Date: 10/30/10 10:41 am Title: Chapter 7
Awww ^^ cute story I enjoyed readin it
and what a happy ending........
Date: 05/29/10 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 7
I love it..
but not in the end..
Date: 11/23/08 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 7
Good story, kind of sad. There were quite a few mistakes, just so you know.
Date: 08/24/08 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 7
Amazing! soo good! You had me there a few times, thinking Bill was gonna die. Thank god he didnt! Amazing job!!
Date: 08/16/08 12:50 am Title: Chapter 7
Aww that was cute! I really liked it XD
Date: 11/20/07 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 7
yay happy ending for them
im so glad Bill didnt die
Author's Response: haha me too.. thanks for reading.. and Reviewing :D
Date: 11/20/07 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 5
your english is quite good but i feel so scared for Bill
Author's Response: ^^ we all do^^ hehe
Date: 11/20/07 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 3
tis scary to think what will happen to them. good story
Author's Response: haha thanks^^
Date: 11/20/07 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 7
aww cute ending.
Author's Response: aww thanks...:D
Date: 11/20/07 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 7
cuuuuuuuuuuuuute ^_^ i'm so happy he's ok!! yay!!
Author's Response: :D.. i actually planned on killing him^^..
Date: 11/20/07 07:56 am Title: Chapter 6
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :( please don't kill him :'(
Author's Response: MWAHHAHA!.. the next chapter will be the last.. i think.. or the next after that.. we'll see^^
Date: 11/18/07 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 5
i like it. a lot of suspense. good job. and your english isn't bad =)
Author's Response: oh thanks so much :D
Date: 11/18/07 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
no don't kill bill :(
Author's Response: ^^
Date: 11/18/07 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 4
this is good :D
Author's Response: oh thanks..
Date: 11/18/07 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
OMG!! please don't kill any of them :( poor Bill :(
Author's Response: haha.. keep reading and see.. the next chapter will be out in about.. hmm 20 min?
Date: 11/18/07 10:33 am Title: Chapter 2
I kind of like it!!and don't worry, English is not my fisrt language too but I can tell that your isn't that bad
please update soon!
Author's Response: I'm from Norway, so it isn't my first either. thanks, i will^^
Date: 11/18/07 09:30 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm scared. I really am. You can't kill Bill! Think about what it would do to Tom. Is he going insane? It seems like he is. Please update soon, this was really good!
Author's Response: hehe tahnks. i will.. read and you will find out what happens^^
Date: 11/18/07 09:28 am Title: Chapter 2
this story is pretty good ^_^ update soon please :D
Author's Response: thanks.. i will
Date: 11/18/07 09:26 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I like this! I like it a lot. Good start, I can't wait for what happens next. Poor twins! Tom must be feeling really awful about letting his brother down. And poor Bill, I wonder what will happen to him?
Author's Response: hehe thanks^^ glad you liked it..
Date: 11/18/07 08:12 am Title: Chapter 1
This story is interesting! please continue :)
Author's Response: thanks^^ i will