Date: 12/30/08 12:56 am Title: Chapter 20-Revealing the truth and watching home videos
OK, so how did Bill get pregnant? Isn't her being BOTH of their daughter a bit risky? I mean they don't let cousins marry because of problems when you breed so closely in a bloodline... the boys are identical... I like you... you know I do so please don't hate me for asking these questions. HUGS!
Author's Response: Ummm Bill has both male and female parts and *zip* he had a baby girl. As for being risky...... Yep but thats a risk their willing to take. And I don't hate you for asking questions. I still love you *HUGS* lol. Thanks for another review.
Date: 12/29/08 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 21-Telling a lie and throwing a temper tantrum
I dont think that she is bratty. Maybe a little clingy but not really braty. I think she just gets upset when she knows that she has done something wrong and upsets Bill or Tom. I think maybe to improve this maybe having her become friends with a girl down the stree t or having some interaction with some kids her own age. That and maybe be a bit more firm on punishments. Not the punishments themselves but how they act with the punishments. Like in this chap when she got put in time out and then she started crying she got hugs and kisses. Somethimes you have to let them cry themselves out. So far this has been one of my favorite fanfictions to read.
Author's Response: *gasps* The twins should've let her cry herself out. lol. Mmmmmm, your right they defineitly need to more firmer when it comes to punishments. Hugs and kisses may make her think that all she has to do is start crying and the twins will automaticly run to her. You made a good point there, thanks. I'll definitly update soon as well, seeing as you like this fic so much. Thanks for another review.
Date: 12/29/08 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 21-Telling a lie and throwing a temper tantrum
That was funny...That kid had some issues...
Author's Response: *Nods heads* Yes she does have issues, She's always getting pissed off. lol. I kinda thought her temper tantrum was hillarous too until, she hit Bill with jumbie. Sooo thank you for reviewing and congrats on being the 100th reviewer of my story.
Date: 12/28/08 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 20-Revealing the truth and watching home videos
yay! i guessed right lol i love this stry bill and tom and are the cutest parents ever
Author's Response: I'm glad you think they are the cutest parents. Along with being cute parents thay are also very strict parents, They don't want Anna being a little spoiled bratty diva. T'm glad you still love it, more to come too. Thank you for yet another review.
Date: 12/28/08 09:52 am Title: Chapter 20-Revealing the truth and watching home videos
Oh my I was so shocked to find out that part...Great story though keep up the good work...Love the story..
Author's Response: Yes, it's very shocking, isn't it. I'm glad you love it. The next chappie will be up soon. I promise. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 12/27/08 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 20-Revealing the truth and watching home videos
I liked it but still... hmmm how old are the twins? XD
Author's Response: *giggles* thank you and the twins are eighteen almost nineteen. Bill and Tom were 14 when Anna was born. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 12/27/08 11:36 am Title: Chapter 20-Revealing the truth and watching home videos
Ahhhh, thank you for the dedication;D Lol, great chappie!
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much, the next chappie will be up in a couple of days at the most, I promise. Thank you for reviewing. And your welcome for the dedication.
Date: 12/27/08 04:54 am Title: Chapter 20-Revealing the truth and watching home videos
this was so sweet! i loved the dvd scenes! i cant waitn for more!
Author's Response: Thnk you, more to come. I promise. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 12/27/08 01:57 am Title: Chapter 20-Revealing the truth and watching home videos
this cant be long because i have to get off the computer like...now.
that was great and really cute and sweet.
post more soon.
Author's Response: Thank you, the next chappie will be up soon. Thank you for yet another review, I'll update soon just for you.
Date: 12/27/08 01:02 am Title: Chapter 20-Revealing the truth and watching home videos
awwwwwwwwww, so cute and thanks for dedicating the chapter. hehe. But that was adorable. I loved it. Wonderful job
Author's Response: Thank you, Im glad you loved it. I'll update in a couple of days, the next chappie is a work in progress. Thank you for reviewing.
