Date: 12/24/08 12:40 pm Title: Courageous Cedar
Okay that wasn't scary. *relieved* That was hot. And now I'll have to wait 3 weeks to find out how it will continue! *cries*
Oh well, Everyone deserves a rest... I'll miss you! *waves*
Date: 12/24/08 11:52 am Title: Courageous Cedar
God damnit. I hate when something like that happens, and then the person wakes up. -__-"
Anyways, I don't trust Gustav. Like, at all.
Guess I'll have to wait a couple weeks to find out what's coming! *sigh*
Date: 12/22/08 05:56 pm Title: Cleansing Clove
Another wonderful written chapter. It was nice to read the city-part because they have hardly joyful moments in their young life . The end is very alarming and left me worried. I wish you two a merry Christmas and relaxing ,very nice holidays :D!
Date: 12/14/08 07:28 pm Title: Cleansing Clove
Uh oh, I'm getting nervous for the twins, and you just -had- to end on a cliffie like that! *wails all dramatic-like* 'Always leave them wanting more,' isn't that how it goes? It's a shame that such a great shopping day had to go and be ruined by this thing they saw at the end. Bill was so happy before... You really know how to get their emotions into the story. I hope everything turns out okay for them!
Date: 12/13/08 10:18 pm Title: Cleansing Clove
I love the blooming relationship between the boys. It's not abrupt and unrealistic, it's developing very nicely :)
I love this fic, unf.
Date: 12/13/08 05:39 pm Title: Cleansing Clove
Oooh. This story is so fun!
I really want the next chapter now... 8D
Date: 12/13/08 09:39 am Title: Cleansing Clove
Oh gooooottttttt!!!!! *freaks out*
You're seriously scaring the sh*t out of me... I can't even enjoy the blooming romance properly... ;_;
Can't wait for the next part!
Date: 12/13/08 06:28 am Title: Cleansing Clove
Aw man, you're killing me. This is why I hardly ever read unfinished fics from the two of you. *whines* Ah well. I love this. Now what's there?
Date: 12/13/08 04:46 am Title: Cleansing Clove
This has good, good feelings. Delicious.
Date: 12/13/08 04:32 am Title: Prologue
This fic is just soooo good, as expected of you two:D
Looking forward to the next updates as more will be revealed...
The FIRE!! Goodness!! Starting to get more curious... LOLOLZ!!XD
Date: 12/13/08 03:52 am Title: Cleansing Clove
Eeeep. I have a guess about the fire but only because a little Musey!bird let slip something, possibly. Or she could be leading me on, who knows. I want to steal Bill and Tom away and take them to the city for forever. Stupid promise. Need mooooore.
Date: 12/10/08 07:43 pm Title: Prologue
plaese update soon. i will die with out this story
Date: 12/08/08 03:41 pm Title: Nostalgic Cinquefoil
ohhh me likey. I'm definitely gonna go mad waiting for the next chapter! ^-^.
Date: 12/08/08 02:50 pm Title: Nostalgic Cinquefoil
I adore this fic so so much. It's just typical that it recieves so few reviews...I can't help but feel indignant when people can't recognise something good that's been laid at their feet (I'm not even sure it was correct in English...whatever)So it's just amazing and the kiss...oh, the kiss, that was beautiful. I can't wait for those two to finally find each other, not just as brothers but as lovers too.
Date: 12/07/08 11:48 am Title: Nostalgic Cinquefoil
So sad, but so sweet at the same time.
Date: 12/06/08 09:57 pm Title: Nostalgic Cinquefoil
I love the ideas in this fic and the way it's told - it's a shame it doesn't have more reviews. Feel bad for poor Tomi at the moment, he's pretty mixed up. Looking forward to more!
Date: 12/06/08 04:54 pm Title: Nostalgic Cinquefoil
The more I read of this the more I love it. I don't know if either of you are pagans or Wiccans, but as the former, it always makes me a little nervous to see a witch!fic. But this is you, and I should have known better. Silly Mel.
