Date: 06/05/10 01:24 pm Title: "Oh yes, Oh God, Bill!"
Only 14. Wow. That was an amazing piece of fluff from a 14 year old. I really enjoying reading this and hope it isn't the end.
Date: 10/31/09 03:33 pm Title: "Oh yes, Oh God, Bill!"
damn this is great!!!!!!! 5 stars!
Date: 04/23/09 06:14 pm Title: "Oh yes, Oh God, Bill!"
Bahahaha I loved the ending(: And don't worry, just because you put Kiro in this made you wicked awesome!
Date: 04/23/09 06:13 pm Title: "Oh yes, Oh God, Bill!"
Bahahaha I loved the ending(: And don't worry, just because you put Kiro in this made you wicked awesome!
Date: 01/18/09 08:55 pm Title: "Oh yes, Oh God, Bill!"
That was awsome!
And don't worry. I'm fifteen and I still suck at sex scenes!
Author's Response: Hahaha thank you :]I tried sending dirty things to my friend Brian and lets just say, it had a good result xD Thanks for the review :]
Date: 01/07/09 10:55 am Title: "Oh yes, Oh God, Bill!"
u don't suck at all!! I
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 11/04/08 06:14 pm Title: "Oh yes, Oh God, Bill!"
it IS short, indeed, but no end! NO END! screw the end, it should say "to be continued.." c'mon, don't be mean, i liked the couple, a lot. so..go, go on, write another chappy, go, go!
Author's Response: Maybe :)
Date: 10/31/08 07:50 pm Title: "Oh yes, Oh God, Bill!"
God, that was hot!!
Author's Response: YAY! thanks :3
Date: 10/26/08 08:16 pm Title: "Oh yes, Oh God, Bill!"
hahah! that was really funny! the beginning was hot like, and the 'Thrust in.
Thrust out.
Thrust in.
And come.'
was genious!
god, it reminds me soo much of where i've been this weekend ( a huge anime convention with lots of excess boy loving going on) lol
Author's Response: OOh i wish I could have seen that! xD And thanks :)
Date: 10/26/08 06:45 pm Title: "Oh yes, Oh God, Bill!"
Daaaaammmn. That's hawt!!
Author's Response: Thank you :3
Date: 10/26/08 06:02 pm Title: "Oh yes, Oh God, Bill!"
For a fourteen year-old it's not bad! I started writing slash around that age too and you're much better than I was! Plus, I love Bill/Insert CB member here fanfics. More needs to be written! Thanks for the awesome, smutty read.
Author's Response: Yay I will write more! Definatly ;)rnAnd THANKS! :D
Date: 10/26/08 05:20 pm Title: "Oh yes, Oh God, Bill!"
LOL.
Date: 10/26/08 04:56 pm Title: "Oh yes, Oh God, Bill!"
For fourteen years old, this was pretty damn good. I know some 14-year-olds that can't write for shyt, especially sex scenes. I love the last part:::"if you think [you're] done, [you're] a jackass."
my main problem with this is the grammatical errors. But other than that, it was great! I loved it.
Author's Response: Hehe thanks :) rnrnYeah sorry about the grammatical errors and spelling and stuff..I had to turn out the lights so I couldn't see what I was typing xD
Date: 10/26/08 04:39 pm Title: "Oh yes, Oh God, Bill!"
hahah.
nice (:
kiro! ♥
Date: 10/26/08 04:39 pm Title: "Oh yes, Oh God, Bill!"
hahah.
nice (:
kiro! ♥
Date: 10/26/08 04:39 pm Title: "Oh yes, Oh God, Bill!"
this was fun, really good! :D
hope you write more with Bill/kiro :)
Author's Response: I surely will try, thanks :)
Date: 10/26/08 04:39 pm Title: "Oh yes, Oh God, Bill!"
hahah.
nice (:
kiro!
Author's Response: Thanks :3
Date: 10/26/08 04:23 pm Title: "Oh yes, Oh God, Bill!"
pretty good for 14 XD i liked it you should try a longer story...with Bill and Kiro? i would so totally read that
Author's Response: yay maybe I will ;)rnI made a super short one about Kiro and Tom! But I left it in my locker at school...so...I'll make a new one! :D NICE AND LONG! And thanks for the review! They make me happy :D
Date: 10/26/08 04:14 pm Title: "Oh yes, Oh God, Bill!"
actually that wasn't that bad. but it could have used some more detail, but I still liked it. ^_^.
Author's Response: yayy so it wasn't horrible! Thank you :3 You made me happy :D