Date: 02/10/09 02:28 pm Title: Airplane Ride
0.0 omfg i will never look at plane rides as boring EVER AGAIN!! x3 tytytytyty!
Date: 01/24/09 08:22 pm Title: Airplane Ride
That was great. i loved it...
Date: 11/17/08 01:40 am Title: Airplane Ride
well that was just super sexy xx
Author's Response: :) thanks, glad you liked it.
Date: 11/13/08 10:07 pm Title: Airplane Ride
Wow!
That was hot!
Pretty risky too :P
Author's Response: :) thank youu.
Date: 11/13/08 01:15 pm Title: Airplane Ride
Loved it. :)
Author's Response: good, im glsd! :) lol
Date: 11/12/08 08:05 pm Title: Airplane Ride
woooooooooooo!!!!!! me love me love!!!
Author's Response: :):) glad you liked it!
Date: 11/11/08 07:41 pm Title: Airplane Ride
NO ONE NOTICED THAT?! :O
that was reallyyy hott. (:
Author's Response: lol thanks, noticed what?
Date: 11/11/08 01:48 pm Title: Airplane Ride
I never said that I didn't enjoy it, it was just...hard.
And no, I think it's a universal thing, if not, it's English, as in, that's how people from England spell it.
Author's Response: hm, i dunno, im not the greatest speller out there.
Date: 11/11/08 12:53 pm Title: Airplane Ride
This was very stiff and awkward to read, it was a lot of 'Bill said this then did this.' Which stops it from flowing. I could barely read it.
The ending was cute though.
Oh, and btw, your title is spelt wrong, it's aeroplane, not airplane.
Author's Response: really it's spelt wrong? is that an american canadian thing? cause my word program didn't correct it. sorry you didn't really enjoy it, i'm still learning.
Date: 11/11/08 08:16 am Title: Airplane Ride
Awwww I loved it it was cute ur an amazing writer
Author's Response: aw, thank you. :)
Date: 11/11/08 04:50 am Title: Airplane Ride
wow you must use sentance variation. Every sentence followed the pattern of "Bill did this. Bill then did this. Tom did this. Then Bill did this again" o.o
Author's Response: still learning.
Date: 11/10/08 11:36 pm Title: Airplane Ride
hahahahah, i love your endings. they make me laugh. but seriously, if this is the mile high club i want to be a member, but only if it includes bill and tom. well i could live with just bill. actually i could more than live with bill. mmmmmmm.....biiiilllllll. *cough* my bad. lol anyways i loved this it was cute and hot and i can now rest easy with sweet dreams.
Author's Response: lol dont worry I'm a Bill fan too. Love him. Glad you liked it, I really enjoy your reviews they make me happy! :) I'll have another out soon I hope.
Date: 11/10/08 11:16 pm Title: Airplane Ride
You hope we enjoy it? Hmm .. Let's see if I enjoyed it.
DAAAAAYYYYYUUUUUUMMMM!!!!!!!!!
Does that pretty much sum it up??
Author's Response: Hahaha! Glad you liked it! I enjoyed writing this one :) Thanks for always reviewing I appretiate it, makes me wanna write more!
