Date: 10/31/08 07:07 pm Title: Bill - The Hell That Is My Life
ohh. i'll be intrested in seeign how this one turns out, as it is quite different to others on here.
I like the... something... of the last line. Can't think of the word. XD.
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Author's Response: Poignant? Is that the word?
Date: 10/31/08 05:56 pm Title: Bill - The Hell That Is My Life
*blinks*
Omg. Those fat, lazy fuckers!! -glares-
That was just horrible! *poor Bill!!!*
Oh, and I TOTES LOL'd at the part where Bill was soo happy about the fact that his father was just one step away from death...
but sad b/c his mom still had a bit of time left xD It's mean, yeah, but they're assholes. Anyway, I really like it so far. Uhhh...more soon!! =]
Author's Response: Mhm, they're not the nicest are they?
Lol, it needed a little bit og lightness in all that drama!
More asap, chuck!
Date: 10/31/08 04:07 pm Title: Bill - The Hell That Is My Life
Those FUCKERS!!!!
*beats them with a baseball bat*
No one mistreats Billa like that and gets away with it!! Bill should just leave. Does be have any friends he can to stay with?!
I can't wait til he meets Tomi. :3
Then things will be better.
Author's Response: Bill will do something about it in the future. Don't worry. Tom will be arriving in the next installment :)
Date: 10/31/08 02:19 pm Title: Bill - The Hell That Is My Life
More
Author's Response: sure thing.
Date: 10/31/08 01:14 pm Title: Bill - The Hell That Is My Life
Author's Response: yay!
Date: 10/31/08 12:53 pm Title: Bill - The Hell That Is My Life
omg. bill's parents are so evil!
please post more soon!
Author's Response: yerp, they are. i will!
Date: 10/31/08 11:40 am Title: Bill - The Hell That Is My Life
Okay so you said it wouldn't make me cry, that it wouldn't be emotional but dude, you are so wrong.
That last line just got me, I already feel sorry for Bill, and already I can't believe his parents arrogance...They can't even pour there own drinks?
Ugh, I cannot wait for Tom to swoop into this and save the day, but I'm sure that Bill has to suffer much more before we see that.
I'm looking forward to more, I'm already attached to this, please update soon muffin.
You rock! xxxx
Author's Response: Well, i wasn't sure, but i'm sorry it made you cry! *hands tissue*
Nope, they're fat asses who are too lazy for even that. Yeah, Tom's not joining him yet, and even when he does it won't be straight away.
Aww, i'll try and update asap :)
heh, thanks! x