Date: 02/10/11 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 16
Ooh, dude! That was great, something tells me she's gonna try and help Bill and Tom as much as possible, either with or without Georg and Gustav's help...I really can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: aww thanks!! :D yes she will try and help :) tehe ima have to write some more yet so it'll be a while but hopefully not too long, im getting the old writing juices back! rnthanx again deary :) much love rnFern xx
Date: 01/25/11 05:25 am Title: Chapter 15
I really enjoyed reading this :D plz update soon ^-^
Author's Response: awww good! :) the next chapter has already been started so hopefully it wont be too long! rnthanx for reviewing honey :) <3 much love, rnFern xx
Date: 01/24/11 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
AWWWW It is NOT bad !!!! this is pretty cool sweetie ^-^
Author's Response: wow thanks a lot my lovely :D rnfern xxx
Date: 01/08/11 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 15
Omg thank you for updating!! You know I'll always be here to read and review but I'm so happy that Bill was alright = ] I forgot Bill was 15!! Bushido need to get his ass beat!! My heart goes out for Bill I love how he always puts Tom before his own life and safety. I really hope things start to turn around for them.
Author's Response: aw your welcome! :) and thank you!! He might get his ass kicked later on but he's gotta be meaner yet :L aaand no. things wont be getting better just yet, but i am hoping this will take me to a happier ending :) rnthanks again! <3 rnFern xx
Date: 01/08/11 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 15
Awww....I seriously wanna crawl into the story and hug all three of them! The chapter was great, you really are doing a good job here...and I have a feeling the two officers were Georg and Gustav.
Author's Response: haha! aww bless you! <3 and thanks so much! it doesnt feel that way sometimes, but hopefully each chapter is worth the wait lmao :L rnand that would be telling wouldnt it? you'll have to wait and see >:) rnthanks for reading and reviewing!! much love! <3 <3 rnFern xx
Date: 11/16/10 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
God this is just so sad expectually in the beginning! Poor Bill and Tom!
Author's Response: i know :/ but thanx for the nice review :) rnFern xx
Date: 11/08/10 01:06 am Title: Chapter 14
i decided to read this because you mentioned it when you updated your other story. your writing sure has improved from when you first started this story. its much better now. i hope you keep up the good work with this story too. the warnings look dire but i can't help but hope for a happy ending anyway. =)
Author's Response: i have sort of used this fic to make my writing better if you know what i mean....i just hope that that doesnt make it too disjointed :/ rnmeh, all my fictions apart from maybe '...To Be Loved' have dire warnings, because they're usually necessary :/ i use my writing as a kind of therapy so they all tend to be dark :/ but im not sure where this is headed yet so fingers crossed for a happy ending! rnthank you for reviewingg!! really made my night :) rnFern xx
Date: 07/31/10 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 14
I really do hope you get to update this story soon, its really good.
Author's Response: thank you! :) chapter 15 is currently stuck right now cos ive written 2 versions and i dont know which one i wanna continue at this piont...they both end up with the same outcome eventually i just dont know which way i wanna get there so it might be a while yet, but im still on my summer holidays so hopefully i should get it out before i go back to college :) rnthanks for reviewing!! rnFern xx
Date: 07/29/10 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 14
this is really good
Author's Response: thank you! xx
Date: 07/15/10 09:09 am Title: Chapter 14
without teh next chappie we all die!
Author's Response: i will try and get 15 up as soon as possible....but i dunno where to take it, ive got half of two different versions written so far but im unsure which i wanna use yet...but thanx for reviewing!!!and try not to die while i keep writing :S rnlol :) rnthanx again rnFern xx
Date: 06/15/10 11:16 am Title: Chapter 14
dead?O_O
Author's Response: not yet....and at this point he wont die...depends if i feel evil when i write chapter 15 >:) lol rnthanx for reviewing!! rnFern xx
Date: 06/06/10 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 14
O______o evil!! Evil I say!! lol ughh I'm kind of mad at you for doing that to Bill but hey it your fic. Awwww poor Tom I feel super bad for him having to see Bill like that : ( good thing that Maria was there to help him out. Anyways hon I really hope you up date soon I love this fic soooo much!!
Author's Response: dont worry bout Bill....something good's maybe gonna happen eventually....this is almost as bad as its gonna get i think...but tbh after chapter7 - nothing could be as bad... >_> rni have none of the next chapter written and i have a LOT of college work to be doing so it might be a while before we see anything im sorry :( rnbut thank you sooo much for sticking with me and reviewing!!!!!! rnFern xx
Date: 06/06/10 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 14
*Falls to the floor dramtically* NOOOOOO!!! Darn the cliffys!! Good chapter, poor Tomi :( Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: -gasp!- oh no!!! *lends a hand* you okay??? LOL rnI know...im terrible for cliffy's :/ rnthank yous!!!!! rnsadly i have a lot of college work to do right now so its probably gonna be a while before theres another update...but hopefully i might get some more of this written (Y) rnthanx for reviewing!! rnFern xx
Date: 05/27/10 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 13
aaah come ooon why are you soooo slooow?come ooon we need to know x_x
Author's Response: awww im sorry!!! its cos ive been having trouble at home one way or another to get it up...im putting chapter 14 up tomorrow rnfern xx
Date: 05/22/10 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh god plz post! plz let bill be okay!
Author's Response: chapter 14 is written! but cos im evil im gonna wait until ive started number 15 :) which is soon i promise :)rnFern xx
Date: 05/22/10 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oooh I really liked this chapter! It was really good, I hope Bill is gonna be ok, can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: haha! why am i not surprised that you're the first person to review?? lol rnthank you! im not telling you yet....the next chapters written already but im not gonna post it yet obviously...so your gonna have to wait for a bit im afraid :) rnthanks for reviewing!! rnrnfern xx
Date: 12/26/09 10:03 am Title: Chapter 5
Uhhh poor Bill.
Author's Response: indeed :S i shocked myself when i got into this fic XD xx
Date: 12/26/09 09:56 am Title: Chapter 3
very good. I like how your chapters so far are so short and simple. Ur descriptions are great too.
I am beginning to like Tom in this light!! haha
Author's Response: thanks :) chapter 7's the longest i think :S yeah i like Tom like this too! thanx for the review xx
Date: 12/16/09 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 12
oh my god could tom get any cuter I love him like this!!
poor bill I hope life gets better for them both
Author's Response: thank you! rni know!!! i was fed of reading similar stuff with Bill instead so i switched it :) rnit might get better....it might not....lol rnit depends on my mood when m writing the last chapter....which wont be soon lol :) rnthanx for reviewing rnfern xx
Date: 12/16/09 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 12
I liked it! Something tells me the blond stranger was Gustav...just a hunch, can't wait to see the next chapter! Getting good.
Author's Response: yay!! rnid say your haunch is correct...i've got most of the others in it...and i need a saving grace....but i didnt want it to be maria....im not sure what im going to do with gustav though lmao :) rnthanx for reviewing rnfern xx