Date: 08/22/11 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 17
Oops I forgot to review this one. O.o
Sorry 'bout that. Anyway great job as usual and Kiley reminds me of how I am in the car. Volume up. Bass up. Everything up as far as it can go. That's how you drive ladies and gentlemen!
Date: 08/22/11 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 19
O.o How the heck did her things get there? I guess I'll have to find out in an update won't I? Hurry up and update soon because this is great and I really want to read more.
Date: 08/22/11 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 18
Great job on this chappie. Can't wait to see how it goes at the graveyard...And in Germany....
Date: 08/22/11 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 16
Aww sweetiepie Bill. Okay I think I have forgiven him for being an idiot.
Date: 08/22/11 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 15
Ah yes. Tomi with his head in the gutter. Get yourself out of there boy!
Date: 08/22/11 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 14
I think this was great again and it was so nice of Bill to let her stay with him. And his english is really very good in real life. Now my spanish on the other hand...
Date: 08/22/11 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 13
I was right! *leaves to go seriously injure Kiley's uncle* Good job Bill but you know that violence isn't really the answer. Now I'm a bit curious about her uncle's comment. I'll just have to wait and see....
Date: 08/22/11 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 12
You really don't need to improve it's already great. And uh oh who's coming to ruin Kiley's happy life. If it's who I think it is I'm a gonna punch their lights out.
Date: 08/22/11 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 11
It was great! I was right. Kiley had a little crash and now she's talking about it. Yay for you Kiley! Great job and it was really deep.
Date: 08/22/11 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 10
I think this is very good and I think Kiley is heading for a crash. I dunno if I'm right I'll see soon. Anyway, she really needs to start talking about stuff or she's gonna explode.
Date: 08/22/11 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 9
Thank you that's the Bill we all know and love. Kiley honey it's okay to cry ya know. Great job on this chapter as well and I look forward to reading the rest.
Date: 08/22/11 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 8
I followed the clues but didn't put it together. Well that's just me for you. Great job on this chapter and thank you Bill for finally admitting you were wrong and a stuck up diva! *applauds*
Date: 08/22/11 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 7
Uh oh. Kiley's not feeling to well. What's wrong with her this time?? Stupid fangirls. I've never been to a concert but I'm sure they're like this. Why are the only sane fans the ones who are also writers??
Date: 08/22/11 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 6
No it didn't suck at all. Please tell Bill to cut the crap and say what he's really thinking. You've done a great job exploring this side of him and I commend you on that. As for Kiley, she's a great OC and you're doing so well with her.
Date: 08/22/11 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 5
Yes Bill. You need to think about that because you are a major dick. Poor Kiley again. She deserves so much better than all the shit she's been getting lately.
Date: 08/22/11 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aww poor Kiley. She needs a really big hug right about now. And Bill, get on with the apologies. She deserves it.
Date: 08/22/11 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
Damn you Bill! I really hate him right now! But I really do love your writing. You're amazing!
Date: 08/22/11 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
Tom I'm gonna slap you! Stop with the whiplash emotions! Just make up your mind and go with it! Gahhh! You're writing is great and I'm loving this but I definately want to slap the twins. Luv that you mentioned Within Temptation. I love them and everytime I'm like "hey i'm listening to within temptation" people are like "who?" So it's nice to know someone else knows about them too. Wow this is going on forever so I'll be quiet now. :)
Date: 08/22/11 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
I just started this and I'm planning to finish reading the rest too but I'm loving your start! Poor Kiley. Me hopes Bill will get rid of this assy attitude and be nice. Otherwise I'm a gonnna slap him silly!
Date: 11/21/09 12:28 am Title: Chapter 19
Wow, that's nice she got her things back. right? ahh...killing me with the suspenses. ;)