Date: 11/11/08 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 02
Oh dear , continue Please. It's very good.
Author's Response: Yeah... Bill is not very happy with Gustav right now. Gustav should have given him alot more than a few hours to calm down. Thanks for the compliment too! It is great to know people like my work :)
Date: 11/11/08 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 02
YEEEEE!!! MORE!!
Author's Response: How can I say no to such a simple request? lol Okay Naminette, I'll continue writting as soon as I'm finished replying to the reviews.
Date: 11/11/08 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 02
Gusti's Chibis are absolutely awesome xD
I really like this. Bill/Gusti isn't my fave pairing, but this is really good =]
It's funny, sad, and just...idk. -haha-
Sorry. My brain is a bit too jumbled to leave a proper review, ahaha. But yeah, I really like it.
Author's Response: Yay! Another Chibi lover! I'm not usually a Bill/Gustav shipper either but I'm not against it. It's been fun (if frustrating) to write so far. Jumbled brains are the best. That is what mine is like when I write :P
Date: 11/11/08 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 02
I love Gustav's internal Chibis!!! They're fucking perfect! Although i can't enitrely see him doing it in real life, those lil imaginary devices seem to make the world go 'round when i'm reading this!
And Tom. He's such a pig!
"“Don’t you knock?” Tom demanded, not really caring.
“I’ll knock when you start chewing with your mouth closed.” Georg shot back. Tom stopped mid chomp, pizza bits rolling around disgustingly in his wide open mouth."
This made me cringe in disgusted horror and laugh at the same time. I love to see Tom and Georg ribbing eachother!
You're doing great with this story and hope you keep up the good work!
I don't think you should wait until you hit 20 reviews though- there are so many lurkers that the good fics here don't get enough credit.
However, I will continue to read and review.
Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks for liking The Chibies. I don't think he has them either but you never know in this world. For all we know Gustav could have a Dr. Seuss world in his head. It makes me giggle with delight just thinking about it lol Oh and don't worry about the 20 reviews, himisoko saw to that *mutters about wanting a break and getting less than five hours*.
Date: 11/11/08 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 02
D= UPDATE!
Ish really really really good.
Author's Response: Update? But, but, but.... I wanna break. Please?
Date: 11/11/08 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 02
I really like this story.
poor gustav. poor, poor bill!
seeing (well, reading) him like this just breaks my heart.
-wags finger at gustav- tsktsktsk.
I can't wait for more! ^.^
Author's Response: "-wags finger at gustav- tsktsktsk." I can see The Chibies working this into the story! XD I hope you don't mind I just couldn't stop laughing lol I could just see Onyx and Blue doing this. Who are Onyx and Blue? Wait and find out :P
Date: 11/10/08 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 01
Hahahaha
I was laughing my face off....
Until Bill came into the picture. *cringes* I can't help but to wonder what his reaction actually was....*shakes head* But this is really good! =]
Author's Response: Like I said in the first chapter I wonder if they mind us writing about them too. Their must be a major weirdness factor if they do read any of it lol I'd LOVE to read a fanfic with me in it just so I could laugh, giggle or scream in horror LMAO! XD
Date: 11/10/08 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 01
Oooh Gustav/Bill! Exciting! And what an opportunistic set up ;) I particularly like the interaction between the three (not Bill) AND I looove Gustav's mental images (chibi!Dave dishing out a scolding!XD)
Author's Response: Sorry to say this himisoko but don't get too excited about the Gustav/Bill thing. I have two endings bouncing around in my head. One is the obvious. The other not so obvious. They might not even get together yet. PLease don't hate me :( The Chibies were just meant to be a small thing but they just kind of exploded into a big thing. I like them too. You'll see plenty of them before the end. :)
Date: 11/10/08 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 01
Make it better! Now! ;---;
Author's Response: *Hides under a rock* Im sorry but I can't. At least not for a few chapters. Blame Bill! He's the one angry at him!
Date: 11/10/08 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 01
Go on! I like it already!!!
Author's Response: Okay! Okay! *Mutters about pushy reviewers* lol
Date: 11/10/08 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 01
I am actually scared for Gustav :) Update soon!
Author's Response: Even I'm scared for Gustav lol
Date: 11/10/08 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 01
*googles up* what?! Did not know this! I'm glad he's okay! Eager to read more. :)
Author's Response: Ah HA! I KNEW that someone would read this and not know about the crash. I'm feeling smug with myself now. Very egotistical of me but YAY! I'm helping educate the masses!
Date: 11/10/08 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 01
given that Gusti needs to get guilt tripped to hell and back... well I want to see what Else Bill does...
Author's Response: You actually gave me the push I needed to make this more than a two parter. I figured you're right Mikaiyawa. Gustav is bad and needs to be punished. rnrnChibi Tac gigglesrnrnNot like that you evil little troll!!
Date: 11/10/08 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 01
I was waiting for someone to do Bill's reaction. It seemed to me that no one was taking the opportune moment...hehe. Anyway, this was adorable so far and I loved the image of Bill being pissed off and slapping Gustav. AMAZING! Great job!
Author's Response: I knew that there would be slapping involved when I first thought of the story. Tom didn't seem right and it was a bit too girly for Georg but as soon as I pictured Bill doing it the story just fell into place. So yay Bill for making my job easier!