Date: 04/22/09 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 17
Awww. That was so cute:) George is quite amazing. I knew he could save the day. I love this story. It's great and I can't wait to see what they do next:)
Author's Response: Thank you! Georg is one big freaking hero, and I wanted to make sure he got his dues. Glad to know you approve. New chapter coming by this weekend at the latest.
Date: 04/22/09 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 17
That is so cool!
He exploded!!
And ewww, they they breathed the mist in and they'll be covered in God only knows what from it.
Aww, Tom hugging Bill for support, and it not being as strong as usual, made me feel so sorry for them.
When Tom said not to breathe in, I actually didn't breathe in for a few paragraphs.
I don't know how I feel about Bill being David's apprentice, I like that he's doing what he wants to do and everything, but I still think him and Tom should both take the Kingship. But I proper awwed at Bill's little pep talk for Tom.
He's so sweet.
And bless Tom for being worried.
It feels like the end is nigh, and I don't like that.
I've loved this, especially since it wasn't based solely on Tom and Bill.
The break from the norm is a welcome relief, and because of that, the fic was so much better.
But then again, you wrote it, so it's always going to be better than what most people write.
Georg, having so much power, I honestly never saw that one coming.
It wasn't like a huuuge surprise, since it could've happened, but I didn't think it would.
Though I'm well glad he did.
I loved Tobi's line at the end, it made me laugh.
Ohh, Tom's little bit about the insignias, the way you've wrote him, he can just knock me sideways, he did in fact.
When are Gustav and Georg going to get it on?
I could have screamed this morning, I logged on before I had to leave, and the first thing I see is that this is updated.
It killed me having to wait all day.
And, I was thinking about it the night before.
I'm so glad that they're not dead.
And I'm desperate for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I'm going on about three hours of sleep in two days right now, so forgive me if I don't make any sense and just ramble on here. What I mean to say is, of course, thank you so much for the continuted support, even with it taking me forever to get this finished. It's not a matter of disinterest, it's simply a matter of time. But I swear, the final chapters are coming and very soon (I actually have them already written, and I'm just editing now), so hopefully I can get this finished by next week and start posting the next story, for which I will bug you for a banner for. <3rnrn...better response to your comment next chapter, when I will have had way more sleep.
Date: 03/26/09 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 16
I absolutely adore this story! I just discovered it yesterday and like a great book I just couldn't put it down till I finished what you had written. The characters are wonderful! The action and romance make me melt. Your cliffhangers keep me on edge. And I'm fangirling all over this! I'm a huge fantasy and AU fan and this story just hits all my buttons. Bill's faith in Tom made me want to weep and cheer. Tom's devotion to Bill is to die for. And a fairytale wedding. And...and Georg and Gustav, yes!! Every chapter reveals another piece of their past. I'm totally hooked on this. Well done. Finish up your school work then get us back to this fabulous fantasy world you created. Awesome!
Date: 03/26/09 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 16
i still love love LOVE this story!! keep writing!
Date: 03/25/09 01:02 am Title: Chapter 16
I'm so glad to see this updated... I missed it!! And it was wonderfull, as always.
Date: 03/24/09 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 16
WOW! I just read this in one sitting and YOU CANNOT STOP THERE!!!! *whimpers* It's...it's...they can't....NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
GEORG, DO SOMETHING!!!
Date: 03/24/09 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 16
Yay! I've been hoping that you hadn't abandoned the story! And now I'm really excited for the rest... evil cliffie -.-
Date: 03/24/09 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 1: When Meeting New People ...
OMG!!!! You make us wait for so so long and then you leave us with this ending!! It's truly evil, but soooo good! I can't wait to read more:) You write everything so colorfully so it is easy to remember and pick up even if it has been a long time. The characters feel the same and the flow still feels as it did before. It was a really great chapter:)
You're graduating soon YAY!! I understand it is so close to the end and you have to work so hard to study and keep up with everything. School is most important. Congrats and happy spring break:)
Author's Response: lol, when I sat down to write this chapter my intention was not to torture anyone, especially after such a long wait, but it's just how it worked out. I promise, you won't have to wait a million years for the next chapter.rnrnThanks so much for understanding about school and my priorities, and thanks even more for sticking with this fic even after the majoy delay!
Date: 03/24/09 09:46 am Title: Chapter 16
no complaints other than where you stopped it...
and school (real life) comes first.. it has to..
Author's Response: Thank you for understanding! More to follow soon, hopefully.
