Date: 10/21/13 12:59 am Title: Chapter the Only
Wow. This was the first time I read this story, and it was breathtaking. I like the vagueness and mystery behind Bill's (I'm assuming) POV. It was nice to read his thoughts and insecurities, as if they were coming straight from his head. And I just feel very raw myself after having read such open emotions. Simply beautiful.
Date: 10/30/10 01:12 am Title: Chapter the Only
I loved it even thought it was sad.
Date: 05/12/09 01:54 pm Title: Chapter the Only
I loved it :D
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 01/01/09 04:23 pm Title: Chapter the Only
I really like this hun, even though it may have seemed like scattered thoughts, it was really a good, coherant piece. Nice job :)
Author's Response: yes, it's all my scattered thoughts composed into one story, sort of. thanks for reading and reviewing <3
Date: 10/29/08 03:42 pm Title: Chapter the Only
Yes, I was most definitley right to trust you when reading anything close to Billshido.
I like not knowing what happened, so that I can think of what happened.
I can't really judge this, though, since it appears neither of us is quite sure what it's supposed to be.
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 10/27/08 02:40 am Title: Chapter the Only
when he 'fell'. did he jump off something?
Author's Response: yes he did, it was an attempt at suicide. i pictured a roof when i did it, but it doesn't really matter, it's up to the reader.
Date: 10/26/08 07:03 pm Title: Chapter the Only
this is extraordinary
itīs really good, I like it^^
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! :D
Date: 10/26/08 03:24 pm Title: Chapter the Only
I'm here, as I promised. And you know what? I actually really freaking loved it. I tried putting Tom's name in there, but it didn't really... fit. So I just imagined it AU (as it is) where no Tom exists and it made it better. I love how fragmented it is, how Bushido isn't a bad guy, and there are some lines in here I'm sure I'll remember for all eternity. =) I love the summary and adore the title. All in all, a very nice job indeed. I can only applaud.
Author's Response: Yay! So glad you did! I'm glad Bushido didn't turn out like an ass, I really wanted to portray him as a really decent guy who just got really emotional and did a bad thing. Thank you muse! <3 I love your reviews the best!
Date: 10/26/08 12:07 am Title: Chapter the Only
I really liked the extended metaphor through the whole thing about the kitten especially the stray bit. Very well done, I liked it a lot.
Author's Response: thank you so much! <3
Date: 10/25/08 07:29 pm Title: Chapter the Only
I liked that the reader isn't quite sure of the identity of the "speaker" in the beginning. Sometimes not having everything spelled out for you is very good.
The writing was very good, some of the phrases really stand out. And I really loved Bill as the kitten/stray cat. Nicely done :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and leaving this very nice review! I'm glad you enjoyed the vagueness of the story, I like leaving things for readers to decide, and also letting them figure things out on their own.rnrn<3 thanks again
Date: 10/25/08 06:07 pm Title: Chapter the Only
Yes it made me feel weird too, but in a good way...that felt very...Significant. It was poetic in its efficient usage of words and very different than most stories I've read on here. In short, it lingers after you read it...which is a good thing. :)
Author's Response: Thank you, that's very sweet. I'm always happy to hear I have an impact and did something different :)
Date: 10/25/08 04:40 pm Title: Chapter the Only
I really like it, but I can't really say why. It's just plain good.
I feel kinda confused now, but not every story has to be clear. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you got one of the messages I was trying to convey. :)
Date: 10/25/08 03:50 pm Title: Chapter the Only
that was fantastic. i felt like i was reading something that i would have written. powerful, ponder some, and poignant. thank you for sharing.
Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! :)
Date: 10/25/08 03:48 pm Title: Chapter the Only
This made me a bit sad :(
But I liked it anyway :D
Author's Response: Thank you <3