Date: 08/08/13 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 34
Aww yay! Hopefully Bill will agree with coming to stay with them :D Though I know he'll be really stand off-ish at first and really really protective of Tom even more than he is now. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: yay ^_^ I think he will agree to it, but its not going to be all sunshine and roses for it rarely is in his life! and ill try and keep the ball rolling! rnthanks for being the first review!! rnFern xx
Date: 07/25/13 12:16 am Title: Chapter 33
Through this whole chap I was just thinking when is tom going to get his share of food Lol horrible concentration but yaaay an update hopefully another one soon winkwink
Author's Response: he's sleeping, Tom wont want to be awake while strangers are around, we'll see that next chapter :) and hopefully it wont be long before the next one is finished :) rnthanks for the review <3rnFern xx
Date: 07/25/13 12:07 am Title: Chapter 33
Slowly getting somewhere. I understand Bill is still being hesitant and untrusting, but he should let his guard down a little with Andi.
Author's Response: after everything, hes tired and he wants to trust him more, we'll hopefully see a little more trusting in 34 :) and we'll find out what Andi does, whether he gets Gustav involved or not etc. :D soo yeah hopefully its not going to be too long before 34 is up so thanks for your reviews as always <3 rnFern xx
Date: 06/28/13 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 32
Billie :((((( so happy andi is there to help em out nd hay for this update hopefully another one soon!!!
Author's Response: I know....im so horrible to my boys =/ and a new chapter is awaiting validation as we speak :D thanks for your review! ^_^ rnFern xx
Date: 06/28/13 05:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved this chapter!c: So great.
Author's Response: hehe thanks =3 I hope you stick with my story and read on! <3 rnFern xx
Date: 06/28/13 02:02 am Title: Chapter 32
I really liked it c:
Author's Response: yay! =3 I hope you will like the next chapter too! <3 rnthanks for leaving a review ^_^ rnFern xx
Date: 06/27/13 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 32
Aww I don't blame Bill for being hesitant and not knowing what to do with the tea/hot chocolate machine, I'd be confused too lol. Really can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: it seems silly to write about such mundane things but those are the things Bill has never had in his life...and in some ways that's what is kinda more heartbreaking =/ and theres more coming tonight :) <3 rnFern xx
Date: 06/17/13 09:59 am Title: Chapter 31
Awh........ Tomi is so sweet! I love how childish he is! Please update soon.
Author's Response: Its because of his learning difficulties y'see...I change up my writing style a little for his character so you know when its him thinking/speaking rather than just narrative :) rnthanks for a lovely review! rnFern xx
Date: 06/17/13 05:43 am Title: Chapter 31
Just happy for an update no matter how short. I sooo love the twin's relationship in this story, and the way you write Tom's character. Hope the next chapter comes soon because I can't wait.
Author's Response: haha thanks! I know im a terrible updater =/ but I try my best and hopefully its worth the wait :) and yeah, me too cos I wasn't happy with this one! if you wanna keep updated you can follow me on twitter, I always tweet when im about to post :) rnthanks again for being so patient with me! vielen dank! <3 rnFern xx
Date: 06/16/13 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
i love your banner for this story :) its cool and you said you made it so i wanted to ask how you made it? if you dont mind me asking.
Author's Response: haha thanks :) I don't think its that great tbh...I just gathered a few pictures from the internet (The Clock in the background, the street scene and then a pic of younger Bill n Tom) all I did was use photoshop, Used the street scene as the main feature (there was a man in walking in the scene so I edited him out using the clone and blur tools) then overlaid the clock and turned the opacity right down...I then added the twins (both from separate pictures so I had to edit them out of those first) and used the burn tool and the blur tool to fade the edges out...I think I used a background fade too and I turned their opacity down a little too...after that it was just adding Text, I blurred that too to make it seem brighter, same on the street lights too :D that's about it really...took me about an hour to do including all the pre-editing on the twins and street scene :) rnthanks for liking my work though! :D rnFern xx
Date: 06/16/13 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 31
Aww poor Bill :( thats cute how Tom held his teddy out to his brother...oh and IF you do a sequel I have an idea for it...8:48am or something like that.
