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Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/09 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 11

Aww Tom was cute in this chapter! And you are very welcome about getting this chapter posted :P Keep it up, it's really good.

Author's Response: i know!!! i just had to keep this chapter happy :) but the next wont be quite as good....there will be some more bushido methinks....that might be ch13 :S rnthanx again :) fern xx

Reviewer: kashpower Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/09 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

yay!! i love it !! can u please update!!!

Author's Response: thanx for the review! rnchapter 11 is up hopefully soon...i started writing it yesterday but found my TH muses where in another fandom...lol so i had to leave it :) rnthanx again...rnfern xx

Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/17/09 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 10

Aw poor Tomi, I can't blame him for freaking out when he woke up alone, it's getting really good, I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: aww i know....that chapter was born from when i was a kid and i used to freak out if i was alone when i got out of bed...lol thanks for the review! though there might be a wait for chapter 11...not sure what i want to have happen yet :)rnthanx again rnfern xx

Reviewer: toxxicKAULITZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/09 11:35 am Title: Chapter 1

OMGOMGOMGOMG I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY ♥ please update soon (:

Author's Response: wow really? thank you! rnchapter 10 will be up soon i hope...but i got exams in like a week now soo...yeah it wil be a little longer :( rnthanx for the review! means a lot to me :) rnrnfern xx

Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/09 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 9

Aw, even though this Maria girl is a new character, I already like her! Looking forward to see whats going to happen next.

PS: Good luck on your school work and revision.

Author's Response: good! your supposed to! lol for now *evil grin* nah im kidding really...im not sure where to go from here (again lmao) rnaww thanx! my final emans are in like 2 weeks...not good...rnthanx for reviewing rnrnfern xx

Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/09 12:55 am Title: Chapter 8

You should bring Gustav into the story eventually as someone who offers to try and help Tom and Bill, seems like an idea...anyway, getting good :D

Author's Response: mmm...maybe later on...thanx for the idea! there is a friend coming up in chapter 9 who is Bill's only friend....its an ofc but.....i'll just shut up and let you read it...when i eventually get round to posting chapter 9 lmao rnthanx again...much appreciated rnrnfern xx

Reviewer: Billicent Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/09 01:03 am Title: Chapter 1

it means its good :)

Author's Response: awww thank you!! rnrnchapter 9 coming soon...cos im waiting for my friend to finish my banner :) rnrnfern xx

Reviewer: cheekybby Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/09 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 8

love it. you know I do. Figured I was here for a bit so...show face on your shiny fic! ^_^ Grrr, my TH muses are sparking back to life lol. Might have to write more fic. ^____^ next chap when your ready hun!

Author's Response: yay!!!! shiny reviews....shiiiny...0.0....coolrnrnrngood!!!!rnrnwill do i just started chapter 9 so hopefully it wont be too long nowrnrnthax babe rnrnfern xx

Reviewer: Billicent Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/09 12:30 am Title: Chapter 8

oh god my stomach hurts that is just SOOO tragic!!!! oh god....

Author's Response: does that mean its good or bad??? rn(i know its tragic but its my way of getting my feelings out instead of doing something else far more stupid) rnrnthanx for the review rnrnfern xx

Reviewer: omgthatshot05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/09 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 7

yes you are evil

but i guess it had to be done

update soon =]

Author's Response: yeah i am...lol i LOVE being evil...sooo much more fun....rnrnit was needed tho...i needed a reason for Bill to leave home so young....chapter6 gave me the perfect solution lol....rnrnthanx for reviewingrnrnfern xx

Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/09 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 7

I'm likeing the story so far! Keep it up :D

Author's Response: thanx! rnmy writing confidence took a severe knocking whilst writing this chapter rnbut thanx so much!!!rnrnfern xx

Reviewer: omgthatshot05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/09 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 6

OMG! WHY! WHY!? WOULD YOU DO THaT!!????

no cup cakes for you =0 lol

but poor lil tomi!! i feel so sorry for bill =[

update soon =]

Author's Response: because, i like being evil. rns'all good...i dont like cupcakes anyway... =P rni know!! chapter 7 will more or less (hopefully) explain how and why they got where they are, cos we know how he got into prostitution. but next chapter will reveal a better how and a why...hopefully *crosses fingers*rnrnwow long responsernrnthanx!!rnrnfern xx

Reviewer: Linni Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/09 10:54 am Title: Chapter 5

Oh! Exciting! Georg's baad! XD
Please more! :D

Author's Response: thanx! as soon as a beta it - again -_-' rnchapter 6 is evil too *twisted devil smiley from forum*rnrnfern xx

Reviewer: omgthatshot05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/21/08 04:28 am Title: Chapter 1

i feel so sorry from tom and bill =[
but i do love it and i'm happy to see someone switch it =] good job!!! update soon

Author's Response: :)rnthanx!! rni will put up chapter 6 hopefully on wednesday...or maybe xmas day when im bored lol! rnthanx againrnrnfern xx

Reviewer: runningthroughtthemonsoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/08 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

plaese update soon i cant live without this stroy

Author's Response: i will i hope its almost done...really?? ooh dear...id better get a move on then! :) rnthanx!! rnfern xx

Reviewer: MagicalGirl379 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/06/08 07:22 am Title: Chapter 4

Awwww... I'm close to tears, go on!!! Let them be okay!

Author's Response: oh dear...your not supposed to cry!!! lol rnglad you liked it...well they wont come out of this unscathed...but they'll be ok and im saying no more than thatrnrnthanx againrnrnfern xx

Reviewer: brokendreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/08 02:33 am Title: Chapter 4

its not shity!

write more!

plssssssssssssssssss:)

Author's Response: due you were there when i started writing chapter 5!!!! you know sort-of whats gonna happen!!!! rnlolrnrnfern xx <3

Reviewer: colt26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/08 04:10 am Title: Chapter 3

i could hug u 4 making a story where bill's not the mentally challenged 1.just 1 question.is tom autistic or simply slow?

Author's Response: i dont really know...its really up to the reader...i'd say he's more like autistic...but its up to you...rnthanx for the review! i know...i got fed up of reading Bill as mentally retarded so i though i'd switch it lolrnthanx againrnrnfern xx

Reviewer: Scream-till you believe itx Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/08 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 3

CONTINUE. :D

Author's Response: ook 0__0 more up when its written which could take a while longer cos im totally stressed out atm...rnrnrnfern xx

Reviewer: MagicalGirl379 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/21/08 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 3

OMK... go on!!!

Author's Response: i'll take that you like it?? dankeschon! more will be up soon.....

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