Date: 11/03/08 02:52 am Title: Chapter 4
OMG!!!! I completely love this cahppie!!!!
Please update!!!!!! I really love this story!!!!! Yay!!!
Author's Response: Thank you :D *Bill-voice* Thank you soo much ^^ I'll try to update soon, but with school it ain't easy :)rnxx Chi
Date: 11/02/08 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 4
I wanna know what the heck is going on at the end of the chapters. -_-... I feel so left out. but maybe Bill is a sex slave now? O_O.. I don't know...
UPDATE. SOON! Jeez, I need to figure this out... XD
Author's Response: Hehe, thanks ;-) Well, school's back in full force now, so it'll take a while until I can update...don't kill me...rnxx Chi
Date: 11/02/08 11:51 am Title: Chapter 3
:O oooooo i wanna know moreeee its so goood
ty xx
Author's Response: Thank you :D I'll try to update asap!rnxx Chi
Date: 11/02/08 11:27 am Title: Chapter 3
I have no clue what to say. 0.0
Poor Bill...=(
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Aaaaw...Thank you ^^ I'll try and update asap!rnxx Chi
Date: 11/02/08 10:36 am Title: Chapter 3
perhaps Bill could break down in a bathroom stall one day, and Tom is there and comforts him, and he tells him? O_O.. that'd be kinda cute. XD
hmm... the story was interesting. I liked it. though why was it so short? I'd never be able to describe something in just a hundred words, haha
I still think Bill miiiiiiight be a prostitute... but... I think he was raped/abused... like, he used to do that. not anymore. maybe they're his dreams? DD: I don't know
update soon! I must know!
Author's Response: Haha, you'll find out...someday :P Thanks for your great review ^^ I'm writing the new chapter as we speak(write/read) xP So, maybe tonight or tomorrow ^^rnxx Chi
Date: 11/02/08 07:41 am Title: Chapter 3
I want to kill the "master"! I hate him!! HATE HATE HATE!!!!
But i Love the story so MORE NOW!!! Please :)
Author's Response: Haha xD Master ain't very nice ey ;-) But watch out, he'll punish you ;-) I'll try to update asap!!!rnxx Chi
Date: 11/01/08 03:39 am Title: Chapter 2
Wow, I love it! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you =D I'm kinda bizzy with school stuff, luckily it's weekend so maybe another chappie today ^^rnxx Chi
Date: 10/31/08 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
D: major mood swing right thurrr. Bill needs to start gettin it on with Tomi.
okay, I'm done with that XD
I had a lot more things to say, but I forgot.
update soon, though!
Author's Response: Hehe >3 I'll try!! I'm kinda bizzy with school stuff, luckily it's weekend so maybe another chappie today ^^rnxx Chi
Date: 10/31/08 12:55 am Title: Chapter 1
have you read the guidelines of 'understanding marysue' on the homepage of this site?I think it would help you see this story from other peoples' eyes
Author's Response: Yes, I read it. But since this is only the first chapter, don't freak out just yet ^^' I'm always trying to avoid mary sue, Bill(or the others) just seem perfect now, but they aren't, and Bill also doesn't have a tragic past, just a tragic present ;-) Sorry if I made it look like it, this wasn't my intention! I hope you understand and otherwise, you're free to not read this ^^rnxx Chi
Date: 10/30/08 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
... hmmmmm great :) totally love it so far
Author's Response: Thank you ^^ I can take a while for an update, I'm middle in a testweek on my school ^^' just to warn you ;-)rnxx Chi
Date: 10/30/08 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
MY GOD this is intriguing (sp?)
I really hope you update soon 'cause I'm already into it ^^
good work!
Author's Response: *Bill-voice* Thank you soo much :D I can take a while for an update, I'm middle in a testweek on my school ^^' just to warn you ;-)rnxx Chi
Date: 10/30/08 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
is Bill a prostitute? XD that's what I immediately thought of when I read the last part
I like the beginning so far, though. :) update soon!
Author's Response: Hehe, you'll see ;-) Thank you ^^ I can take a while for an update, I'm middle in a testweek on my school ^^' just to warn you ;-)rnxx Chi