Date: 03/24/09 07:50 am Title: Chapter 16
I don't think it hurt it, per se, but I was confused when I started on this chapter; I had forgotten the events in the last. It quickly came back to me, however, and did no real damage. This chapter is sweet and funny when it comes to the middle part, the first was... well, Georg was right. And the last... I am holding my breath in suspense. Also, I'm really glad you're back, if only for the time being. :)
Author's Response: See, that was what I was afriad of. I was worried that people would get lost in the plot, which is a little more complex than I'm used to, or rather, detail orrientated. But at least you enjoyed it once it came back to you. I'm going to do my best to get this finished as soon as possible, so hang with me here for a little longer. Thank You!
Date: 03/24/09 07:01 am Title: Chapter 16
I-uh-guh?
There's like soo much emotion in this, I could cry.
I've had to check that there was no character death warning about six times while I was reading this.
No, the hiatus hasn't hurt the story - at all.
It's hurt me, because it was THE cruelest time to take a hiatus.
Actually, after this chapter would be worse.
But I understand that you've got school and everything.
Awww XD They're married, I was smiling so much, but it hurt at the same time, sweet sorrow and all that.
I did want them to consummate it however, just because I love twin sex, and it'd be so sweet and adorable with them.
Do you have some sort of obsession with abusing their necks?
It makes me cringe so much.
Could it be that Tom and Bill's magic will save them? Because they're so in love and I'd love that to happen.
I'm trying to think of all the ways that this will work out, so they don't die.
But there are only a few short of Bill and Tom's guards, and Gustav's 'companions' charging in, wielding their swords and slaying the twat, aka the magistrate.
So does that mean this is going to end soon, with you wanting to get everything wrote this week? :(
I love it so much, even though it breaks my heart and tears me up inside, it'll kill me to see it end.
I don't know if there's much more I can say, you've left me almost stunned, it was such an amazing chapter, and the content was like like...I don't know how to put it, brilliant, yet heartbreaking.
I can't wait for another chapter.
Author's Response: *sigh* I missed your comments. And if you say the hiatus hasn't hurt this, then I believe you.rnrnLol, I totally stole most of this wedding scene from my brother. He and his partner had a traditional pagan joining and it was the most beautiful thing I'd ever seen in my life, especially with the vows, so I knew I wanted this scene to go just like that. And I so totally wanted to put some Tom/Bill sexing in this chapter, but my muse and Gustav wouldn't let me.rnrnI have to tell you, honestly, love does not save the day, at least not in the way you may be thinking. There have been little hints along the way that have have built up to this moment, some more subtle than the others, but once the next chapter comes out, another read through of this story will reveal a bunch of stuff you might have missed before ... if I can get everything to work out perfectly in the end. Sufice to say, I have a new hero in every story I write, and it's never the person you think it's going to be. It's a trend with me in my writing.rnrnAs far as I can tell there are only three chapters left. But I do have to admit, about a month ago I started writing my newest story, so once this one is finished I'll be able to get started on posting that one, and hopefully I'll get about half of it up before I head over to Europe for the summer.rnrnThanks so much, as always, for the reviews and the support and the patience.
Date: 03/24/09 06:57 am Title: Chapter 16
I'm still reading ^^ and I still love this story.
Personally I don't think the hiatus hurt the story in anyway, I just reread the entire story and the storyline still flowed smoothly, I think.
Author's Response: Thanks both for reading and letting me know about the flow. Before I wrote this I checked over all of my story notes and reread several of the past chapters just to make sure, but I still wasn't one hundred precent confident that the flow of the writing hadn't been messed up. This makes me feel much better.
Date: 02/11/09 11:45 am Title: Chapter 15
aw!!!!!
Noo! I hate Georg's uncle!!!!! D:
tgffdffkloiueqassg!!!!!!!!!
OOOOH!!! I love weddings!!! :D
And what happened to georg???
I love this story!!!
Amazing Update!!!!
More soon???
Please??????????
Date: 02/11/09 11:38 am Title: Chapter 15
aw!!!!!
Noo! I hate Georg's uncle!!!!! D:
tgffdffkloiueqassg!!!!!!!!!
OOOOH!!! I love weddings!!! :D
And what happened to georg???
I love this story!!!
Amazing Update!!!!
More soon???
Please??????????