I love Simone so much. She's so incredibly wise and patient, especially with those twins, especially knowing the things she knows. Well, what else could she be? Beautiful.
Bill! LOL I could see it, I swear. The mother in me was saying "sit down before you fall down!" But Tom's just worried about him dropping their shit. So genius.
The scene with Mrs. Heinrich was heartbreaking and poignant and beautiful. I loved it so much.
And the kiss. Thank you, Mrs. Heinrich, we saw it coming...or at least hoped for it. The first steps are often shaky, but that's how you get to the second step.
The last line just made me smile.
Such a great chapter, ladies :D
Date: 12/06/08 03:12 pm Title: Nostalgic Cinquefoil
thanks for the new chappie!!
I have so many questions but well,i guess it's useless to ask them in a review when answers will be in the next chapters.
that scene with the old lady's soul leaving her body made my eyes water a bit.
The twins life is so difficult.I understand so much when you talk about things like why bill didn't wear make-up,tom's thoughts about the loss of money that goes along with her death.
And the kiss was so sweet!*squeal*
what is behind this all?It's all mystery and i'm really curious about where you want this story to go.It's so interesting,and the feeling i have reading it is different than the others interesting story i've ever read.It's nice,and feels fresh^^
Date: 12/06/08 08:54 am Title: Nostalgic Cinquefoil
Aw I'm just in time for the kiss, sweet. :)
Bill you goober ._.
Date: 12/06/08 07:43 am Title: Nostalgic Cinquefoil
Okay this review is going to be written quickly so probably won't be too meaningful, and I'll just comment while I read:
"[...]and he often wished that he could have met him before he drowned." Drowned, eh? D: I remember Simone remembering something about a great uncle that was consumed by fire and that fire mages ran in her family, so this makes me wonder if Jorg wasn't a water mage and that's where Bill gets it from. And tie that into the time with Bill and the river being all freaked out and shit yeah, so, I'm not liking this foreshadowing of foreshadowing.
Augustus? Augustus... Gloop, Augustus Gloop, that big, fat greedy nincompoop! -shuffle dance- ...okay I'll stop.
So before this I didn't have any inkling to why/how Simone would die - I got the feeling that she was weak and dying of some kind of disease, but then you mentioned death sentence here and before I could read on my mind was already going to lynching and I was all D:! but hey, aneurysm is just as good. And by good I mean bad. :( I just hope this covers the death warning on this fic in full. What? ...what?? Why are you laughing?!
"With such gifts come grave responsibility." Omg flashback to Spiderman's uncle. :o It's a good flashback, I love the meaning behind that quote.
'"I think this may be a sitting down experiment," Bill reasoned, attempting to bend his forearm down to his raised foot.' Oh god, Bill. -loves so hard-
"almost as if Bill had considered grasping it for a moment and then decided against it." Ah, uncertain, subtle PDA! My favorite kind! *__*
"Mrs. Heinrich's husband's name was Theodore." That made me laugh and I have no idea why. It's one of those mundane things that aren't really funny but given the situation and the o.O look I can imagine on the boy's faces... yeah, I giggled a little.
"Boys, promise me something; if you really love someone, no matter who it is... Just... give it a chance." That's going to amount to something, I know it.
"But Simone hadn't had anyone with her when she died." Well, shit.
"And he hated focusing on that. A friend was dead; it was disrespectful." That part really tells you what sort of financial condition they're in - the severity of it anyway, that Tom knows he shouldn't be thinking like that but can't help it because its one thing his mind keeps returning to.
I KNEW IT. I knew it would lead to something. You done it well; it takes brilliant flow to make some this unnatural read naturally. I loved Bill's reaction, the most I think: "[...]and he went to pull back, Bill hugged him tighter and let him go with a laugh," Hah. :D
Awaaaaaiting the next all squirmily,
Ella