Author's Response: yeah...I needed to put something sweet in there lol its been a while since we had any! :L and Im not planning one as of yet as im not 100% on how this is gonna end but I would LOVE to hear your ideas! you can email me if you like :) rnfernstrawson@gmail.com or add me on facebook (Fern Strawson, my profile pic is me in some sugarskull makeup) but let me know who you are lol :D rnthanks for being so loyal to me and my story! <3 Vielen dank! <3 rnFern xx
Date: 05/09/13 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 30
AWWWW! Andreas finally met Tom! Oh, I'm so happy! Great, great chapter. You never dissapoint. Also, it seems like Bill is starting to break down his walls a little. Hopefully wherever this goes with Andi, Bill will eventually begin to trust people for him and his brother's sake. Again, awesome chapter!
Author's Response: tehe ^_^ awww im glad its made you happy...especially after this story isn't really that happy :L yeah I think he is, but I don't think he's ready to trust anyone, not where Tom is concerned. but I haven't written the next chapter yet cos I am just waaaay too busy at the moment >_< but I promise I will get it done asap!! rnthanks for the wonderful review and the lovely comments <3 rnFern xxxx
Date: 04/20/13 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 30
Thanks for the up date :D
The evil part of me really wants Bushido to find Bill teehee ;)
Author's Response: Haha it's not beyond the realms of possibility >:) but I've got a couple more tragedies up my sleeve for Bill before he gets his happy ending :L rnThanks for your review! Sending you much love! <3 <3 rnFern xx
Date: 04/19/13 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 30
Hope you're all settled in your new house and sorry you're going through tought times. But there's a round of happy-clapping from me because you updated. I love how you write Bill and Tom's relationship, how Bill looks after his twin as best he can. So sad that he blames himself for Tom's condition because he's been brainwashed into believing that by Simone. I do hope that Andreas can gain Bill's trust so that he can help the twins without them having to be seperated by the authorities or something awful like that. Really looking forward to how this story will develop.
Author's Response: Yeah the new house is great thanks Hun :) yeah it really sucks but ill pull through :) yeah Bil has so many things that he holds as truth and just aren't =/ but we'll all just have to wait and see what happens next... I haven't written more yet but the plan for chapter 31 is in my head so ill try and get it written as fast as possible :D rnThanks for your lovely review! Sending you much love <3 <3 rnFern xx
Date: 04/19/13 10:43 am Title: Chapter 30
Yes! Im glad they met eachother
Author's Response: Haha thanks for leaving me a review <3 let's see what happens next :) rnFern xx
Date: 04/19/13 10:29 am Title: Chapter 30
Oh wow...NOT what I was expecting to happen...but its good to see Bill is SLOWLY letting his guard down with Andi...and Tomi is still adorable as hell! Keep it up! Also I hope things with you and your partner settle down soon *Hugs*
Author's Response: Really?? Fair enough :) to be honest, Bills just tired and deep down he really wants Andi's help...he's not always so adorable though, we got to see a little snippet of the other side of him in this chapter :) rnAw thanks Hun, we're just going through a tough time as I've had another miscarriage :( but we'll pull through -hugs back- rnThank you for the lovely review! Sending you so mch love <3 <3 rnFern xx
Date: 02/23/13 12:30 am Title: Chapter 29
Oh my gosh! I'm so happy Bill and Andi have finally met! Last time I was here, the last chapter that had been posted was 26 - you're really on a roll now! So looking forward to the next chapter if Bill lets him meet Tom. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Haha me too! We've been waiting too long for it! :L and yeah I ha a mammoth writing sesh at like 4am a few weeks ago and got loads written :) Im not sure what he's going to do next to be honest but ill try and get more written very soon!! rnThanks so much for the lovely review! rnFern xx
Date: 02/18/13 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 29
Oh wow....wait....I remember the mystery straner at the start of the story! I thought it was Gustav the whole time! This seriously getting good.
Author's Response: Haha yay! You remembered! There will be more coming soon :) I'm glad you like this so much <3 rnThanks for reviewing! Sending you mic love!! rnFern xx
Date: 02/15/13 11:14 am Title: Chapter 28
i am truly addicted
Author's Response: haha im guessing this is a good thing! :D thanks for taking the time to read! more will hopefully be up later this evening :) rnFern xx
Date: 01/21/13 05:29 am Title: Chapter 28
So happy you updated. And even happier that Andi finally found Bill. I'm dreading to think what'd been happening with Tom while Bill's been gone. More please.
Author's Response: haha we've been waiting for this moment for some time :L yeah im dreading it too ;) mainly cos i havent written that but yet,but ive written the bit after that which is weird...ah well thanks for the review :D rnFern xx