Date: 11/03/08 04:05 pm Title: Chapter Three
bwahaha...so this chapter made me feel better about my "friend" and my "ex" fucking...atleast i know how tomi feels about getting angry and not forgetting or forgiving billa...
and yea...something was off at the concert, but i think that it was cuz they were like odee tired...i mean...they were playing shows like every other day, going back and forth btwn states, i'd be exhausted too xP...i luv the story, even with the itsy bitsy plot hole xP...and *licks lips*..him and that flying v meng...still cant beleive you missed that....h was REALLY fucking it....dammit i wanna be his guitah lol
Author's Response: ASSHOLES! The lot of them! Including Billa. Something was totally off, and I don't think it was only them being tired. Thanks for the love :) And there is a plot hole...but where? :P I wonder if its that noticable...and YES to the guitar fucking, its on my laptop now and thats all i did during computer class...watch him fuck it! I. CANT BELIEVE I MISSED IT! :( Makes me saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad but with any luck, when or if i see them again, I HOPE, he'll do it again! Glad to make you feel better and I'll seriously help hurt the two of them if you need help. :) Feel better!
Date: 11/03/08 04:02 pm Title: Chapter Three
Nice chappie =] I'm glad you explained what happened to make Tom so...upset, I guess ;) Bad Billa =(
Something was off? How so? O_O *lol*
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I was oringinally not going to, but then i decided, aw, fuck it, i'll write it in! Poor Tom...it just makes me want to give him a huuuge hug and be like, T.T it's alright! Yeah, something was totally off. They started late, messed up languages (something they claim has NEVER happened...until now) a few times and the twins werent nearly as close. It was intense...but I feel like i wasn't there, as opposed to Bamboozle, which I remember every second (XD inside joke) of it! Thakns for reviewing! :)
Date: 11/03/08 03:58 pm Title: Chapter One
sry for not replying...i was having a melt down...ie...my friend slept with my ex. the guy i dated for 5 years....yea, i'm exhausted from trying to figure out why she thought it was okay to sleep with him, lie to me, and still pretend to be my friend as she's badmouthing me. *sighs* today is sooo not a good day....T_T...i need some billa and tomi luvin to make me feel better
Author's Response: OH HELL NO HE DIDNT! Where is that asshole? I'll help you beat him up! Her too! Today isn't a good day...but I got my notebook back, obviously, and wrote three out during classes >< Theres about...five or six different versions of it, lol! :)
Date: 11/02/08 05:00 pm Title: Chapter Two
omfg.....i'm so pissed at billa!!! hurting my poor tomi!!! ^_^ you did well my friend, very well...and here's to review number 7 hahaha....i just thought....one day i'm totally kidnapping you and making you come visit mai college (more specifically my wall of Tokio hotel" and we're gonna eat junk food, get fat, watch movies and be crazy ^_^
Author's Response: Lol so am I! Thanks, I think that chapter SUCKS but it's nice to know you like it! :D Review number seven...whoot! Lol I need to do some SERIOUS reviewing...I'll do it during eighth period tomorrow, I have nothing to do then! Lol that's when I check things...and then I'll use ninth to keep writing! Kidnap away! Lol, do you have a facebook? This would make things totes easier...and yay for doing that! Eurotrip is good! :D Thanks for reviewing, and I'll email you the chapter when I get it done! (There's gonna hopefully be some...sport and merriment [thank you english teacher] coming [no pun intended] up soon!)
Date: 11/02/08 04:54 pm Title: Chapter One
lmao...really now? how did you miss that? that was some awesome guitah fucking...now only if i could be his guitah...he could play me and fuck me all night long..lol hahaha....and omg..that's a fucking brilliant idea!! i am soooo gonna google it so i can make his scent last foreva lol...and yay for willing kidnap (it like me and my friends calling rape, suprise sex xP)...we totally have to be Reden girls...although we'll have to talk Bill et Tom into marrying us, of course....and nooooo to gh4 sucking...atleast the songs shouldnt be too bad...and yay for chappie 2...(gonna review that in a sec...and it'll be our 7th review xP) and calm down on the video watching...we don't want you to faint from overexposure to Tom eh? haha
Author's Response: I dont know how i missed it! T.T I'm crying in the inside here! Yeah...I'd play for him! Lol, Bill style, by Haylz..that'd be nice :D YOU SHOULD! And make a bunch of bottles and sell them on ebay! Lol seriously, I wanna gooooo, lol! Not just reden girls...the inspiration for the NEXT Reden song! GH4's layout sucks! :( But it has TH on it...that's good. Lol I just went to church and got a lecture on obsessing over things and why we shouldnt and I'm thinking...Bill and Tom...Bill and Tom fucking...OOOH That's a nice image...
Date: 11/02/08 04:46 pm Title: Chapter Two
O_O
Wow. How'd I miss this?! -shifty eyes-
Totes good =] Oooh, I can't wait to find out more about what happened! And happy belated birthday!! I didn't get to go to the concert, but I heard it. *teehee* Sounded amazing. And 'YAY' for getting the water bottle cap xD
Author's Response: Lol! Thanks! The concert was AMAZING! Lol, read my review responses to Parallel to see my Bill impressions, lol. I'm glad you think it's good, and YAY for the cap! lol
Date: 11/02/08 03:29 pm Title: Chapter One
omg...he so totally did fuck his guitah....during live every second...here someone taped it: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6gHvg4vnjwI
please watch and enjoy xP...and omg to the camera not liking you..such a meanie....bwahahaha...i can't beleive you freaked out!!! atleast you didnt freak out to bill..cuz then it'd be a sin xP...and yea, i am hiding my towel..she's creepy lol...and yea it smells like bill...so fucking yummy lol...yay for fuckups they make me laugh and squeal lol...and as for the concert in germany...i am soooo kidnapping you and we are sooo seeing them live....again...plus we are sooo sneaking into tom's room, to eh, um, teach him english? and the american way bwahahahaha...and omg...you have gh4? you're like my new bestest friend...fuck every1 back at home...you are officially the shiznik...xP oh yea...for the link i sent you look at her other videos...she has two vids called "perverted tokio hotel moments" i know you'll like them as much as i did ^_^
Author's Response: ...How. The. FUCK. Did. I. MISS THAT?! I mean, that REALLY WAS guitar fucking! I guess I was looking for the normal one he does, lol. Yeah, the camera is a bitch! LUCKY. Dude, you should totally take that towel to one of those places where they make scents based off of items...I'd help pay for that! Eau de...Bill? Lol! Go ahead and kidnap me, lol, its not kidnap if its willing! Yeah, just pop up at his door like the Reden girl or like the girl that climed into the room they were ALL in in LA! GH4 SUCKS. Layout is horrible, its just....meh. And THANK YOU! By the way, chapter two is up now! :D *Off to watch that video again* Thanks for reviewing! :D
Date: 11/02/08 01:50 pm Title: Chapter One
O.O awww...your poor step sister...being grounded sucks...and dayum..we're up to 4 reviews xP...Tom's cock? omg..don't make me drool with lust/anticipation/all that good stuff. lol, and yea, you really are funny. mostly b/c you're being yourself lol...oh and the washing comment was cuz my roomate is germaphobic (i asked her...do you hate the towel cuz you hate germans? xP even though i know its just germs lol) and omg....i wanna sleep with it ^_^..oh and i made the TH symbol on my wall using pics from the concert...sooo cute xP...and yay for confidence...lucky bottle cap meng...and awwwww for his german...they're so cute...they're fuck ups are ok cuz they're still cute xP...and awww yea, i heard the mess up from Tomi in Raise your hand....it was cute and funny xP....i sooo couldn teach them english.....and a little something extra xP...yea, i wish they sang more german songs too...i think i wanna go to a concert out of the country, once they start touring again...i wanna hear them in german!! although the end where they played the songs in german was just too cute....i LOVED every second of it lol...
Author's Response: LOL absolutely! Meh, she deserved it! She ran off and didnt tell us where she went! Foru reviews is okay, makes meh happy! Lol! Yeah...but he TOTALLY wasn't fucking his guitar onstage like he always does...that was sad :( So looking foward to that :( I got five pictures and fifteen cellphone vids, I wanted more pictures but my camera (brother's camera actually) doesn't like me much :( I taped my poster up on my ceiling and I woke up this morning staring into Gustav's eyes and I FREAKED out, it was scary >< I'd hide the towel...your roommate might take it and wash it! This is gonna sound totally stalkerish but it probably smells like Bill! LUCKY. Yeah, the fuck ups are ADORAB(ILL)LE. They need english lessons, lol! So much for "We haven't made any language mistakes yet in concert", huh? I'm totally going to go to a concert in Germany...I'll buy a plane ticket and go mooch off my friend in Osnabrueck. But I probably won't be able to, paranoid parents. :( I wish I was 18 T.T Being a little teenager SUCKS, you can't do anything! The concert was great, it really was. I just got Guitar Hero four, and I'm off to play Monsoon until I can play it without missing notes! :D Thanks for reviewing! Chapter still isnt up yet...gah. I submitted it over an hour ago! :(
Date: 11/02/08 01:09 pm Title: Chapter One
what is this review number 3? xP i could not just ready your response and not comment back, you're just too funny xP. so i gotta write this quickly so i can finish my next two chapters for my story T_T i'm having some serious writer's block *pouts* anyways...yay for beta-ing, i am so never washing bill's towel xP. ouch...are you ok from the fall? and yea you did fall in front of me...its ok though, its what all the cool kids are doing nowadays...and omg...your description of Billa and Tomi were EXCELLENT....i dont know which is better...Bill's accent or Tomi's cockiness xP...they're both so fucking sexyyyyyyyyyyyy lol
Author's Response: I KNOW! Not just Tomi's cockiness...Tom's cock! >< Writer's block sucks, and I posted chapter swei but it's not goin through... :( I'm funny? Lol i don't think so but thanks! I'm okay from the fall, I do it ALOT (I hate math...and that usually gets me sent to the nurse >:D) And WHY would you wash it anyways?! Lol! This bottle cap is making me confident, lol, I've done things i would NEVER have thought of doing in the past two days! And yeah...here's another one! Missed a few words here and there but close enough! rn"Dis is eh vehry speshul zong to mee, ahnd eye vant ahl ohf u to knoe tzat Ahm vehry proud ohv you all und ahlways believe en yourselfs und behlieve en tomorohw! Sp-DOHN'T JUHMP!" Lol poor Billa...he and Tom are fucking hot but they can't speak english for shit! They messed up languages a few times too...Raise Your Hands Tomi started saying Wo sind and corrected himself, lol. I wish they sang more German songs...I still don't feel like I was really there! Oh yeah, we found Mira (step sister), my stepdad told me she went home with her friend's mom. She's right here and she's so grounded!
Date: 11/01/08 07:25 pm Title: Chapter One
xP....and i thought i wrote insanely long responses to my reviewers lmfao....and yea...they really were happy on stage...and Bill really is so friggen cute..his german accent makes me wanna faint xp...and omg tomi....man i'd become a groupie just for him bwahahaha...and yay for more chapters...i'll beta if you want me to, i don't mind, its not like i do any actual school work lol...and that bottle cap *shakes head* and omg..the nerds box...wtf!! OH MY GOD.....i met a girl that had Bill's towel...and...i kinda took it from her...bwahaha....well she was telling all her friends about it, and left it in a store, and i soooo took it...my friends were amd at me cuz i wouldnt let them have it..bwahaha...awesomeness ^_^
Author's Response: OH MY GOD! THE TOWEL?! *bjhvsadjkhkcgtklzjy54n854yguieftwghbvdzh* <---- inaudible screeching noises. Just fell out of my chair...I do that a LOT, I do believe I fell down right infront of you at the concert, lol, I'm okay! They were too happy... "Dis morning, vehn ve deed zound chek, it vas Kold, but nohw eet is Hot! Zo dhrink zome vater!" *Insanely big almost stupid smile and water tossing motions* It was ADORABILL, Tomi too! Lol, he was like, yeah, I know you guys all want a piece of this...lol. Would you be my beta? That'd be AWESOME! I'll be yours if you want me to, I catch mistakes like crazy...just not my own ones. I'm posting the next chapter SOON, I just need to throw in a few more words to set it up for chapter three! :) Thanks for reviewing again, and yeah, I do write insanely long responses!
