Date: 03/20/09 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 47-A family trip to the grocery store and a public outburst
Omg, a 4 year old should not be watching south park at all... Also I think if she did that I think they should punish her because its not safe for her to run out into the road...
Author's Response: I know, South park isn't exactly something a four should be viewing. Four year olds have a tendency to repeat everything they hear. Bill and Tom were not aware that she had seen that show, a few times. And Your answer for the Poll is a good one. I appricate it hun, Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 03/17/09 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 1-Parents Departure and disscussing the new rules
hmm maybe she culd scream about how she wanted zumthing but the wuldnt let her so she starts yelling its not fair and stuff like tht an duhm no i dnt think they shuld carry her cause it wuld kinda be like babying her and not showing her its wrong :) luvs ya!!
Author's Response: Ohhhh, I like it. I think she may have a fit cause she can't have candy or a soda pop. And with the carrying thing, I was thinking maybe Bill could carry her back to the car but, maybe he should just walk her to the car. Your wisdom is sooooo helpful. I luvs ya too twinny.
Date: 03/16/09 01:27 am Title: Chapter 46-Taking a nap and having an accident
great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks hun, I'll update soon, between teusday or wednsday. I'm kinda stumped here but it will be up.
Date: 03/16/09 12:58 am Title: Chapter 1-Parents Departure and disscussing the new rules
the twins shuld maybe take some of her things away along with her privalages too and i like this chappie alot tom was soo cute in her with anna it was adoorable and i wish the best for ur grandpa and you twinny i luvs ya so if ur sad and need to tlk im here :) k awsome job as always and for our story im doing good so far but ive just been busy lol so i havent had tht much time to write yet but im getting there !! hmm i hope this review is ong enough so tht it makes u SMILE!!!
Author's Response: Awwww, Twinny, Thank you. I feel a whole lot better now. I luvs ya too, heheheheehe. And I love your suggestion. And for the next chappie, I was thinking about having Bill carry Anna around while shes crying. Would that make her tantrum worse or would they be giving into her?? Oh and what should she start screaming about?? Got ideas?? Oh and thanks for reviewing. I am sooooo smiling now. See???? *Smiles* lol.
Date: 03/15/09 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 46-Taking a nap and having an accident
I loved this chapter and Im really sorry to hear about your grand father :( xxx
Author's Response: Thnx hun, I'm kinda sad too. I'm glad you liked this chappie. I'll update soon. It should be up on wednsday or thursday.
Date: 03/15/09 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 46-Taking a nap and having an accident
I loved this chapter and Im really sorry to hear abot your grand father :( xxx
Author's Response: I'm glad you loved it hun, I will add the next chappie once I Type it out. I have no life so yeah. Thanks for your second review.
Date: 03/15/09 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 46-Taking a nap and having an accident
I loved this chapter and Im really sorry to hear abot your grand father :( xxx
Author's Response: Aww thank you hun. but he didn't pass on yet. He is dying though, that much I know. I feel better now.
Date: 03/15/09 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 46-Taking a nap and having an accident
Now, if Anna were to have a tantrum in the store the only way I can see the Twins handling that is by taking all the stuff she likes away..My mom used to yell at me when I did that..So I decided to shape up & not do it anymore. Hope that helps you feel better...I know what its like loosing someone your close to.
Author's Response: Awww thank you hun, I do feel better. And I think I may have typed it wrong but, my grandfather is still alive, but he is gonna go soon. It's kinda sad. And as for your suggestion, I love it. I can definetly see the twins taking thing like T.V., maybe jumbie, her cd, coloring book, or maybe she they would do timeout in the car. You are giving me some good ideas gurl. I luvs it and thanks for your review.
Date: 03/13/09 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 45-Apologizing to mommy and daddy and eating lunch
loved it!! an for the poll i wuld think tht anna wuld probaly feel really bad so the twins culd let her know tht it happens sumtimes but if she ever gets the feeling tht she has to go in the middle of the night to just wake them and for the diaper they culd say tht its only until her clothes are clean and for the night just incase it happens again but than after she can take it off you know they culd just explain to her y :)
Author's Response: Wow thanks twinny, I'm glad you love it, and as for your suggestion, I love it. heehehehe, I read the suggestions I got and wrote it out. I only read them at like one thirty this morning (My internet was being a pain in the ass) Thanks for more of your wisdom twinny and another review. Oh and how are you doing with our story?
Date: 03/13/09 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 45-Apologizing to mommy and daddy and eating lunch
Say how its ok. That it was an accident and that if she does it again its ok to go tell them. That they wot be mad. For the diapers she could also wear Toms shirt over the diaper.
Author's Response: Oh I like it, oh andlook for some daddy and Anna interaction in the next chappie. It's gonna be in there. Thanks for you review, I'll update soon.
Date: 03/13/09 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 45-Apologizing to mommy and daddy and eating lunch
Well if Anna were to pee the bed, & they need to keep her in a diaper they should tell her that they need to put a diaper so they can wash her clothes. Like be honest with her, or else she will act like a baby. I hope this makes scence.
