Date: 11/10/08 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 7: Wrong
but they havent even known each other a day!
Author's Response: *wrings hands axiously* I know! Eeeeek!
Date: 11/10/08 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 7: Wrong
CLIFF HANGERRR
I want to know how Bill reacts so bad!
Great job!
Author's Response: Soon, I promise. Thanks for the review!!! =D
Date: 11/10/08 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 6: An Unwelcome Rescue
OMG!!!! I just got kicked back to the beginning and realized that this was it! MORE! MORE MORE! I wanted to eat pizza with Alex and Bill.... :(
Don't leave me hanging.
Author's Response: OK just for that I am going to update this very second. I can't be left hanging so I know how it feels. =D
Date: 11/10/08 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 6: An Unwelcome Rescue
My most hated teacher was Sister Judith at a Catholic School in Buffalo New York. She had the face (and personality) of a pissed off Bulldog. She didn't understand ADHD and was very mean to me. Then my family had to move and she gave me a framed copy of the 23rd psalm and told me that she expected good things from me. It wasn't til I got older that I realized that she was hard on me because she liked me and wanted me to do better. Funny huh?
Author's Response: Wow, that is funny. And touching, I'm tearing up. =D thanks for the review!!!
Date: 11/10/08 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 6: An Unwelcome Rescue
AWWW :D I LOVE where this is going. It's so very cute, but also original. I love the fast updates
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I hate predictable, done-to-death plots so I try to be as original as I can. I might not be able to update as fast in the future, but I will try. =D Thanks so much for the reviews!!!
Date: 11/10/08 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 5: Black-Out
Awww... OK that's where I wanna nap.
You're doing very well here. I like the little twists.
Author's Response: Nap? Thats where I want to LIVE. *smiles at the never-gonna-happen possibilities* =D Thank you so much!!! I do try not to make it too predictable.
Date: 11/10/08 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 4: Q & A
I'll take that chocolate dipped Bill and raise you a Tom covered in whipped cream.
Oh yeah.. I like this chapter too!
Author's Response: Oh you really know what to say to get me hot. Tom covered in whipped cream, licking it off him... YUM. Thanks so much, I'm glad you like it!!! =)
Date: 11/10/08 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 3: Fire and Ice
You've got a wonderful quirky sense of humor and it shows. I like the way you've painted Alex. She's easy to identify with. GO GO GO !!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I really tried to make her as real as possible. Ready, set, and so totally going!!! =D
Date: 11/10/08 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 2: Technical Difficulties
I like the way you see Bill. I'm right there with you. You're good. Keep it up.
Oh and about the End notes.. You're hilarious. Not searching for the blender. A Geisha.
Author's Response: Thank you! I see Bill in tight pants. Who wouldn't like that? =D =D =D Thank you for not searching for a blender. I love all my reviewers and if one of them died by blender I would cry.
Date: 11/10/08 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 6: An Unwelcome Rescue
I hatw that they had to pull them out so soon.But I love that they are at least still spending time together.That's why I continue reading this story.It's amazing!Please give me more before I die! Oh, und I hate my gym teacher.UGH! He is so annoying und...UGH! SKITTLES! o_O I like random.
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I love all these compliments, they make me smile. And laugh. And jump up and down like a jackrabbit on extasy. I will try to keep you alive, but you must hold on a little longer. All gym teachers should die a horrible and painful death. Or they should just be made to do all the stuff they make us do, that would do the trick. =D
Date: 11/10/08 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 1: Curtain Up
Your story is very good. Keep going.
Author's Response: Thank you! =D I'll keep going.
Date: 11/10/08 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 6: An Unwelcome Rescue
oooh, you love random, then i'm your girl! i totally go off on tangents only slightly related tot he subject.
