Date: 11/12/08 06:00 am Title: Chapter 8: "What I Want to Do"
oh woah that was quick haha.
more pleeeease :]]
Author's Response: More coming. Thanks for the review! =]
Date: 11/12/08 05:36 am Title: Chapter 8: "What I Want to Do"
Honestly, I don't think you're going fast forth, with writing this. Maybe a little, but hey, I like it :'] And I'm sure there isn't just me who thinks that.
Author's Response: Just as long as you like it =) Thanks for the review!! =D
Date: 11/12/08 12:59 am Title: Chapter 8: "What I Want to Do"
OMG!! i'm loving this story! i totally forgot to favorite it last time, so i was sooo excited when i noticed you'd added TWO chapters!!!
i'm actually glad you ha this happen, i know its jsut liek emotions and horomones working on he rright now, but it makes for some pretty interestingsituations.
can't wait for more!
Love you *kiss kiss* like the french do!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it!!! I will update again soon, I promise. Thanks for the review!!! =D
Date: 11/11/08 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 8: "What I Want to Do"
a little fast there bill. you can't fall in love that quickly, and even if you did, how would you know if they weren't lying just so they could brag?
Author's Response: Ah yes, the doubt. That comes up big time in the next chapter, but it does eventually get resolved. Thanks for the review!!! =)
Date: 11/11/08 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 8: "What I Want to Do"
really well written, i laughed out loud at tom on the phone, but with a serious edge that i find hard to take seriously. i hope that the original sarcasm returns (i'm sure it will) and i think this was fun, though maybe a bit far-fetched considering they just met 8 hours prior. love confessions generally wait a bit longer. anyways, lots of laughs and a favorite!
Author's Response: Yes this chapter was a bit more drama and a bit less humor, but the wonderful sarcasm will return once the mood lightens. Thanks for the review and the favorite! =D
Date: 11/11/08 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 8: "What I Want to Do"
I love that quote!! "It is better to have loved than lost than not to be loved at all." by Edgar Allan Poe. Awesome! I think they are going a tad fast though, but it's cool, I kinda understand what they mean. This is so good and keep writing
Author's Response: I love that quote too! Thank you sooo much for the review!!! I love it! =D
Date: 11/11/08 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 8: "What I Want to Do"
Now THAT is what I call passion.
*passes out*
-Aileen :3
Author's Response: Oh no! *tosses water on passed out reviewer* =D Sorry I made you pass out but I'm REALLY GLAD you liked it! Thanks for the review!!!
Date: 11/11/08 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 8: "What I Want to Do"
i do think it's too fast....BUTTTT!! I trust that it will all be revealed later! :) and I'm not complaining that their was some hot action going on! hahaha!! more please!
Author's Response: I swear it will be explained. I put it later on because it is sort of hard to insert detailed explanations when your characters are playing tongue tennis ;) Thanks for the review! =D
Date: 11/11/08 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 8: "What I Want to Do"
Awww...
My 2nd fav het on this site =]
This is totally a good one ^^
I never thought I'd find another het which would not disturb me...Ok I do write het so let's leave them out lol...
I WANT MORE!
GOT IT??
PLEASE PLEASE?!?!
Author's Response: Wow, really? Your second fav het? OMG I am sooo honored thank you, thank you, thank you! I will post more as soon as possible. Thanks for the review! =D
Date: 11/11/08 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 8: "What I Want to Do"
i think it makes perfect sense, especially if she's not a virgin (though i'm not sure)
she needs to feel close to him and sex is the way she is going to get that comfort
at least that's how i took it lol
Author's Response: I'm so glad it makes sense! That was how I imagined she felt too. Thank you soooo much for the review! =D
Date: 11/11/08 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 8: "What I Want to Do"
nice keep going
Author's Response: I totally will! Thanks so much! =D
Date: 11/11/08 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 7: Wrong
omg my heart totally skipped a beat *melts*
Author's Response: *happy tears* Thanks! =)
Date: 11/11/08 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 7: Wrong
Hmmm...I think she loves Bill, but she won't admit it because she's afraid of getting hurt again.Other than that, it was pretty good.NO! It was GREAT! :D I just love this story so much, you don't even know the half of it.I need more.I crave more.Please post the next chapter soon! *hands her skittles* ;)
Author's Response: Aww, thanks! ;) I love that you love it and I will update as soon as I can. Thanks for the review!!! =D
Date: 11/11/08 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 7: Wrong
I really want a pizza now. I mean - REALLY want one. A ham and Bacon one. With extra cheese on top. *droolage*
Loved it, again! I can only imagine how worrying it would be to watch the girl you were sat in an elevator with for hours walk off your phone to have a conversation with your brother. Personally, I'd get quite paranoid. In fact, if I was Alex, I wouldn't have eaten anything; hungry or not.
I tend to embarass myself a lot... =P
Author's Response: Heehee, me too. I really try not to eat in front of other people when I am starving, it's not a pretty sight. Thanks for the reviews, I love them!!! =D
Date: 11/11/08 08:45 am Title: Chapter 7: Wrong
O_O
gaaah , moreee : D
Author's Response: It's coming soon I promise. Thank you for the review! =)
Date: 11/11/08 06:03 am Title: Chapter 7: Wrong
WOW =O Now I get even more curious, which leaves YOU to update more.
Author's Response: =D Will do. Soon. Thanks!!
Date: 11/11/08 01:45 am Title: Chapter 7: Wrong
Uhhhh......
I think I love this story much
Author's Response: My cheeks are hurting I'm smiling so much. =D Thank you!
Date: 11/11/08 12:20 am Title: Chapter 7: Wrong
I know how the whole love thing is when you have been heart broken >.<
But damn girl, thats BILL.
He wont brake a twig!...I dont think so.
xDDD -LoL-
Mehr, Bitte! -Love is in the Air!- ^^
Author's Response: I know! She's so insecure that it's not even funny anymore. Thank you for all your beautiful reviews! I love them!!! =D
Date: 11/11/08 12:16 am Title: Chapter 7: Wrong
i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and I can totally picture bill devouring pizza. so awesome!! more soon!!
Author's Response: Yes the metal image is veeerry nice... =D Thank you sooooooo much for the review!!!!!!!
Date: 11/10/08 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 7: Wrong
eww i hate the crust but LOVE this storie!
Author's Response: YOU HATE THE CRUST?!? Weirdo. Thanks though, I'm sooooo glad you like it!!! =D