Date: 01/31/09 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 15
Ok. The idea of Tom and Bill getting married is funny to me, but cute all at the same time. I knew the magistrate had managed to get Tom to sign the document some how without him knowing. That old man is evil. I really hope George can find a way to save the day though, it's up to him to save Bill and the others once again. I have to admit though I'm kind of hopping to see Bill pull out his can of magical whoop ass and take the kingdom back. I guess there is still time for that though. Can't wait to read the next chapter and find out if they can escape death and if Bill can escape death for the fourth time!
Author's Response: The concept is a little funny, and a little desperate, but it's supposed to be.rnrnAs for a can of magical whoop ass ... I won't say anything, because I refuse to spoil, but I have plans to have this fic end with a big bang, and you can bet it'll be magical in origin.rnrnThanks so much for reading all this time and leaving such wonderful comments!
Date: 01/31/09 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 15
I have no time to review but I just wanted to let you know how much I love this chapter. The ending killed me!! *__* And the explanation about Bill's hair was fantastic, and I did feel kiiiinda sorry for the Magistrate, though even sorrier for Tom. Love this so much, update soon again!! b29;
Author's Response: Thanks so much for spending what little time you have to let me know you liked this! Yay for you liking the hair comment. I kind of threw it in as a joke, more than anything else, and I didn't really know if it stuck out or not, so thanks for easing me. It's okay to feel kiiiiinda sorry for him, because he does have a sob story, so hopefully you won't be too upset when he goes down in the end.rnrn<3rn
Date: 01/31/09 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 15
AWWWWW!!
For the beginning, I was eating popcorn whilst reading this, which seemed very fitting, and for the end, the popcorn was discarded and spilt at the end of the bed, while I read with wide eyes and a sappy smile.
I honest to God loved it.
One thing though, Bill wont even be a prince, ever, princess yes, not a prince.
Sorry, just had to mention that.
Not that he needs to cross-dress or anything, but we all know he a princess deep down inside.
Gooouhhhh, my stomach is tingling and I've got a well big smile plastered over my face.
It was beyond sweet, and all I could ever wish for, the twc fluff just made my heart melt.
And they're getting married, awwww!
I cannot wait for the next chapter now, I'm proper buzzing for it.
Poor Bill, being deprived of magic when he's just came back, but at least he's got his twin with him.
*sigh* I wanted Georg to slash the magistrates throat, that'd have been cool.
As long as you didn't go into too much detail, I'm still cringing from the last time that happened.
So much angst and drama girl, where do you get it from, you could never tell from talking to...er...emailing you.
Was it this story or the last one that you said Gustav was going to be the hero in one of your responses?
I just remember reading the words, but I can't remember where about exactly.
*Pouts* Why is there no Character Death?
I'm both glad and upset about that.
Well, not upset, but I want the old fucker to die, and, did I or did I not suspect him, after David of course? *grins*.
But if the warning was there, I'd be worried, and begging you not to let them die.
When it said that Tom was the one who had signed the Death Warrant, I wasn't even the slightest bit angry at him, I just felt so, so, so sorry for him.
I wanted to be annoyed, but I just couldn't, I could only think of how upset and annoyed he must be with himself, and my heart went out to him.
You're beyond amazing.
Author's Response: *headdesk* I had this HUGE response all typed out and then I hit the back button by mistake. Ugh.rnrnLong story short, when Bill marries Tom, his title transfers to consort, particularly prince consort, though admittedly this is the way it would happen between a heterosexual couple, in a specific culture I'm basing this off of, and not one within the same bloodline, so I'm not exactly sure otherwise. Call him whatever you well. Princess works.rnrnFluffy twincest = guilty pleasurernrnThe magistrate will get his, and everyone this time we get to be the big damn hero, though Gustav will play his part.rnrnCharacter death ... hmmm ... to be honest, as things stand now, it doesn't look like it'll actually happen. I know, with the magistrate getting his, that's confusing, but it'll all work out in the end and hopefully please everyone.rnrnTom was supposed to get the sympathy vote this chapter, so yay for that.rnrn*sigh* That first response I wrote out was so much better, but I'm tired and it's late so I suppose this'll have to do. Thanks so much for the never ending support. You know you're my favorite!
Date: 01/31/09 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 15
Love it.
Author's Response: <3
Date: 01/25/09 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 14
oh.. oh wow... talk about twists and turns...
Date: 01/25/09 05:31 am Title: Chapter 1: When Meeting New People ...
Oh no, don't feel like that, honestly.
It was probably just me, I read the part where they were like, 'they're the same person' and after that I was too stunned to take anything in properly, I guess I should have.
Please don't feel like that, it was an amazing chapter.