Date: 11/07/08 12:08 am Title: Chapter 3: Fire and Ice
and when people who are stuck in an elevator get bored, then next step in their friendship is... making out!
of course. write more, this is great! i love how uncomplicated the plotline is so far. and how great would it be to be stuck in an elevator with someone incredibly handsome?
Author's Response: lmao! I'm writing more as we speak and thanks so much for the review. You may not get exactly what you want in the next chapter but there is a little treat =)
Date: 11/06/08 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 3: Fire and Ice
I like the character... she's seems down to earth and real, not overly emo, but not particularly awesome either; she makes for an nice change in OFC-land
Author's Response: Wow, really? Thanks! That is AMAZING to hear! THANK YOU FOR READING AND REVIEWING! =D
Date: 11/06/08 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 3: Fire and Ice
Awwww!
Thats so cute!
Why dont you pop me into the story and get her out. Im jelouse!
xDDD - MEHR BITTE!
Author's Response: I would love to put you in an elevator with Bill, but Alex had a nasty right hook and she's not leaving without a fight. =D Thanks so much!!!
Date: 11/06/08 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 2: Technical Difficulties
That was really good.
I wish I was stuck with Bill in an elevator. =P
Author's Response: Me too. I was drooling over the thought while I was writing this. =D Thanks for reading and reviewing, it means a lot to me!!!!!!!
Date: 11/06/08 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 1: Curtain Up
It doesn't suck. I like how you include emotion and history. It builds up the character! Post more soon, xox
Author's Response: Thanks a million!!! I'll post more soon, I promise =]
Date: 11/06/08 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 2: Technical Difficulties
GOD I NEED MORE
OR ELSE SOMETHING WILL HAPPEN TO
YOU TONITE IF I DNT GET THE NEXT ONE BY NITE
(what will happen idk i still have to think)
BUT PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE
Author's Response: Wow, I'm getting threats. THIS IS SOOOO COOL!!!!!! Thank you so much. You seem to really like it so I'll try to update before tomorrow. =)
Date: 11/06/08 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 2: Technical Difficulties
PLEASE UPDATE! i have quickly become addicted to this story!
Author's Response: Addicted? W O W. THANK YOU!!!!!! I will update as soon as I can I promise! Thanks!!!=D
Date: 11/06/08 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 2: Technical Difficulties
cutteeee! please keep going
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm soooooo glad you like it and I'll update soon =)
Date: 11/06/08 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 2: Technical Difficulties
i liked it =D i'd love to be stuck in an elevator with bill. except being the creepy person i am, i may start rambling about..i dunno...how much i want to kill pete wentz or what my favorite gum is. that or i'd make him have a random dance party with me and most likely maul him and sexually harass him until the elevator got fixed....
*ahem* aannnyywayyy...this was my halloween, in a nutshell xD
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you like it! Heehee, dance party =) I can imagine Bill going all John Travolta under a disco ball =D btw, I'm going to assume thats FAKE blood.
Date: 11/06/08 11:05 am Title: Chapter 2: Technical Difficulties
I loved it:D
Author's Response: *happy tears* Thank you soooo much!!! =)
Date: 11/06/08 09:13 am Title: Chapter 2: Technical Difficulties
I like the way you're portraying Bill in a casual setting--I can't wait to see what you do with this!
Author's Response: I love it that you like it! =) Thanks for reviewing!!! =D
Date: 11/06/08 08:49 am Title: Chapter 2: Technical Difficulties
Me likey! With a realistic protagonist in a possible situation (even though it is the cliched 'stuck in an elevator' scene), this is altogether a lovely start ^^ One thing: shouldn't the elevator have an emergency phone?
Author's Response: I'm soooo glad you like it! The lack of emergency phone is mentioned later on, but it is explained, don't worry. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!! =D
Date: 11/06/08 08:38 am Title: Chapter 2: Technical Difficulties
hei...
this is all??
u gonna continue ryt??
its nice...
please continue its fucking nice!!
Author's Response: Don't worry there is much more. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I promise to finish it =D
Date: 11/06/08 08:35 am Title: Chapter 2: Technical Difficulties
This is really good, it made meh dance l0l
Author's Response: It made you dance? Wow, I'm trying to picture that... =DrnThanks for reading and reviewing, it means a lot!
Date: 11/06/08 07:41 am Title: Chapter 2: Technical Difficulties
Awesome!
I like it very much so far!
I cant wait for more!
Please, Continue!
xDD
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Thanks for reading and reviewing! =D
Date: 11/05/08 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 1: Curtain Up
Well this seems like its gonna be interesting 8D
Update soon!
Author's Response: Your wish is my command =D Thanks for reviewing, it means a lot =)
Date: 11/05/08 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 1: Curtain Up
noo it doesn`t suckk
i like it! :D
its cute how alex is all awkward and what not haha.
Date: 11/05/08 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 1: Curtain Up
It's really good.
The firstc chapter is good.
Gives us an idea of what Alex is like.
Can't wait til the next one!!
Author's Response: Really good? Aw, thank you sooooooo much!!! I'll update soon =)
Date: 11/05/08 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 1: Curtain Up
noo it doesn`t suckk
i like it! :D
its cute how alex is all awkward and what not haha.
Author's Response: I'm soooo glad you like it!!! Thanks a bunch!!! =)
Date: 11/05/08 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 1: Curtain Up
I hope you continue with this. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Don't worry, I always finish what I start. =) Thank you so much for reviewing!!