Date: 12/26/08 03:30 am Title: Chapter 19-Tickles and a family breakfast
Hm... okay tom n bill are too young to be annas parents, anna got trumper surname the twins got kaulitz... maybe it's somethin about their father jorg or that she is their half sister... also bill got a cut, someone hurt him or he got really a sickness... hmm... i really don't know, but well hope u can add next chappie soon, I love it! ^^
Author's Response: *Giggles* Ummm your kinda off there. I'll update soon since ya love it. It will be a couple of days. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 12/26/08 03:23 am Title: Chapter 18-A new morning routine and tears
"I mean, Trumper" I loved that part! hope u can wirte more Tom dialogues!
Author's Response: I will definetly do some more Tom dialogues, I had no idea people would like that. Thanks for reviewing, I think of more dialogues just for you.
Date: 12/25/08 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 19-Tickles and a family breakfast
OMG!!!! Bill gave birth to Anna, right? OMG!!! An Mpreg! I love those! Yay!
Author's Response: Your right, *Claps* Bill had Anna. This was my Mpreg, sooooo, I hope everyone likes. *giggles* Thanks for reviewing *Gives you a big hug*
Date: 12/25/08 02:28 am Title: Chapter 19-Tickles and a family breakfast
I KNOW I KNOW!!! BILL AND TOM ARE ANNA'S REAL PARENTS!!! BUAHAHAHA!!! WHEN BILL SAID THAT HE WANTED TO TELL HER THE TRUTH AND HAD A SCAR ON HIS STOMACH I FIGURED IT OUT (also it says MPreg in the genre)!!!
I'M SOOOOOOOOOO SMART!!!
Author's Response: That right, you are SOOOOOOOOO smart. You figured it out toooooo, Damn your good. hehehehe. I will be updating in couple of days now. Thanks for reviewing *Gives you a big hug* I luvs you.
Date: 12/24/08 02:56 am Title: Chapter 19-Tickles and a family breakfast
Omg anna is bill and tom kid but their parents put her in their name so bill and tom secert would be safe! Right?! More please!
Author's Response: OMG yes, you are right, more to come now girl. I'll update in a couple of days. Thank you for reviewing.
Date: 12/23/08 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 1-Parents Departure and disscussing the new rules
Hey I know I have reviewed a couple time with some things to work on but I dont think I ever said how much I am enjoying reading this and am on my seat for the next chapter. Good work, really good story. Sorry for forgeting to say it before.
Author's Response: Awwwww, now that makes me feel good, and not to worry about the critism, It's not bothering me at all. I will update the next chapter soon. I promise and spanking will not be as intense in the near future (Big promise) lol. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 12/23/08 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 19-Tickles and a family breakfast
That it is really Bills baby. He had a C section and that was why he had a scar. But shouldnt he be talking to his parents also. Because they are just as involved and it may be a bit less harder on Anna if who she thought were her parents for the last four year help crack the news that her brothers are really her parents.
Author's Response: Wow your right, Damn girl. your good.lol. But Bill and Tom had been planning on telling her for a while and they want her to know the the truth and Simone and Gordon are aware that they are gonna tell her. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 12/23/08 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 16-Getting into trouble and going to bed
Gee they sure are going heavy with the spanks. eighteen spanks cause she was refusing time out. That is normal for a toddler and while it needs to be discuraged heavy spanking is not the way to do it.
Author's Response: Ummm,she refused to go to bed, she sweared, threw a tepmer tantrum and kicked Bill. And you are right, heavy spanking is not the way to go, I agree. And I don't think Anna is considered a toddler (she's four), I might be wrong though. *If I am, tell me) Sooooo thanks for reviewing.
Date: 12/23/08 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 19-Tickles and a family breakfast
i think tht anna is really bill and toms daughter NOT sister :) and i love this stry
Author's Response: Damn girl, it's like you know what goes on in my head. lol. You are right *squeals* she is totally their daughter. Thats why she's so close to them. I'm glad you love this story. I'll update soon. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 12/23/08 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 19-Tickles and a family breakfast
this story is beyond cute:D
i love it!
but wait
okay so is it bill and tom's little sister?
or did bill have the baby?
i'm confused
0.o
Author's Response: Mmmmmm, maybe she is Bill's baby, you'll have to wait until the next chapter. Which will be up in a couple of days. Oh and don't be confused.even though that is a little amusing. lol. Thanks for reviewing. *hugs and cookies*