Date: 12/06/08 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 6
I just read the hole story.
I loved it!!!!!
plz update soon!!!
=D
Date: 12/06/08 11:43 am Title: Chapter 6
that was amazing!!!!!!
Date: 12/06/08 10:20 am Title: Chapter 6
:)
good chapterrr!
but tom, he should have totally done something for Amalie!!
gosh!
Oh, andd in the last paragrah, you put "-he could hear he." i think you wanted to put "-he could hear (her)."
maybe? lol. XD
Author's Response: Yes! Thankyou! and don't worry, Tom will come around xD ... eventually... -_- hehe
Date: 12/06/08 07:31 am Title: Chapter 6
it's so heartbreaking ...
Date: 12/06/08 04:11 am Title: Chapter 6
O_________________O *gasp* Edie DDD"X this is depressing!!!!! I hate Tom for being so mean!!!!!! But whoever said that was right! :D I like this kind of Tom!!! lol xDDDDD and I love the part where Tom says that his awesome guitar skills mask Bill's inadequacies of his voice! bahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!! xD
Author's Response: YAAY! good, cuz i've been trying to include more humor, but its getting difficult -_- HIII FIIISSSIII!!! and Tom will eventually get nice, i promise, it'll just take time xD
Date: 12/06/08 03:36 am Title: Chapter 6
AW man the emotions in this chapter were amazingly portrayed! YOU did a really good job hun!, really good job.
i have this little girl i teach swimming lessons to, her name is amiele, but its said am-ma-lee, your character *despite a simular name* reminds me so much of her!
thankfully my amiele is't being abused or anyhtign of the sort, but she so adorable clingy! of course being female i find this cute, lol, i'm sure for any boy it would be another story.
I love you portrayal of Tom, i think he's one of my favorite tom's to date, hes very human.
Author's Response: THank you SOOOO MUCH!!! It feels soo good to hear that Tom seems real, and that girl in your swimming lessons sounds adorable! (the name thing is strange though, O.O) hehe and just THANKYOU!! totally made my day! xD xD xD
Date: 12/06/08 02:58 am Title: Chapter 6
keep it comin!
Date: 12/03/08 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 5
:D:D:D:D:D ooooh! Just what I asked
Author's Response: You're welcome!! But if i remember you said something about the parents, did you want more background or something like that? Or, go ahead and tell me and i'll try to work it in xD and i'm sooo glad you like it!
Date: 12/02/08 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 5
Aw!
How cute!
Tom is sweet after all. xD
Great Update! x3
More soon?
Date: 12/02/08 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 5
awwwwww tht was sooo cute tomi is adorable and amalie is sooo cute
Date: 12/02/08 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 5
awwww!!
i wuv itt!:3
Date: 12/02/08 01:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Nothing special I can think of no. It would just be amazing if you kept writing the story the way you want lol. Your story is great and I think you're already doing an amazing job with it! ^_^
Date: 12/01/08 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh...keep it comin!
Date: 12/01/08 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 5
awww that was so cute i didnt kno tomi could be so sweet
Date: 12/01/08 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
*gasp* does that mean the next chappie is dedicated to moi? *0*
*tackle* ^-^
Author's Response: yes!! *LEECH!
Date: 12/01/08 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
O_O how the hell do my tears bring you joy???? lol
Author's Response: Because that means it was written well enough to make you experience the emotion of sadness! YAY! haha xD I WUUUV YOU!
Date: 12/01/08 06:59 am Title: Chapter 5
Awww so sweet. I really really really can't wait for more. Your story is one of the very best on here and it should win a noble prize. I think the boys of Tokio Hotel should even read it! :D I really hope that there is more funny stuff too like in chapter one. It's so great to read your story even if there are some sad parts. Keep on writing! You Rock! :D
Author's Response: You make me soo fuzzy! I'm speechless really! Have the boy's read it? Woah! I'd be soo honored and so nervous if they did, lol. And I would love to keep writing for you! Is there anything special you want to be worked in? xD
Date: 12/01/08 06:48 am Title: Chapter 4
This chapter is soooo sad. It made me tear up and cry. God I love your story to pieces sooo much, it truly is amazing.
Date: 12/01/08 05:50 am Title: Chapter 5
xD Ahh!!!!!! It's so freaking cute EDIE! *0* I LOVE YOU!
But I thought Georg was #2 on the phone? D: And Bill was number three?
._. and then I got confused at this: Bill and Tom both laughed as Who? heard Georg trying to respond to her over the phone.
;x fishie ist fuzzled... and I say yes to the question that you asked me on messenger! ;__; it would be sad, but then maybe Tomi will worry even more =D lol...
Author's Response: OKay I fix I fix!! Aaaand, then the life line shall break :'(, i almost don't want to do that to the poor girl, but it would be sooo goood! AND I WUV YOU TOOO! thanks for the ideas fisssi! next chappy is the hat thing hehe xD