Date: 01/27/10 02:08 pm Title: Please? I want it so bad!
sequel please
Date: 01/27/10 02:08 pm Title: Please? I want it so bad!
sequel please
Date: 04/26/09 06:14 pm Title: Please? I want it so bad!
SEQUEL WOULD BE NICE!!!
Date: 01/03/09 08:59 am Title: Please? I want it so bad!
Weeell, first thing to say:
It's hooot, and I liiike it 8D
Author's Response: Why thank you! =D We are very happy you liked it!
Date: 11/12/08 12:41 am Title: Please? I want it so bad!
...WOOOOOOOOWWW... oky day. It was excellent! Great description!
lol...
Author's Response: Danke shune(dont u dare correct my spelling)
Date: 11/11/08 05:07 pm Title: Please? I want it so bad!
It was choppy but the smut was fun.
Author's Response: thank you! from us both!rnand from this, you heped me a lot lol.
Date: 11/11/08 10:32 am Title: Please? I want it so bad!
very good :)
Author's Response: paarthea says: Danke zier!
Date: 11/11/08 08:20 am Title: Please? I want it so bad!
awww sleepy time lolz loved it
Author's Response: paarthea says: Danke zier!
Date: 11/11/08 02:21 am Title: Please? I want it so bad!
Your sex is so hot, but the chapter was pretty rushed. Slow it down a bit, go into more depth about how the boys feel, their character, etc, then bring the sex in slowly. Other than that it was really good. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much. That helps for future reference!!! rnrnAnd we're glad you liked it!