wow. awesome! I loved it! :)

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! :D

He’d reveled in the feeling for the last few moments, but now the sand was starting to burn his feet, and he hop-skipped to the clear water lapping at the shore. He giggled at the thought of how silly that must have looked – lol we’ve all done that!!!

There wasn’t a single person, jet-ski or boat in sight. – nice!!!

Bill watched the blue and orange fish dart back and forth in the shallow water of the pool, and then shook his head with a grin, realizing he must look as if he were watching a tennis game. - *grins* funny

He scooted onto it and wiggled to situate himself, grimacing a little at the slight ache the pressure of his weight caused. He blushed a little as he remembered the cause of the ache, and a smile played upon his lips. - *gasp* lol

The twins had reserved a whole section of this tiny island, and Bill was desperate not to hear another voice besides his brother’s. – beautiful!

“God…” Bill adjusted his swim trunks, pulling the leg down a little. His cock had begun to twitch at the thought of Tom’s voice, and Tom’s…
Breath quickening, Bill palmed his cock softly through the blue and white nylon of the trunks. After this morning, he was a little surprised that he was even able to get hard again, but thoughts of that only made his dick harder. - *grins* naughty boys!

Suddenly, Bill’s serene little alcove seemed rather lonely. Time to make his way back to Tom, he thought, and he groaned a little as he palmed himself – lol run Bill run!!!

when he got close enough to spot the thin line of saliva that stretched from his twin’s bottom lip to the plush towel under his head. – ewww!!!

As cute as Bill found the fact that his brother was so dead-out tired that he drooled in his sleep, he knew that Tom would be mortified by it, so he took care of it so Tom wouldn’t have to know about it. – ha ha ha!!!

“I don’t know, I don’t have a watch.” Bill’s voice trailed off and broke when he spotted the faint white outline of his hand imprinted in the pinkened skin of Tom’s shoulder.
“Oh…” Bill breathed, his eyes wide. - *gasp and grimace* god it’s too late isn’t it?! Oh god!!!

Bill ran to the kitchenette and grabbed the crystal pitcher out of the cupboard. – clever boy!

Bill buried his nose under the thick root of that cock, and breathed deeply of the slightly sweaty skin he found there. He licked at that fragrant spot and Tom whimpered above him – very hot!

“This is gonna be cold.” Bill paused with the pitcher poised and tipped right above Tom’s pink shoulders.
“I know.”
“But we have to cool your skin…” The rays from the skylight glinted off the water and crystal. –aloe works well!

There it was, exactly what he was looking for. Bill held up the tube of aloe gel and checked the date. Yep, still good. – good!

Yes, he had told Tom to go lie on their bed and wait for him. He hadn’t considered how damn hot that would look, or how the sight would make his cock jump in anticipation. – um can -_- Bill be the top here?

Bill began to kiss and lick his way down the pink skin of Tom’s back, just barely brushing the skin, licking so very carefully, stopping right above that coveted crease. He watched Tom’s fingers grab at the blanket, fisting it hard. He dipped his tongue down just a little further, slipping it down almost to Tom’s entrance. – yummy!!!!

He sighed a hot breath onto that little bud and sat up between Tom’s legs again. The whine of frustration that left his twin had Bill grinning as he twisted off the cap of the aloe and squirted a large dollop into his palm.
“You…” Tom’s voice was unsteady, and he had to try again. “You are such a fucking tease, Bill.” – ha ha ha awesome!

Tom made a noise somewhere between a grunt and a groan, and he thrust his hips up at Bill’s mouth. He grabbed the squirming man’s hips, though, and held him down as he fucked him with a hard tongue. – mmmmhhh hot!

“God, yes. Gimme more.” The desperate tone had Bill’s stomach tightening, his cock so hard it hurt. He slid the fingers in and out of his brother a few more times before slipping another finger in. – yum!!!! A Bill Top!

Bill always knew exactly what Tom needed. He snaked an arm under his twin writhing beneath him, and wrapped his hand around Tom’s leaking cock, causing the dreadhead to bite his lip and rise up on his hands, thrusting hard first into Bill‘s hand then onto Bill‘s cock. – mmmmhhhh so hot!!!

“Silly Tomi. You know I’m here to help when you feel the burn.” - tttbbbpphhh

Author's Response: I know, I know. The last line was cheesy as hell. I kinda enjoy writing them goofy lines, though. They're young guys; they can't be serious all the time. I'm glad you liked the rest, though. I think that was my first Top!Bill and man, I had fun with him. Thanks for reading and for the amazing review, as always! <3

Unf. Top!Bill, my ultimate fav. Loved this.

Author's Response: Top!Bill has his own flavor, doesn't he? Oh, it's it's yummy *nods*

I'm glad you liked it, thanks!

*freaks out and fans her face* damn.... I wish I had a sun burn...

Author's Response: Damn, I know! I would put up with the burn for a while, if that's what I got for it!

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :)

It was cute, and how, and wow.

I must say, I'm not a fan of Bill topping, but this, this was more than good. Usually I cringe, squirm and turn away, but I didn't with this, so much better than any other Top!Bill.

Ohhh, rimming, I'm a sucker for it!
God this was good.

Author's Response: Ah, thank you! I knew that Bill topping wouldn't be to everyone's taste, but I think it's good to be different, too. And because you usually don't like Top!Bill, I'm especially happy that you didn't cringe and turn away :P Thanks for reading this, I do appreciate your opinion :)

YES! BILL TOPPED! *dances*

I looooooooved this!!

Author's Response: LOL Thanks! :)

Holy shit girl this was AMAZING, pure bliss..tomi bottoming, I just died and went to twincest heaven. Everything about this story was perfect I'm in love with it! thank you thank you thank you! *bows to you*

Author's Response: MFT! *tacklehugs you* I didn't see you last night or I'd have run this by you, but I'm so glad you read it today. I hoped you might like it ;P You're so very welcome, and thank you for everything, girl! :D

I love your writing, it's amazing, only bottom Tom ruined this for me. I was so into it until Bill started eyeing Tom's ass. Sigh. :(

Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry you don't enjoy Top!Bill. Perhaps I should have provided a warning. I'm glad you enjoyed the writing, in any case. Thank you so much for reviewing this, I do appreciate it. :)

*is feeling the burn*
That was yum. I'm glad I read it. I don't read a lot of twincest, but I always think of sex between the twins as awkward because neither of them really know what they're doing, but you made them seem really experienced and for me, that was a nice surprise! Nice job. Though - I would've much preferred a bath to a shower and more aloe-action. BUT HEY! I'm not complaining.

Author's Response: I so love when a reader tells me they don't read a lot of whatever pairing that story happens to be about, but then they end up enjoying it anyways. That thrills me no end, because I really feel like I've accomplished something. So thank you so much for reading this, and for the wonderful review. I do appreciate it.

I thought about a bath, and more aloe play would have been nice, yes, but truthfully, I don't think Bill could hold out any longer. ;D Thanks again!

*O* ohmagosh. That was HOT. Bill on Top is always welcomed!

Btw I spotted a couple mistakes, I'll send you the doc through msn ;)

Author's Response: You know, I didn't realize there was so much love for Top!Bill here! That's okay, I had a lot of fun writing it, so I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

I got your email and I think I fixed the mistakes. Thank you so much for spotting those for me, and thank you for your kind words. *hugs*