Date: 08/31/09 08:27 pm Title: You're going to be sore in the morning
That was damn hot for your first shot-bravo!
Author's Response: Awww thank you ^^ Glad that you liked it :)
Date: 04/20/09 05:48 pm Title: You're going to be sore in the morning
Aw, mad brilliant girlie! It was good for your first one.^^
Author's Response: *blushes* Thanks Gavi ^^
Date: 12/10/08 06:54 pm Title: You're going to be sore in the morning
Nice. Very nice I would have never guessed that this was your first try at slash. Very well done! It felt a little empty I find that slash that has a lot of emotion in it usually gets me more turned on, but that's just me. It's a good scene. Be proud.
Author's Response: Aww thanks *hugs* and i am proud, since this ive written another slash fic for a friend and i hope that i'm getting better. XD
Date: 11/08/08 08:36 pm Title: You're going to be sore in the morning
I think I just creamed my pant SHIT!! but this was a kick ass story and I loved the Lemon -gives TheMightyAslan two thumbs up-
Author's Response: *gives two thumbs up back* Thanks for the review, glad you liked it so much XD lol
Date: 11/08/08 07:11 pm Title: You're going to be sore in the morning
Fucking one of the best sex-scene I've EVER read. Really!
I want you to do more of these! :D
Author's Response: One of the best ever?? O__O woooooaaaah thank you! XD *glomps* and dont worry i shall try to write some more soon ;)
Date: 11/08/08 06:56 pm Title: You're going to be sore in the morning
I think it was really good, and the fact that you had it betaed so that there were no mistakes to ruin the flow really did a lot for the story!
I think one can see that it's your first lemon, but that's not in a bad way. It gives room for improvement and I honestly think you're not far from perfection here ,) you just need to make it a little more emotional. I loved the sitting in Tom's lap thing and the hand down Bill's pants in the elevator, those were really good build ups, but after that you kind of slowed it down a bit and took the safe way out, if you know what I mean ,)
but there's nothing wrong with that, and I must say, this fic is ten times better than the first one I wrote xD
I'm looking forward to reading more from you, you've got talent. Just put in more of that orinial stuff I mentioned, it was really good!
much love
lucy
Author's Response: Wow. O.o Thank you so much for your review :) and yeah i know i took the safe way out but i was trying to get it finished before all my art exzam crap came up lol ;) but i hope i will be writing more soon, i'm sure paradox will see to that lol but thank you soooo much *hugs* and i will take your advice to heart. Hopefully the next one will be better XD
Date: 11/08/08 05:53 pm Title: You're going to be sore in the morning
I know I coulda told you thin in the email, but meh.
I think this is brilliant for your first attempt. Its actually brilliant, you did so well for your first lemon! I like your style - a lot!!! And I'm gonna make sure this isn't your last fic (:
Author's Response: Oh no, are you gonna go on at me for aaaaaaaaaggggeeeeess like you did a bit before this one? *covers face and hides* YOU WON'T FIND ME!! But yeah THANK YOU! *hugs* you got me into this and i love ya for it XD
Date: 11/08/08 05:23 pm Title: You're going to be sore in the morning
God!!! That was HOTTTT !!
Nice work!
Author's Response: *blushes* thank you :D glad you liked it