Reviews For Feel the Burn
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Reviewer: Remy Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/08 07:46 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow, such nice visuals--with Bill pouring the water over Tom, and the way Tom spread out on the bed. The whole thing was smoking hot, plus bottom!Tom always rocks my world. *drools*

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! The visuals are fun to write, even more fun let them play out in my head. I'm happy to share. Thanks for reading this, it means a lot to me :)

Reviewer: Saol Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/08 07:36 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm usually not much for Bill topping, but this was hot ;)

Author's Response: Coming from the author of one of THE hottest twincest fics ever (Inferno), that is quite a compliment! I'm not usually one for Bill topping, either, but it just wouldn't have worked the other way. I'm glad you enjoyed it, after all. :)

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/08 07:31 am Title: Chapter 1

That was AMAZING, I'll never think of the beach the same!!

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear it! I think sun and sand can be such a sensual experience (though not sand in the wrong places!) Thanks so much for reading this, it means a lot to me :)

Reviewer: Tamara Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/08 06:32 am Title: Chapter 1

Aww, brotherly love. *dirty thoughts* Hee-hee

OMFG!! DOM!Bill, DOM!Bill, DOM!Bill, DOM!Bill!!!!

O_O

Soooooo fucking sexy!! I almost stopped breathing.

*dies*

Author's Response: Tamara, you seriously make me giggle. Thank you so, so much. I want you to know that your reviews mean a lot to me, and I'm so happy that you liked this. :)

Reviewer: Akuji Seyyuki Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/08 06:03 am Title: Chapter 1

god I know I like it -fans self- damn that's hot and I just know that Lucy will like it. ^_^.

Author's Response: *grin* It seems she did, and I'm so pleased that you liked it, too! Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: firelucy Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/08 04:59 am Title: Chapter 1

Yes…Yes…YES

Oh my holy fucking God, YES

OO

It was…ooooooh *whimpers* so, so, so good!

Oh my God, I almost can’t breathe, or at least my heart rate has gone down and, and…OH MY GOD

Okay, I’m gonna try, although believe me it’s hard, to get some coherent thoughts out here.
You know how much I love you for writing twincest
And Bill topping…YES
And Tom whimpering while Bill is topping…HELL YES

Okay, bird talk at the beginning, really cute and just what I would expect from Bill xD
Tom drooling…awww, only he can make that cute (only you can write that cute)
Tom staring at the shower…lol, it was almost as if I could see his face ,p poor shower
LOVED the teasing little moves Bill did with his fingers and Tom’s crease, he’s a little minx all right ,)
And your description of Tom on that bed…I thought I was gonna burn up girl, that was…it was naughty and hot as hell and my panties caught fire!
Bill licking Tom…hunhunhun *whimpers* yeah, no coherent thoughts about that, my brain melted
And then Bill fucked him…*tears in eyes* the most beautiful moment in your writing career darling, that was…it was perfection!
And cuteness in the end, I love cuteness in the end !

All in all, this fic was perfect. Tom bottoming is hot, Tom wanting to bottom…that’s just sinful! (and may I add just the right kind of wrong) loved the characterizations, loved the setting, LOVED the sex !!! Just perfect !

Okay, gonna stop rambling.
This is proof as to why I want you to write twincest, because no one writes it quite like you do!

Love you so, so much girl
Yours ever luce

(and you owe me a new pair of panties)

Author's Response: Oh Lucy, dearest girl, your reviews make me grin so hard it makes my cheeks hurt. And then I come back twelve times a day to read them over again. Thank you so, so very much.

I was just the tiniest bit nervous about this, I wasn't sure if I could make Bill a convincing top and make Tomi a little vulnerable but still manly. I'm so glad that I was successful enough to melt your panties xD

As for no one writing twincest quite like I do, well perhaps that's true, I do have my own style. BUT, no one inspires me quite like you do, Lucy girl. I wish I could capture the sweetness that you seem to have bottled somewhere and then pour liberally over your words. Many times, your stories make me see the twins in the most beautiful, loving light, and it actually inspires me to think of things like this story. So I thank you so much for sharing your work with us, and with me.

I will email you later, but until then, biggest hugs to you! Love you so... <3

Reviewer: Luna8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/08 04:24 am Title: Chapter 1

It's 3 am and my throat is killing me but OMG that dulled the pain and made me happy!!!! You know how much your twinage makes ME burn! LoL

Author's Response: Aw, Luna girl, I'm sorry you're still ill. Thank you so much for pre-reading bits of this for me, I do appreciate your input! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the final product. *hugs*

Reviewer: Velius Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/08 04:06 am Title: Chapter 1

Damn I won't look at aloe the same way ;)

Author's Response: It would be kinda kinky to get a little excited the next time you get a little sunburn and have to use aloe. The thought makes me giggle. I'm glad you enjoyed this, thanks for reviewing! :)

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