Anyways *I'll try to keep on track somewhat* I'm absolutly adoring this story, whe i first read in the summery that the were trapped in an elevator i was sorta scared youd make that part a short trap, but i am so glad you made it long and ha all those perfect situations happen inside.
its really hard to tell someone that you've never (or havn't in a long time) ha a gf/bf, i know; yet for me its something i've gotten used to tellign people.
it used to be a belief of my family that ateing was wrong, but by the time we (my siblings and i) were allowed to date i had suck myself in my own little shell. so saddly i've never dated, although i had a guy wh thought he was my boyfriend after we talked on msn a few times....that was tough to deal with. *nervous laugh*
Anyways, beautiful prtrayal of Bill, he's lovely in this! and i like Alex's charachter, i love how you escribed he rhair as, """no colour not blond, not brown."""
anyway Love you! *kiss kiss* liek the french do!!!!
paarthea
Author's Response: OMG thank you! My family is always to the point and I seriously needed a shot of RANDOM today. =D I was wondering weather I was even going to make it this long. For a while I was considering just writing a quick, one chapter bit. But then I thought of where I could take it and I just had to continue. Thank you so, so much!rn*kiss kiss* When in Paris, do as the Parisians do! =D
Date: 11/10/08 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 6: An Unwelcome Rescue
Gott. Gott. Gott.
Its so cute!!!
xDDD - Mehr, Bitte!
I luvvvvzzzz it! ^^
Author's Response: Danke! Danke! Danke! =D
Date: 11/10/08 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 6: An Unwelcome Rescue
This story makes me go 'eeeeeh!' with happiness ^^
Author's Response: *going 'eeeeeeh!'* THANK YOU!!! =D
Date: 11/10/08 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 6: An Unwelcome Rescue
d:)okay....I totally hat my geography teacher, who's assignment i am supposed to be doing now........d:)LOVE!!!!!! this is sooooo much better than homework.... that isn't much of a compliment is it....
well it's really good!!! LOVE!!!...d:)!
Author's Response: The mere fact that you bothered to comment is all the compliment i need. =D Thank you so much for the review!!!
Date: 11/10/08 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 6: An Unwelcome Rescue
“Pepper spray? Is it even legal for civilians to carry that?”
Smiling an impish smirk that didn’t match his innocent tone, he responded, “Maybe.”
haha that was cutee
hey they got out! wonder whats nexttt :]]
Author's Response: Thanks! That was one of my favorite parts of this chapter. Thanks for the review!!! =)
Date: 11/10/08 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 6: An Unwelcome Rescue
:3
I feel fuzzy inside!
My mom looked at me funny when I started shouting "OH YEAH! SHE DEDICATED A CHAPTER TO ME!!" then told me to shut up -_-
this chapter made me hungry from some NYC pizza *drools*, but of course, like always I'm super broke and can't hop my butt on the bus to go to the city, lol
The first thing I thought about when you said "Mario's pizza" was SUPER MARIO! Oh god, yes, I am addicted O__O I hear the theme song in my sleep
can't wait for ur next updaaaate
Author's Response: Don't you just love those funny looks you get? Like when I giggle madly at the mention of skittles. =D I will try to update soon. Thanks!!! =)
Date: 11/10/08 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 6: An Unwelcome Rescue
Aw, I was so close to crying when they got out! I didn't want them to split ways! But then they didn't. And all was right in the world. ^_^
And for the record I hate my History teacher very much. =P
Did you know Glass is counted as a liquid? I didn't either. But apparently, if you look at old panes of glass, they're thicker at the bottom: that's cuz it slowly slides down. =]
Author's Response: OMG i almost made someone cry! Sorry.rnI love my history teacher. My math teacher on the other hand...rnI did not know that. Wow, cool. Yay, another random fact to add to my random brain. =D
Date: 11/10/08 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 5: Black-Out
yay i like it :D
Author's Response: yay i'm happy =D thanks for the review!
Date: 11/10/08 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 5: Black-Out
oh my gosh, i don't want the elevator to start working again any time soon, but i guess they'll get hungry soon.
Author's Response: Hee hee. Wow, can you read minds? =D Thanks and I hope you like the next chapter...