Date: 03/24/09 11:09 pm Title: Arousing Vervain
That's some wicked *wink* stuff. I had a mishap once... Fic is going great...
Date: 03/20/09 07:25 pm Title: Wise Pyrite
Well, I'm glad that Bill didn't die. He can stop bullets with his mind... Wow, awesome.
Date: 03/14/09 10:46 pm Title: Wise Pyrite
If I had at least a little bit of magic in me I would create the perfect story but unfortunately I can’t work miracles... lucky me that you two already done this job :D!!!
Date: 03/12/09 11:30 pm Title: Wise Pyrite
loved this chapter and i cant wait to read more!!
Date: 03/11/09 06:07 pm Title: Wise Pyrite
Awww!! But I don't trust Anis so much eventhough it's sweet to see their little romance. I love the notes on magic ^_^
Date: 03/11/09 04:44 pm Title: Wise Pyrite
Did you add the Billshido pairing? Because I didn't think it was there before which is why I started reading this, but now it seems like a Billshido, which I'm not a fan of. Now I'm all confused. :(
Date: 03/11/09 10:10 am Title: Wise Pyrite
"Bill needed to die was what he needed."- chuckle
Date: 03/11/09 05:51 am Title: Wise Pyrite
Amazing chapter. Right from the first line I was reading this with scrunched up face, really, because it sucked me in completely, from Tom's hummiliation with the girl (my baby brother did a similar thing in high school with a similar result...) and then the chemistry between Bu and B...oh, god, these two will be the death of me. And I liked how B just couldn't stop himself from seeing Bu. That's how it should be. If I have to choose, I always choose Billshido over twincest. At least when it's written by you.:)
Date: 03/11/09 02:23 am Title: Wise Pyrite
Tomi will be upset and that's good *grin*
Date: 03/10/09 11:32 pm Title: Prologue
Aw, Baby Bill and Tom! So cute.
Date: 03/10/09 11:15 pm Title: Wise Pyrite
That memory at the beginning was absolutely brutal :(
Date: 02/27/09 10:09 pm Title: Melancholy Yarrow
The different emotions in this chapter are what makes it really interesting... first that dream that Tom has is like happy and uplifting in an unusual way, and then you end on a cliffhanger that's all scary and worrisome. I hope Bill's okay! D:
Date: 02/26/09 09:10 pm Title: Melancholy Yarrow
omg......you have to update soon....cant wait to read more!!
Date: 02/26/09 04:21 pm Title: Melancholy Yarrow
oh.fuck.
tell me anis did some very miraculous magic and save Bill
Date: 02/26/09 02:37 am Title: Prologue
Bill scoffed down at the ground seeds, pressing them almost into a paste.
Oops. Tell me you can see where I'd get that idea, you know, just so I don't feel dumb. >.>
Author's Response: Lol, yes.
Date: 02/26/09 01:11 am Title: Melancholy Yarrow
You know, first I want to protest that heinous cliffhanger. I protest mightily. That was just mean. *scowls*
But I guess then I have to tell you how much I loved this chapter. I wondered about Simone's appearance. Dealing with spirits, you never know what's real and what's not unless you're as talented as the twins. I'm nervous now, of course, because of Tom saying it wasn't Simone, and yet he let it touch him. Don't like that at all.
This:
Their mother had always said the Goddess was their biggest fan.
Ah, you know how much I love that. I got a little melty.
Bill didn't even deny it when Tom made the crack about Anis being his boyfriend; it didn't even register with him at the time, but it registered with me, and shocked me a little.
The whole time Bill was mixing the paste, he's thinking these negative thoughts about Tom. Tom said he didn't want the paste, but I assumed Bill was making it for him anyway, which made me think that the paste is going to give him a worse headache from all the negativity crushed into it. Bill should know better.
And then we're back to the evil cliffhanger. D:
I think we figured Anis had powers by the end of the last chapter (and damn, he's a smooth one), but I am beyond curious at how this is gonna play out.
Marvelous chapter, ladies! :)
Author's Response: Lol, he was just grinding seeds, not the paste.
Date: 02/25/09 10:01 pm Title: Melancholy Yarrow
O_O oh shit.
Date: 02/25/09 09:57 pm Title: Melancholy Yarrow
Uwah! D:
Damnit, Bill.
Date: 02/25/09 08:31 pm Title: Melancholy Yarrow
Goddess, I'm dieing! This story sustains me and my mind! Update soon, please. I can't get enough.