Date: 02/09/26 01:37 pm Title: The Winner
And then he went on with Tom fucking Bill first.
Date: 04/20/25 09:29 pm Title: The Winner
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 04/21/23 12:02 am Title: The Winner
Forgive the barrage of reviews a bajillion years later! I'm still catching up on reviews one author at a time from when I got into the fandom a year ago! Just a crazy little "project" to put some love on the stories I've read lol... which includes this one!
Date: 08/26/11 11:11 am Title: The Winner
OMG, Tom is hilarious! lol. That last line was HHHAHAHAHHAHA!!!!
But really, this story is really amazing. You capture emotions so damn well, and it's realistic, like you're really in Bill's head. First person stories usually sound immature but this was perfect. And so so soooo sexy. I love the way you developed it, and how you got a perfect mix of funny, sweet, angsty, and sexy. I just loved this all around. Prefect. :)
Date: 01/19/10 06:18 pm Title: The Winner
I don't normally read twins with first person narrative but this was SOOO worth it. I'm properly in love with it! :D
Date: 11/11/09 01:21 pm Title: The Winner
lol it's hilarious that Tom made it a competition. I suppose that's comfortable, normal, a reflex. I liked it I was lovely and twincesty and I like that it wasn't "love" right from the beginning. That they hadn't been yearning for each other forever. That is was just something that seemed to happen. Well done.
Date: 08/03/09 12:29 pm Title: The Winner
hahahaha
"i knew i'd make you come first".
hahaha tom is such a competitive bastard.
lol i loved it
Date: 05/05/09 09:15 pm Title: The Winner
hahaha. i love this, and i love competitive!tom. and i love the image of bill watching tom coming undone, guhh.
Date: 02/22/08 04:05 pm Title: The Winner
Read it again. Still amazing. Competitive Tom is such a laugh.
Date: 02/06/08 01:50 am Title: The Winner
LOL. Perfect closing.
I love that they didn't exactly fall in love in the end. There isn't always just one extreme or the other in life, and this shows that really well. Great writing, and great great smut.
Date: 12/11/07 01:05 pm Title: The Winner
fantastic amusing and sweet at the same time
Date: 10/07/07 05:32 pm Title: The Winner
Love it!!! Very nicely written.
Date: 10/07/07 11:06 am Title: The Winner
woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow i mean... wow. i'm lost for words. that was so cool. that was brilliant
Date: 09/22/07 09:07 pm Title: The Winner
It is true, Tom always gets on top. Nice work ;)
Date: 07/15/07 04:42 pm Title: The Winner
Wow, this was really good. Nice work.
Date: 05/31/07 07:20 am Title: The Winner
You always end your fic on such a brilliant note, and it's usually always Tom that says it.