the twins sixteen, that's why he remembers them as toddlers. God, there had better not be a horrible typo or else I'm screwed for something in future chapters.rnrn<3 As always, you know I love your reviews best.
Date: 12/14/08 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wow.....So they have no clue that Bill isn't with Saki yet, right? xD
I think they'll all be in for a shock. xD
Well hopefully Georg will take Bill to Saki later. :]
Great Update!
More soon???? :3
Author's Response: *relief* I was actually worried that people would get that David was referencing Saki. I rearead this chapter a few days ago and thought it sort of sounded like David had sent Bill to Georg, and I was nervous, because that's not what I intended.rnrnThanks for dropping me a review and making me worry a litte less. My plan is to take a final tomorrow, and then once my brain has stopped threatening to avoid exploding from the amount of knowledge I've shoved in there, I'll see about getting the next chapter posted by tuesday ... after I buy the new FOB cd and stop obsessing over it.