Author's Response: Hmmmmm, *Nods head* Yep that does make sense. Thanks hun you helped me out quite a bit. Thanks for your review too, look for the next chappie today. I'm gunna post it later.
Date: 03/13/09 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 1-Parents Departure and disscussing the new rules
hehe yea i got our story!! i was wondering like were u left off kara was gunna get a spanking but who do u want to discipline her just to have an idea :)
Author's Response: Um, either BIll or Tom, It's your call hun. I'm not pickey. so yeah. oh and look for the next chappie of this story today soon, I just gotta update it.
Date: 03/11/09 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 1-Parents Departure and disscussing the new rules
hey twinny!!! i really loved it :) and as for what u said about our story i cnt wait :) and as for the poll i think that they shuld leave anna be until she calm down than after they culd sit down with her and ask her is she was calm now than instead of cuddling her they culd tell thts not wat young ladies so and after ask her if she wants to play candy land for a little but more so that way they arent babying her but they arent denying her affection and ..LOVE!! lol hehehehe :)
Author's Response: Yea, you loved it. And for our story, I sent it to you on wednsday. If you never got it, just tell me and I'll resend it. And for your answer for our poll, I totally agree with you. Your wisdom is sooo helpful. *Gives you hugs* I will update very son, probbaly today. Thanks for reviewing Twinny.
Date: 03/11/09 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 44-Playtime and misbehaving during playtime
Oh wow that was bad.. When Anna decides to calm down I think the twins should explain it that young ladies don't spit in peoples hair or face...Its not nice for her to that anyway.
Author's Response: I know that it was bad, Anna's behavior was un acceptable. I totally agree that the twins should tell Anna that young ladies don't spit at people. It is sooooo not nice to do, especially to Tomi. Thanks for your wisdom hun, and your review. I'll update soon.
Date: 03/11/09 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 44-Playtime and misbehaving during playtime
I love this story! :) but is thids story only 1 week long and what happens when their parents come home? update soon! :)
Author's Response: Nothing bad will happen when gordon and simone come home. Anna is still going to call the twins mom and dad. She may even go on tour with them too. *Hint hint* Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 03/10/09 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 44-Playtime and misbehaving during playtime
I think that when she calms down that they say something along the lines of "are you calmed down now" then she says yes and sorry and all that good stuff. Then they say "Ok. Do you still want to play another round of Candyland?" Then she says yes and then they play. You dont want the twins to coddle her but you dont want to starve her of affection either. Good job writing so far. I have one question. Wouldnt Anna want to talk to her grandparents on the phone or something?
Author's Response: That's not a bad idea, I'll do something like that too. And for your question um, Anna will talk to Simone and Gordon very soon. probablly in chappie 46 or 47. I need to figure out whats going down with my writing. Thanks for our compliment and review. I'll update soon.
Date: 03/10/09 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 44-Playtime and misbehaving during playtime
i dont think they should comfort her too much at all. they should sit down and talk to her, and send her on her way. also i really liked the soap thing.
Author's Response: I love the idea hun, I'll consider it. And the soap thing is a result of my twinny. (She suggested it to me) Hehehehehehehe, Thanks for reviewing, the next chappie should be up in a couple of days.
Date: 03/09/09 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 1-Parents Departure and disscussing the new rules
hmmright now i culd see her doing it to tom and tom swatting her because lol at this point bill is acting very idk ? sweet but almost babying her so i can see tom doing it this time :)
Author's Response: Ohhhh Tom getting spat at and swatting Anna's rear??? I like. Bill may just scold her cause she is his baby. Now you have me wondering if Anna should attempt to run from as he is swatting her. I love your mind. Hehehehehe, oh and I am nearly finished with the first half of our story. It should be done in an hour or so.
Date: 03/09/09 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 1-Parents Departure and disscussing the new rules
hmmmm as for the hot sauce thing maybe soap? i wuld say yes for the hot sauce thing but certain ppl on this site mught flip about it lol so i think u shuld def go with soap though
Author's Response: Ohhhh, I'll Def do the soap. The last thing I want is to DIE!!!! lol! I loves it!! Oh and which of the twins should she spit at and who should be swating at her rear end??? I am wayyyyy stumped there! Any ides twinny I loves ya!!!!
Date: 03/09/09 12:16 am Title: Chapter 43-Making cupcakes with mommy and daddy and getting overwhelmed
loved it!!! thnks for the dedication twinny i luvs ya ... and for the poll well tht is big one cause lol to spit at ur parents is pretty disrespectful so i wuld say a spanking maybe not extreme but extreme enough so she knows it wrong and than maybe either after a time or she can lose jumbie for the day ?
Author's Response: I love ya to twinny. Hehehehe, And I love your suggestion. A spanking would def work and losing Jumbie too. Now what I'm a little stumped on though is if she should get hot sauce in her mouth too and when she gets spanked, who should do it??? Your input?? I love your reviews as always twinny. I need more of your wisdom too.