I'm too sucky to review properly, so I'm just going to copy paste my reactions from when I first saw it. That's right. I'm that lazy.

"...it's just that digestive potions isn't one of them."
lol This is why you should always keep Pepto handy. Just sayin'

[...]Tom felt a strange, hot surge of something he couldn't name. Bill, Bill. -shakes head- And Tom. -pet-
don't you know restrictions only make people want to do it more? D: (also i would so not be opposed to this leading into a threesome. like, if there's a way to somehow fit that in. ._.)

The wood it was built of seemed darker today.
So Bu makes things darker! That's not a crime!!! It's not a crime, I say! And, Tom decided he didn't like his voice either. But it's not his fault! He can't help being this sexy, really!

Creepy Bushido is creepy. And yet
still sexy. ;_; Oh, god, WHY, BU? WHY?



Wow. If I'd known I sounded that demented over IM, I would have never started on this review. Er... basically... I love and need more?

I don’t know but I have a bad feeling about Anis :/.He seems like a bad omen in this story and your description of this first meeting between Bill and Bushido gave me the creeps because of this kind of dangerous atmosphere ...anyway more than great chapter!

I have a bad feeling about this Anis character D:

YAY!!
awesome chapter!! Thank you girls you rock
I was dying to know more about this story. Now Bushido's in the picture and he is so mysterious. Could it be possible that you'd write evil!Bu? *__*
In "Negotiable affection" Tom was the biggest jerk,it surprised me,in a good way.You always surprise me and i love it!!I love how Tom is very protective of his baby brother, especially when he scolded Bill about talking to strangers lol

Hm, Anis is an interesting character. Wonderfully introduced; you can't help but be curious about him. Especially since Bill feels him. I think it was more than just the normal feeling of being watched. Yeah, very interested in this.

You didn't try the vervain again, did you? Because I swear, I'll lock you in your room until it wears off." LOL Ever have a cat break into the vervain? Better yet, ever try to take it away? As challenging and as dangerous as an Olympic sport. Loved the line. I was so glad to see this update. :)

I guess I didn't ever check the character listings for this story? I stupidly had no idea Bushido was making such a sexy entrance into this little village and Bill (and Tom's) life. I'm so excited. That scene you wrote, where and Bill converse? Little Bill was not the only one getting pleasant little spine tremors.

Awesome chapter!! Their situation is so complicated and the atmosphere in this fic is very unique.All that make the reading eve more interesting.Thanks guys!

Oh my, the beginning with Simone. You could feel it coming, as she was dressing and thinking. I could almost see her walking around touching everything just once more, to hold on to them. The end was very quick and very sad.

Now I wonder about Gustav, and why Bill gets the feeling for him that he does. That one will be read closely.

Tom's dream! When he first saw Bill, the first thing I thought was 'that's not Bill'. I didn't know what it was, and it could have been anything in witch!fic, right? But, just a dream ... a shared dream. Hmmm

So much seeding for the next chapter. Thank you for this.

It's going to be a long three weeks until we hear from you again.

Teases! The both of you! I think I'll go join Tom in that cold shower. And then Bill can join in and we can make our own YMO. :-P

Maybe Gustav is the fire! Dun dun DUN!! >_> Poor Simone. On the one hand, it's good that she knew so she could try to ready everything around her. But on the other, that really must suck to feel like a timer counting down.

WHOAHOHO I LOVE THIS