that was deep!
good writing.
SAD ENDING!!!
*goes and cries in corner*
don't know if you've ever read twilight, but most vampire FF's i usually read are similar to it.
like how you made yours really different, came up with a completely new universe.
I WANT MORE!!! *sniff*
keep.it.up.
please? *gets teary eyed*
^.^

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. I've written another vampire/carpathian story called 'Darkness Doesn't Hide Everthing', which is also on here (but I'm having difficulty posting chapter 27 of it on this site for some reason). I might go check out this 'Twilight' you said. I've never read it and I'm always up for a good Vampire story lol and imagining Bill as a vampire is hot :P