Date: 11/05/08 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 2: Because he loves me
aww thats so sad
i need the next chapter please :D
Author's Response: yeah, I know... I'm one of a kind: I like sad...rnworking on the next chap!
Date: 11/05/08 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 2: Because he loves me
Okay, firstly, I LOVED THE CHAPTER. Even though it was really sad, I still think you're doing really good and can't wait until the next one.
I did see a couple mistakes, one of them being were Tom said "I'm making homework." For future reference, instead of making you would say doing.
Apart from that, the rest were just common mistakes. Have you thought about getting a beta reader? They could help you if you have any mistakes (unless you already have one and they overlooked it.)
ANYWAYS, I can't wait until the third chapter, so update soon! :)
Author's Response: thank you so much! that's so nice =)rnoh, okay, didn't know that I guess ^^ I'll change it, thanks for telling me =)rnyou, I thought about it, but I was like 'as long as it appears without any help, I'd rather keep it that way' ^^ sometimes Lupe betas for me, but I was too lazy to ask her ;)rnworking on it! don't have much yet, but it will come =)
Date: 11/05/08 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 1 : The Fag-Incident
It's really good so far!
I'm actually a bit shocked it's Tom instead of Bill, but it's different and I like it :)
Author's Response: thank you! yes, I know it's different, I like writing about Tom better, but I don't know why =) mom said it is because I identify myself more with Tom than with Bill... anyway ^^ glad you liked it!
Date: 11/01/08 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 1 : The Fag-Incident
I liked it. :3
Is there more soon?
Author's Response: thanks! Yeah, I'm writing on chapter two. it's almost finished I guess, so I hope it's here soon =)
Date: 11/01/08 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 1 : The Fag-Incident
omg i like this
so much ?
Author's Response: thanks! more is coming soon (I hope ^^)
Date: 11/01/08 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 1 : The Fag-Incident
OMK!!!!! Waag het niet om Bill te laten denken dat ie dat ook echt wil!!! Enneh, hebbik ook contact met jou in dit verhaal?
Schrijf door, zussie, ik trappel!
Author's Response: haha ^^ je zult wel zien, het tweede hoofdstuk is bijna af :) mjah, zoiets, geloof ik. ik ben er nog niet helemaal uit, maar ik geloof dat wij eerst waren zoals we in RL zijn, en dat jij dan Tom mijn mailadres hebt doorgespeeld of zoiets ^^