Date: 01/11/08 11:51 am Title: Chapter 6
wow!! i love this chapter, the story keeps getting better and better! please write more soon. hopefully see you soon too! lol
Author's Response: WE WILL MEET!!! and i'm glad u liked it- notice some of ur ideas in there?
Date: 01/11/08 11:12 am Title: Chapter 6
really nice story update soon :));)
Date: 01/11/08 09:58 am Title: Chapter 6
Graet Story
Plz write more soon =)
:-P
Date: 01/03/08 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
OOO! i loved that! very good and very well written! u have to write more sometime!! preferably sometime soon
Author's Response: WOOOP!! glad u liked!!!!
Date: 01/03/08 10:43 am Title: Chapter 5
XD i bet bills really good at basket ball XD more soon yeah?
Author's Response: oh MOST definatley. *growls* certainly more to come!!
Date: 01/02/08 03:20 am Title: Chapter 4
:D,wery good! write more soon:P
Author's Response: i will do don't worry ^-^
Date: 12/29/07 10:49 am Title: Chapter 3
This chapter was funny, and Neil cracks me up. If he feels that way about Andreas then he should just come out and say it. I wonder how Andreas really feels about the boys, if he were to be honest with himself. And it seems that Bill has become attached to Andreas. I find that interesting, especially with what you've said happened in their other schools and Andreas fits the profile of the bullying.
All in all nice chapter.
Date: 12/29/07 10:44 am Title: Chapter 2
Interesting twist. You've got me wondernig if Andreas is being nice because he's genuinely interested or because he's setting them up again. I guess I'll find out in the next chapter.
Date: 12/29/07 10:41 am Title: Chapter 1
They were baggy, and doing NOTHING for his figure.
Probably my favorite line in the chapter.
“ Ah. There you are.” The teacher said. “ I won’t bother introducing you to the rest of these idiots. They’ll find out for themselves.”
Wow. Insane much? Why does the teacher get to act like that? Weird. Nice start.
Date: 12/26/07 08:39 am Title: Chapter 3
cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: WOOP!!! u likkle hipper you!!!!
Date: 12/12/07 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
LOL
"So are you guys like - related or something?"
"You could say that."
I like the fact that they didn't get angry about getting detention...
Author's Response: lol, than yoooouuuu!!
Date: 11/20/07 09:55 am Title: Chapter 1
Great story !
I especially liked the * Fwump !*
=)
Author's Response: anks! more *fwumps!* to come!
Date: 11/19/07 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
You got me. Please continue.
Author's Response: don't worry. will do!!