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Reviewer: coolandfresh Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/12 03:37 am Title: Final thoughts for a beutiful soul

You made me cry my eyes out ! This was beautiful!:'(

Reviewer: tamahav Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/18/09 12:01 pm Title: Final thoughts for a beutiful soul

Every time i read one of your stories I almost cry. and one I actually will start crying and my keyboard will start to spark and then I'll die and it will be all your fault!LOL!

Reviewer: Loran Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/09 12:27 pm Title: Final thoughts for a beutiful soul

I cried a bit at the end there:'(
Well, have to say something, I study chemestry, and what I know about Cyanide, is, it gives a heart attac, like, a heart attac, not blood and feever, also, there are no signs of Cyanide in your blood, it's imposible to trace it, thats why people use it, it gives a heart attac, and there is no poison signs. You see, they disapear, so, it would have looked like he had a heart attac, in a early age. But well, I know this, becus, I'm a sience and chemestry geek....

Author's Response: Umm yeah I didn't really think of that... I was like hmmm I need a poison and that was the first thing that popped into my head... opps oh wellrnrnI'll remember that thanks

Reviewer: Doodleroo Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/09 08:50 am Title: Final thoughts for a beutiful soul

OH U JUST HAD TO MAKE ME CRY DIDNT U! :(

that was amazingg :O!!

-.-

Author's Response: I'm sorry,rnrnBut I'm glad you liked it

Reviewer: Risu-chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/09 10:49 pm Title: The last first show

i cried like a little baby in this chapter.

can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you lked it

Reviewer: lovebillsodealwithit Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/19/09 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 12

awwww adorable srry i havent read this lately i guess i have just been busy

Reviewer: lovebillsodealwithit Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/08 09:40 pm Title: Pathetic Bill and his purple underwear

awwww poor bill and im starting to get suspicious of those doctors........ o and plzzzzzzzzz update soon

Reviewer: Kyara Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/08 06:44 pm Title: first concert

oh nooo sad sad sad!!!

Reviewer: Maddie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/04/08 01:08 pm Title: first concert

:O
More!

Reviewer: Risu-chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/08 07:43 pm Title: On tour

OMG WOW IS ALL I CAN SAY THIS STORY IS FUCKING AMAZING I WASNT EXPECTING THAT BUT JUST WOW YOU'RE AN AMZING WRITER

Author's Response: Thanks XD

Reviewer: Kyara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/08 01:39 pm Title: "It's called an aeroplane."

oh-oh... is she in danger? O.O

ooh the boys are so cute with her =) x3

Reviewer: Maddie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/08 01:02 pm Title: "It's called an aeroplane."

Loved it

Reviewer: Nuclear_Glitter Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/16/08 05:38 am Title: Jenifer May Kaulitz

awww im so sad, why couldnt they just get the fans to adopt them :'( those poor kids, But thank fully home of them is ok, but still its sad. Although i hope you continue and we get to see her life and the boys'

Reviewer: Maddie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 11:15 am Title: Jenifer May Kaulitz

That would've been interesting...if tokio hotel took everyone with them homexD
But I envy that little girl!
She has four amazing dads:O

This should be interesting..
Update!

Reviewer: Kyara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 08:45 am Title: Jenifer May Kaulitz

oooooooooooooooooooooooooh^^ so cute!!! Papa Kaulitz xD x3

Reviewer: Dianirah Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/08 08:33 am Title: Forgotten Children

I think your shoukd let Bill take them all home ;)good story please continue

Reviewer: Kyara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/08 04:29 am Title: Forgotten Children

aaaw, th with is such a cute thought! great chap x3

Reviewer: icequeenqt170 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/08 03:22 am Title: Forgotten Children

aw I like alot=)

Reviewer: icequeenqt170 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/08 10:24 pm Title: So Africa isn't like it is in Lion King?

lol more bitte!

Reviewer: Nuclear_Glitter Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/05/08 08:08 am Title: So Africa isn't like it is in Lion King?

haha its kinda amusing so far, i know its gonna get sadder so im enjoying the humor while i can, but i am very excited for this story, i know im gonna just love it to pieces :D update soon please :D

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