Date: 06/24/12 11:12 pm Title: My Brain Cannot Take It
toxic, britany spears. :) please write more chapters!! or can i write them for you!
Date: 03/27/10 06:10 pm Title: My Brain Cannot Take It
I really do like the idea of this fic
Date: 08/03/09 05:59 pm Title: Toxic
Hey, this is great! Make more!! Pwease! I want update now! Now now now!! :D
lol well yeah, pwease!!!!!!!!! Pweaaaaase!
Date: 04/07/09 01:59 pm Title: My Brain Cannot Take It
Chapter one was from Britney Spears - Toxic :D OMG, I watched that video too much xD Lolz xD I love this!!! I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: thank you for the review! and you're correct ;] but im sorry to tell you that it might take a while for an update because i want to finish the story before i post anymore! sorry!
Date: 01/06/09 05:34 pm Title: My Brain Cannot Take It
its good so far!
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 01/06/09 02:38 am Title: My Brain Cannot Take It
Ha I liked the update!
Poor Tom, he must really be fed up. D:
So he's really gonna run away?
Great Update!
More really Soon???
And I'm gonna take a wild guess and say that chapter one is based off cute is what we aim for's video for curse of curves cause they both get poisoned in the end. xD
Author's Response: aww thank you for the review :) and actually the chapter was based of off britney spear's video for toxic. but good guess =]
Date: 12/24/08 05:14 pm Title: Toxic
oh, i know!!!! it's the end of toxic by britney spears....not tat u told me or anything....*whistle*
Author's Response: lol ;)
Date: 12/24/08 02:08 pm Title: My Brain Cannot Take It
music video O_O oh well, tomi is gonna fail miserably at first...HAHAHA!!! bi andi kraks me up!!!! d:)
Author's Response: aww thank you for the review =] and the music video that chapter 1 is based off of is the end of toxic by britney spears ;]
Date: 12/24/08 01:04 pm Title: My Brain Cannot Take It
Want mw to leave a review and you write once in a month if you go on like that I'm not gonnna leave any rewievs xP
Author's Response: sorry, i will try to update more often! thank you for the review, though. :]
Date: 12/24/08 12:03 pm Title: My Brain Cannot Take It
Tom is so clueless it's funny! xD
Sorry...No idea what the video! >
Author's Response: thank you so much for the review! i was getting worried because over 150 people have read chapter 2 so far and i only got 1 review for it! so thank you =]rnrnand chapter 1 is based off of the ending of toxic by Britney spears =]
Date: 12/23/08 06:55 pm Title: My Brain Cannot Take It
I like it =]
Author's Response: thank you =]
Date: 11/15/08 12:49 pm Title: Toxic
So cool! I'd love it!!!)) ^__^ Bill is amasing! He's ALWAYS on top? Yes!!! I love cute little passive Tomi)))^__^
Ou.... Would ever update it?????
Author's Response: hello, thank you for the review :] and i have more written, but i just dont have the time to type it! :[ but it should be up soon, when i get the time =)rnrn
Date: 11/03/08 10:02 am Title: Toxic
I hooked also. I just loved the idea of Bill as a spy with his pink glittery gun ;)
Please update soon :)
xx
Date: 11/02/08 09:02 am Title: Toxic
Oh, god! I want more! Really good! x33
Please update VERY soon! (a)
Date: 11/01/08 11:44 pm Title: Toxic
First I want to say that the last sentence totally made this chapter. xD. I loved it.
Secondly, I'm hooked already. I'm really looking forward to seeing where this will go.
Third, Bill is absolutely amazing with his black and pink motorcycle and his rhinestone'd gun. I can see it almost too clearly.
Date: 11/01/08 08:51 pm Title: Toxic
LOL!! secret agent Bill~~ *cue 007 music* XDDD
Date: 11/01/08 08:02 pm Title: Toxic
haha very cute!
xDDD sounds promising. :]
More soon?
Date: 11/01/08 07:46 pm Title: Toxic
lmao!wowzerzz..bill as a spy..=P
can't wait for next chapter=D
Date: 11/01/08 03:50 pm Title: Toxic
Good. It's seems interesting. Please update soon
Date: 11/01/08 02:22 pm Title: Toxic
I like it! O_O .. well, except the motorcycle. whenever I think of motorcycles and Bill, I think of the one he has in my story... all shiny and black, with a shiny black helmet and various things airbrushed onto it XD I know, totally stupid, but ehh.. :P
the gun made me giggle