Date: 11/01/08 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 01: A Scream in the Night
This is a really good Idea! I'm looking forward to reading more of it! :D
Date: 11/01/08 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 01: A Scream in the Night
you have a good plot here keep going ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you, I definately will kleep going. (:
Date: 11/01/08 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 01: A Scream in the Night
next chapter please..the haunting is going to be good!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'll try get the next chapter up in the next week or two.
Date: 11/01/08 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 01: A Scream in the Night
Well, I don't care if you update slowly, as long as you update. This gave me chills. To put it bluntly, I want more.
Author's Response: I will update, believe me. Once I start something I have to get it done. Glad you like it. :]
Date: 11/01/08 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 01: A Scream in the Night
Your'e of to a really good start.
Author's Response: Thankssss.
Date: 11/01/08 09:47 am Title: Chapter 01: A Scream in the Night
Aaaw! Don't be shy! It's awesome! =D
Is this your first fic? It's super awesome!!!!
You write vividly and I could see it before my very eyes. ^_^
I LOVE IT! And I can't wait for the next chapter!! =D
Author's Response: Haha no, I write alot but end up junking it because it isn't good enough, or doesn't turn out the way I want or something. x]
Date: 11/01/08 08:13 am Title: Chapter 01: A Scream in the Night
Great story :D I love it ^^ I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Author's Response: Thanks ^-^ I'll try update as quick as possible.
Date: 11/01/08 06:49 am Title: Chapter 01: A Scream in the Night
i love it! pls write more
Author's Response: Thanks. ^^
Date: 11/01/08 06:31 am Title: Chapter 01: A Scream in the Night
i likee , but is he 19 or 18 cas it says both ?
ty veri much x
Author's Response: 19, sorry. thats what happens when I edit stuff at midnight. ._.
Date: 11/01/08 04:12 am Title: Chapter 01: A Scream in the Night
OMG! when i read the summary i shivered already...Something in the few sentences awoke my interest. I'm not too much in paranormal fics, especially if is too dark.This is the first fic ever that frightened me so much. My heart is still racing and images keep flashing in my mind. I watch too much japanese horror movie i guess...They love hauting topic lol like "the grudge" adapted in american version too or "the eye". The singing Tom heard creeped me out, but the scream was...I'm shivering still. I don't know if i'll read more of this, i was freaking afraid from the first word to the last. But you know, I love horror movies.I love them because i can't stand to watch them.Doesn't make sense eh? That's why, i want to read more of this one.I guess i like to be afraid and watch throught my fingers on my face XD.But i assure you, this is very well writen and i can tell you know what you are doing and where you want this story to go. Plus it is very original.
One thing: in the second sentence, i think of the second part of the chapter, you say tom's eighteen. he's nineteen in the rest of the chapter so i guess you made a little mistake.
"Review or no more, though. "
please, don't say something like that.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Yeah, sorry for the mistake. Im retarded. ;)
Date: 11/01/08 03:53 am Title: Chapter 01: A Scream in the Night
It's a great start! Wow. I can totally imagine the room Tom's in. I'm not sure why, but I can imagine him sitting in this really dark room - not lit at all, for some weird reason. Haha :)
Anyway. It's a really interesting start! Sort of creepy. In a good way, of course. Please update sooon :) Stay home on weekends! :D Haha, I'm kidding.
Ohkay I can't wait. More soon! :)
Author's Response: Thanksss. If I could stay home on weekends, I would. ;)
Date: 11/01/08 01:58 am Title: Chapter 01: A Scream in the Night
I like it, but I dont want Bill to be a ghost D:
Author's Response: Then... pretend he's real? x]
Date: 11/01/08 01:49 am Title: Chapter 01: A Scream in the Night
So far...soo geil ;)
Author's Response: Thanks, love. (:
Date: 11/01/08 01:28 am Title: Chapter 01: A Scream in the Night
Aww, don't be shy about posting, darling. This is quite good for the first chapter.
I'd be out of that apartment so friggen fast if I were Tom. I wouldn't have made it through the night, siriusly. D:
Author's Response: Hahaha same. Unless I knew it was Bill haunting me. lawl.
Date: 11/01/08 01:23 am Title: Chapter 01: A Scream in the Night
I liked it! I love good ghost stories :D *grabs popcorn* More, please?
Author's Response: More soon, hopefully. (: