Date: 10/27/08 05:45 pm Title: Chapter Forever
Wow.
I'll never listen to that song the same way. XDD
I loved this, it was creepy and awesome!
And that's a rad song too, btw ^^
Author's Response: i always thought that song was so fucking creepy, couldn't help it, it just popped into my mind! thank you!
Date: 10/27/08 05:11 pm Title: Chapter Forever
this was good.
hey u write three years to dont u?
cud u update that
plzzzz?!?!
Author's Response: thank you. and yes i do, i'm just on a little break from that story right now, i'll try to update soon.
Date: 10/27/08 05:08 pm Title: Chapter Forever
I really loved this story...it was very stark and powerful. Oh, and "Pictures" is one of my favorite songs, so kudos to you for incorporating it into your story!
Author's Response: Thank you :) !
Date: 10/27/08 03:38 pm Title: Chapter Forever
Wow.
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 10/27/08 02:59 pm Title: Chapter Forever
i think you managed to capture a form of art within another form of art.. if that makes sense. The photography was his art, and you wrote about it, making it your own :) Im sorry if this makes no sense... I just got home from school and have been dying to read or write something all day... This was good though, its different, I liked it :)
Author's Response: hmm...i think i get what you mean. Thank you for reading and leaving a review, I really appreciate them! <3
Date: 10/27/08 12:48 pm Title: Chapter Forever
Omg I swear this is my last review to the story. PLEASE YOU STAFF PEOPLE DONT THINK THIS IS SPAM OR WHATEVER XD
I just wanted to give you the link to a song, Hysteria (maybe you know it already?); it has potential, and together with YOUR endless potential, well... it can be something. It's worth a try ;)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DR2DpgV8fPw
Author's Response: i just opened it and i'm loving this beat wow. i'll have to try to form something, i think it could happen, thanks :)
Date: 10/27/08 12:23 pm Title: Chapter Forever
That song is severely creepy, I swear.
And you displayed that creepiness in this fic too, which is, admittedly, difficult to do. A lot of people can't work the horror genre because they don't understand the meaning of subtlety, of leading the reader along in a state of false security and then slamming them with something as grotesque as... well, as taking pictures of your victims. I didn't actually notice the genre on the fic before I started reading but I knew there was something wrong from pretty much the first line.
The thing was, I didn't know what that something was, so I kept reading, wondering if it was going to end in angst or death or heartbreak, and completely not expecting for Tom to turn out to be a serial killer - but what made it great was that when I went back to read it a second time I realized that the clues had been there all along. I just needed to put the puzzle together, and it came one piece at a time.
It was something that was meant to read quickly, one line after the other, snap snap snap, so it didn't come across rushed, despite the fact that you said you wrote it quickly. Cohesive and to-the-point and creepy. I loved. :)
Great work.
-Ella
Author's Response: *squish* thank you so much banananana, that is so sweeeet! at first i was reading your review and was thinking...omg she hates it, but PHEW! i'm so glad you don't think it's rushed either which is definitely one thing i thought it was. <3333
Date: 10/27/08 12:18 pm Title: Chapter Forever
I am listening to the song now, and god if I like it :o it is creepy indeed, but captivating, and SO fitting for the story, like... if you listen to the song while reading, you get a real film displayed in your mind.
I can't seem to be able to download it though, damn :/ shame.
Awesome, really. You should always be proud of your works, and feel confident about them, for they're as beautiful as the sun ^^
Looking forward to new (and old?) stuff from you
Author's Response: i knoooow, it's so just...OMG. no words for it, lol, but i really like it, maybe i should put a link to it in the story notes. i found it on the More Than Twins playlist, lmao! and thank you silvia, that's so sweet!! i'll definitely be writing new things, ideas keep coming to me, not so sure about old stuff (the chapter fics) unfortunately.
Date: 10/27/08 12:10 pm Title: Chapter Forever
:o wonderful.
For a reason, the whole story was displayed very neatly in front of my eyes while I was reading it; for a reason, I immediately understood it was Tom the one taking the pictures; for a reason, I got a taste of Possession from these; for a reason, and a big one, this goes into my favs.
Omg awesome job, you keep confirming how great of an author you are.
Btw Tom DOES have a thing for pics; it's very often that I see him taking pictures in videos or photos. Did you get inspiration from that fact, too? I need to listen to the song.
Author's Response: ahh thank you silvia! i wasn't as confident about this one but i'm feeling good now! it is like Possession, I didn't realize that! thaaaaaank you <3rnrnand no, i didn't even pay attention to the fact that tom does love to take photos, i just listened to that song and had this idea. the song is so fucking creepy, mostly in the beat, but the words have some hidden meaning and it's so perverted.rnrnthank you!!
Date: 10/27/08 12:04 pm Title: Chapter Forever
The idea is just wonderful and so exotic and just new. I loved it, absolutly adored it. It's amazing I don't know what else to say.
Author's Response: thank you, that's so nice! i'd never imagien someone would describe it as exotic, i love it! thank you so much imaginarynumbers, you're so sweet <3