Date: 11/01/09 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 18
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I stopped reading this for a while because I couldn't stand the suspense of waiting for the next update. I reread the whole thing again and I really really love it. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Please update. PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!!!!!!
Author's Response: I know im so sorry my computer completely died and i only get ten minutes on my parents computer so i'll try to update soon thank you so much for reading
Date: 09/30/09 03:10 am Title: Chapter 18
My god how I love this story!!
Date: 09/30/09 02:46 am Title: Chapter 18
This is a great story, and it was a very good chois to write the "badboy bill thing", it was intresting to reed, I hope you write moor chapters soon :D
Date: 05/02/09 12:29 am Title: Chapter 15
Seems like Bill is falling hard =)
Date: 05/01/09 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 15
That was a cute chapter! Can't wait for the next.
Date: 04/20/09 01:31 am Title: Chapter 14
This story is amazing! Can't wait for more.
Date: 04/15/09 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 14
yay bill is falling in love even if he doesnt realize it.
Date: 03/25/09 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 13
its fine ur life is more important then our entertainment,dont worry about it k
Date: 03/08/09 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 13
Her uncle is such a douche!!! It was a short but sweet chapter hun so you've got nothing to worry about! ^^
Date: 03/08/09 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 13
aw bill decked a guy for her. so sweet
Date: 03/02/09 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 11
if this girl is based on u i didnt mean the screwed up thing in a bad way......sorry if it is u
Author's Response: hey no worries she's not based on me entirely. Basically the name and the location she's from and the fact that I did go to the Sayreville concert all of which I described at the concert was true, minus meeting the band and being abandoned.
Date: 03/02/09 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 12
o i bet it was that piece-o-shit uncle of hers......o her an bill should get together i'd usually say georg or gustav cuz they almost never get any action and this chick is screwed up and would do nicly with one of them but-geo is like an older bro and she doesnt seem interested in gus,tom always gets the girl and,andi well i think andi might be gay.....so bill ya bill is good
Date: 02/27/09 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 12
haha im from Maryland! lol
Date: 02/12/09 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 12
Well then, I've found this to be a refreshing fanfic ^.^ its got some different elements to it that others don't have...I'm glad you are making the relationship between Kiley and Bill develop and grow. To me this is the most important part of a story; character development, without it a story goes nowhere. Your doing a pretty good job at this and I definitely would like for you to continue. I'm intrigued with where this may go. ^_^ Keep up the great writing.
~CirrusCloud~
Date: 02/06/09 12:54 am Title: Chapter 12
omg write more please
Date: 02/03/09 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 11
It was amazing!!! It's so touching! *sniffle*
Date: 02/03/09 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 11
I really like this chapter, and I like that Bill and Kiley are getting closer.
I can't wait for more.
Date: 02/03/09 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 11
idea for ur idk how to follow..
have her have a peaceful sleep.
maybe have her sister find her.
there lies new drama in which
you could make draw out
for a long period of time.
i can help if u need any
Author's Response: thanx i was kinda heading towards the sister thing the next chapter is already in the making.