Date: 11/24/08 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 7-Bedtime routine and Bedtime
Oh God, Why is she crying?
Great story!
Author's Response: No, she's not crying yet. Anna would've cried if Bill and Tom took too long to come back and the other reason she will cry in the next chapter is a secret. you'll have to wait until cahpter 8. *evil laugh* * Okay now, enough my little crack episode. Thank you for review.
Date: 11/24/08 10:02 am Title: Chapter 6-Bath time and getting ready for bed
hey! no fits like anna about reviews.
tom will come out and spank you if you throw a fit.
i like the story!
Author's Response: Fine, no fits. I don't want Tom to spank me, lol. This review made me laugh alot, thank you. Now I shall update it just for you. Thank you for reviewing this chapter.
Date: 11/23/08 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 6-Bath time and getting ready for bed
That's cute... Can't believe they are stuck watching there baby sister. Don't cry I still like this storing can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you, more is coming. I will update very soon. *Hugs you* Thank you for the review, I won't cry any more.
Date: 11/21/08 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 5-Dessert and movie time
Awwww, cute...Bill the mom & Tom the dad so cute........
Author's Response: Thank you I'm glad you think it's cute. Bill and Tom do make good parents *giggles*. Thank you for reviewing.
Date: 11/21/08 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 5-Dessert and movie time
why would they let her watch that movie in the first place?! i havent even seen it...jeez and toms no help!
Author's Response: They said yes and she was warned about how scary it was, and of course Tom's mouth just gets him in trouble as always *giggles* Thanks for the review.
Date: 11/21/08 09:04 am Title: Chapter 5-Dessert and movie time
I REVIEW NOW!
Don't be sad!
Hm..you know..this needs more Tom/Bill.
Srsly.
But, that's just to make things BETTER. 'Cause this is already really good on its own.[[:
I hope you don't take that badly.
I luvers this!
so..
MORE SOON???
looovve!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it. There will be some action with the twins very soon. The rating will because of it. *Giggles* Thank you for that review. I am now happy, not sad.
Date: 11/21/08 05:42 am Title: Chapter 5-Dessert and movie time
i'm sorry!
i'm reading this fic but i idnt left a review so far!
but now i did! am i forgiven? lol
great fic!
the idea is really original!i'd love to see more "family" action!
what i mean is that i'd love to see the three of them together more!
and the twins together too will be great
but it's already really good!! :D
Author's Response: Your forgiven *Hugs you* lol. There will be some more family time, after chapter 8, As for some twin 'action' that will be very soon. Thanks for the review.
Date: 11/21/08 02:03 am Title: Chapter 5-Dessert and movie time
I love how ana calls them mommy and daddy. I wonder what will happen when her REAL parent come back..lol..update please!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm you liked it. I'm soooo happy now. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 11/21/08 12:45 am Title: Chapter 5-Dessert and movie time
I'm going to be really honest with you because I can't take this anymore. Nothing interesting happens in this fic and it just wraps itself around this babysitting 'plot' which just lost its meaning. But what really gets on my nerves is that every other word is 'baby' and I'm sick of it. Other than that, the fic is.. okay. And for the sake of it, I've kept reading this story. So there you go, nag nag nag, keep going.
Author's Response: It will get better I promise, the 'baby' word is gonna be gone. I swear. There may even be some Bill and Tom action very soon. Thanks for the review.
Date: 11/20/08 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 4-Helping with dinner and misbehaving
i feel bad for anna...but she was being a little bit of a brat...
good job with the story!
Author's Response: Thank you soo much for reviewing. There may a another chapter in the near future where spanking occurs but it may not be until Day two of the story. I'm not sure yet.
Date: 11/20/08 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 4-Helping with dinner and misbehaving
This fic is very weird lol
And what the hell is he doing beating his kid sister like that O-o
Author's Response: Umm, Bill and Tom are playing the role of parents for the week and simone told them if Anna acts out, the twins can punish her, which includes spanking. I know it's a little weird but, I have a twisted train of thought here, lol. Anywho, thanks for the review.
Date: 11/17/08 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 3-Shopping trip and cleaning a messy bedroom
whoa! so if georg and gustav know about them playing "mommy and daddy" then do they know that bill and tom have a relationship? do they even have a relation? i cant wait for the updates...these questions are buring my mind!!!
love it, b.t.w.
Author's Response: Of course they know bill and tom are a couple. georg and gustav are also a couple and they don't hide it either. LOL! Thanx for the review. Now I'm going to update more!
Date: 11/17/08 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 3-Shopping trip and cleaning a messy bedroom
The idea is cute. But I think it needs depth. And the whole 'baby' thing is a little annoying after a while. Normally it's used as an occassional pet name, not constantly, ya know?
But yeah, work with it, as there IS a cute idea behind it.
Author's Response: Thank you. I will keep going now.
Date: 11/01/08 12:41 am Title: Chapter 2-Naptime and Playtime
Oh oh oh! i get it! it's kinda like a weird, role playing game for bill and tom! now it makes more sense.
please update soon. i really like it.
Author's Response: Thanx, Im glad you like it!
Date: 10/31/08 01:01 am Title: Chapter 2-Naptime and Playtime
it's nice and very sweet
i like it
however, i think that it's a bit too rushed
maybe you should elaborate it more by adding some details here and there
otherwise, i really love the plot :)
anyways, hope you continue soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much!
Date: 10/30/08 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 2-Naptime and Playtime
that's not a bad start. however, you do use "sure baby" and "mommy" a shit load of times. I'm sure no one says that after every single sentence. and I don't think they'd be kissing each other all of the time, either. *shrug* just saying.
aren't the twins "together" in this fic? O_O and since when could they cook? haha they make Kaulitz pasta, and that stuff looks nasty as ever XDD
please, don't take this as a flame or anything. I just wanted to point out some things.
oh, and one more question: does TH exist in this, or not? jw
:) keep it up
Author's Response: Thank you. yes the twins are together in the this fic, Anna is close to Bill hence she is sooo atached him, LOL. Bill can cook in this fic, cause a four year old cannot live of of junk food and fast food. And TH does exist but the band is on vacation.
Date: 10/30/08 08:39 am Title: Chapter 1-Parents Departure and disscussing the new rules
wow... great start
i really like it
hope you update soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you, i'm glad you enjoyed it
Date: 10/29/08 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 1-Parents Departure and disscussing the new rules
this sounds pretty good so far!
please update as soon as you can :)
Author's Response: Thank you, i'm sooo happy now!!
Date: 10/29/08 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 1-Parents Departure and disscussing the new rules
but the cookie monster doesnt get to eat cookies anymore! it's so stupid. lol
i like so far. the "mommy" and "daddy" thing creeped me out a bit though...but whevs im a weirdo.
please post soon!
Author's Response: Thank you, I will post a second chapter soon.
Date: 10/29/08 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 1-Parents Departure and disscussing the new rules
so cute! please please continue with this story :D
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!