Date: 12/01/08 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 10-Family outing and a temper tantrum
If you have a fit we'll have to spank you like Anna ;) haha
Author's Response: Hey thats mean, lol. Fine I won't have a fit. you reviewed so I won't have a fit. Thank you for reviewing.
Date: 12/01/08 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 9-Breakfast time and getting hurt
What will happen tell us please we all are dying to know.
Author's Response: Have now fear chapter 10 should be up in the next hour, it just has to be validated. It's freaking awesome. Thank you for reviewing. *hug you* *giggles*
Date: 12/01/08 05:24 am Title: Chapter 9-Breakfast time and getting hurt
What's going to happen!? I need to know..is it bad, good, unexpected? Update soon!
Author's Response: Ohhh you reviewed twice, Yea *hugs you*, I'll update soon.
Date: 12/01/08 05:24 am Title: Chapter 9-Breakfast time and getting hurt
What's going to happen!? I need to know..is it bad, good, unexpected? Update soon
Author's Response: The next chappie is going to be up today, I will tell you that it's not bad but, it's not good.
Date: 12/01/08 02:29 am Title: Chapter 9-Breakfast time and getting hurt
the suspense is killing ME.
Author's Response: I will update TODAY, I'm not gonna let the suspense kill you.
Date: 12/01/08 12:58 am Title: Chapter 9-Breakfast time and getting hurt
I'm already dead from the suspense!!
O.O
What's gunna happen?!?!?!
I hope it's something-something..
^.O
Bill and Tom are so cute here!
I hope there will be more cuteness/fluffiness soonnnn!!!!!!
UPDATE MORE PLEASE?!
(((((((:
Author's Response: Hey don't die, I can't tell you too much about chapter 10 but what I can tell you is that Anna gets into some trouble. But other than that, my lips are sealed. Chapter 10 will be up by tomorrow i think, thanks for review.
Author's Response: Hey don't die, I can't tell you too much about chapter 10 but what I can tell you is that Anna gets into some trouble. But other than that, my lips are sealed. Chapter 10 will be up by tomorrow i think, thanks for review.
Date: 12/01/08 12:48 am Title: Chapter 9-Breakfast time and getting hurt
PLEASE UPDATE SOON... you're killin me here.
Author's Response: I'll update very soon, probally tomorrow morning or afternoon, depends on how I'm feeling. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 12/01/08 12:45 am Title: Chapter 8-Nightmares and comforting
Awww... can I be Anna? I really like this hunny. Please keep going.
Author's Response: Sure you can be Anna, lol. I'm really glad you like this, I'm very happy.
Date: 12/01/08 12:43 am Title: Chapter 7-Bedtime routine and Bedtime
AWW they're just so cute... all of them. I haven't ever read a slash about these two that showed Bill and Tom's relationship in such a natural way. It's very refreshing. Like I said, I'm not a big fan of slash.. and I'm enthralled.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it. It may get sexual later on but, I am not positive. Thanks for review.
Date: 12/01/08 12:39 am Title: Chapter 6-Bath time and getting ready for bed
It sounded just like bathtime for my girls. I have 2 girls and the scene really read true to life. Keep it up, you're doing VERY WELL!
Author's Response: Thank you, I wasn't sure how to do this scene at first seeing as I have no kids. I'm glad someone thought it was great. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 12/01/08 12:36 am Title: Chapter 5-Dessert and movie time
OH HUNNY! KEEP IT UP! YOu're doing VERY WELL. I like the way you're showing the boys relationship... and I don't normally do slash.. so PLEASE take it as a compliment. Keep it up! I'm on to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Oh my god, thank you so much, I'm glad you think I'm doing very well. It will be finished in about a month or so, depends on when I can update. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 12/01/08 12:32 am Title: Chapter 4-Helping with dinner and misbehaving
I have a hard time picturing Tom spanking anything that doesn't have long legs and a nice rack, but you did well. I still like it keep going.
Author's Response: Thanks, I really thought that Tom could try his hand at disipline, I considered Bill at first but I didn't wanna get chased by an angry mob lol. THank you for reviewing.
Date: 12/01/08 12:28 am Title: Chapter 3-Shopping trip and cleaning a messy bedroom
Still going well hun. I like the way Bill is with Anna. It's just too sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you, I thought Bill should be more motherly with Anna rather than all strict and you better mind like Tom. lol. Thanks for review.
Date: 12/01/08 12:25 am Title: Chapter 2-Naptime and Playtime
LOL..I understand the reviews / update ratio.. I'm the same way. I really like this so far.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad your enjoying it.
Date: 12/01/08 12:21 am Title: Chapter 1-Parents Departure and disscussing the new rules
VERY CUTE... I will be reading more.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm gad you like it.
Date: 11/27/08 01:26 am Title: Chapter 8-Nightmares and comforting
oh man. you just cant let me down. i dont think it's physically possible for you. ddddaaammmmnnnn hahaha
Author's Response: Mores coming for you girl. I will keep on updating soon. Oh and just between us, I wiil be writing a sex scene with the twins soon and I will dedicate that and all other chapters to you. I forgot to do it in chapter 8, I was really sick. Am I forgiven?? lol. Keep reviewing and I'll keep writing just for you.
Date: 11/26/08 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 8-Nightmares and comforting
Awwww.. That was cute.. Hopefully everything is okay for them once they get into the last few days of watching her.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you think its cute. It will get a little more instense for them because she'll have her moments but it will get better for all them in the end. Thank you reviewing.
Date: 11/24/08 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 7-Bedtime routine and Bedtime
*SCREAMS* OHMIGODD I ALMOST DIED WHEN I READ THE CHAPTER NOTES!!!!! AHHHH!!!
this one was, as always, AWESOME!!!
i was already hyper and you thanking me in the beginning didnt help at all...or did it???!!! AHHHHHHH!!!
Author's Response: Your welcome, you are the reason I keep going on this story. You always review each chapter and that makes my day. I'm always happy when you review. So keep reviewing, I thrive off of them *Hugs you* I'm glad you are happy about having a chapter dedicated to you.
Date: 11/24/08 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 7-Bedtime routine and Bedtime
Awwww... How cute.... Hopefully they can calm her from when she starts crying.
Author's Response: Oh they will, Bill and Tom know excatly how to comfort and soothe her. They are practiclly her second parents. And thank you for reviewing, I'm happy.
Date: 11/24/08 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 7-Bedtime routine and Bedtime
why is anna going to cry? is it because her real parents will be coming home soon? update some more please.
Author's Response: Anna is goona cry cause of a nightmare, shhh *don't tell anyone, it a secret* hehehe. And her parents aren't coming home for a while. Were only on day one of the story, that won't be home for a while. There's going to be a whole lot of chapters though. Thanks for reviewing!