Date: 10/31/08 05:54 pm Title: Chapter One
continueeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Author's Response: :D I am! Don't worry! Lol, I'm just...dead to the world right now and after seeing Bill and Tom, especially Tom, be so happy on stage, it kinda killed my inspiration! :( But I'm working on it...I believe I have almost a thousand words...and no beta. So what's taking so long is me having spelling OCD! And then re reading...changing things...not to mention my notebook where I had the next THREE chapters all written out was confiscated! :( Well...I'm working on it. Still have the bottle cap, it survived five people running away with it at school, not to mention my out of school friends. I have a bit of inspiration right now after my friend Vicki let me hold Bill's nerd box again...for my birthday present, lol. I'm gonna go keep writing, chapter should be up by tomorrow! :D Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 10/30/08 04:52 pm Title: Chapter One
love it! Please continue soon!!
I'm eager to know what happened between bill and tom!
Author's Response: I'm continuing! Thanks :) I got caught writing in my notebook during English class, and so I had to start the chapter all over again! What happened will be answered soon, don't worry! Thank you so much for reviewing!
Date: 10/28/08 09:12 am Title: Chapter One
Oh I love when Tom gets to be the crazy one. It's usually always Bill, but I think Tom is in a much better position to freak the hell out. Good job! I look forward to more. What's wrong with him??
Author's Response: Thanks! :) Me too, originally, when the journal part was written, I was going to have it be Georg or Gustav...I think I was leaning towards Gustav. Then I found it last week and chenged it to Tom. Tom is in a better position to lose it, his body language makes it obvious that he's very insecure, what with the tents he calls clothes. I believe that he wears them because he (ANYONE would) feels fat standing next to Bill, and so that's why he started hiding his body. There will be more, I'm working on it right now! What's wrong with him? I don't know...I haven't figured it out yet. And its all part of a suprise anyways :P Thank you SO much for reviewing, it just made my day :)
Date: 10/27/08 10:38 pm Title: Chapter One
Keep going please, it's very interesting so far!
Author's Response: Thank you! I will, don't worry! It'll be up in a few days, I hope!
Date: 10/27/08 09:47 pm Title: Chapter One
Very original and sexy.
Pls do continue^^
Author's Response: I will! Original is good, thank you! It's sexy? Hadn't thought of it that way, but I'm hoping things will get quite steamy and the rating will go up later on...it will. Thank you SO much, your review means a lot to me =)
Date: 10/27/08 08:36 pm Title: Chapter One
That's kinda odd... But very unique! I haven't seen many of these stories. I do believe yours is the first.
And anyway, I like it. Not cliche at all. If someone was to go crazy, it would probably be Tom. People say Bill is a perfectionist, that Tom is nothing but a "bad boy", but that's a load of bull.
Tom doesn't get nearly as much as he claims, and he's a lot more insecure that people would believe.
Bah, sorry, ranting. XD
Great story! I want more!! *favorites*
Author's Response: :D Really? I guess I haven't read anything like it yet...and yes, it is odd. So is my mind! (Spent first period in the therapist's office because I had a bit of an...episode, if you can call it that) I do think Tom would be the one to go crazy...he's under a LOT of pressure, with holding the sound up and all (can't trust Georg ><) and with having Bill as his twin. He is insecure, that's why he wears his caps and HUGE clothes. Standing next to Bill would make ANYONE feel fatand large in comparison, and so he hides himself behind the curtains that he calls clothes. Body language is a wonderful thing, hm? :) Thank you so much for reviewing and ranting is FUN, go ahead! Thanks for the favorite! I'll try to get more up during my German History (seemed cool at the time...not so much now!) class! :D
Date: 10/27/08 07:31 pm Title: Chapter One
I like twisted. Bring it on.
Author's Response: Thanks! :) Twisted IS fun and awesome! I'm just worried its too...awful. Thanks for the review though, it just made my day a hell of a lot better :)