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Reviewer: TimePassed Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/12 11:15 am Title: Chapter 7

Please more?

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/11 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 7

TOBI CANNOT GET AWAY WITH WHAT HE'S DONE!!!!! *stabs tobi with katana multiple times* aaaaaaaaaah, i feel better... XD

Author's Response: lol don't worry, he won't. or will he? muahahahah

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/11 02:30 am Title: Chapter 7

cant wait for more


poor bill

Author's Response: working on it now!!! should be a new chapter or two up within a week. :)

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/11 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

it is now
the only two stories i have read that have made me physically sick were a story by Misa (who is a friend of mine) about a worm, and some story about Tom being a devil worshiper and having a fantasy about biting Bill and shooting him in the head and throwing his brains on the wall

Author's Response: 0_0 Those sound gory!

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/11 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 2

im finally reading this
it took me a while to stomach it
i actually started it a long time ago but couldnt get past the second chapter

Author's Response: awwwww, I hope it's okay for you!!

Reviewer: omgthatshot05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/11 10:19 am Title: Chapter 7

Bill needs to be strong so he can put Tobi's ass in jail for a long time!! Tom need to be there for Bill right now more then anything in the world.

Reviewer: omgthatshot05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/11 04:08 am Title: Chapter 6

Hell nah I don't hate you I'm pretty happy you updated. Can't wait to read more yay!!

Author's Response: i'm glad you guys aren't too mad at me. lol i'm writing chapter 7 now. :)

Reviewer: Mariesen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/11 04:07 am Title: Chapter 6

Oh man that was very brutal ;-;
But I'm so happy to see this getting updated and that Tom caughts Tobi so that bastard can rotten in jail >____>

Reviewer: Onryo Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/10 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 5

Please don't stop writing this story! It's awesome and very catchy. I am sorry that I haven't led you a review before but I was sure I had written it but to my horror I hand't. So, I apologize for that and I am begging fot you to update! Please update! The story is fantastic!

Reviewer: AndeinerSeitenureineWeile Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/26/09 12:51 am Title: Chapter 5

please continue this story!!!

Author's Response: I promise you guys that I will put a huge effort into updating this story! I will not abandon it, I have just been suuuuper busy!

Reviewer: Zina Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/09 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

Finally you have updated!! I was afraid that you had stopped it:-( I was so happy when I saw that you continue to write a new chapter, and a very exciting one!! Please this time update more sooner!!

Author's Response: well I am in New York with Cinema Bizarre right now, but I will be home tomorrow, and who knows, I may even write on the plane then post when I get home. :) I am off to the venue for sound check now because I'm late, but I'll be back to writing later. :)

Reviewer: slicedtopieces Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/09 02:16 am Title: Chapter 5

OMG you don't even know how much I died waiting for an update and then you end the chapter there?!?!?! Evil!!!! I love this story and can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work

Author's Response: ooo well then you might not like the plot twist I have coming. haha

Reviewer: Zina Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/17/09 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is a very good, intense, dramatic fic!! I like your Dunja too!! Please, update soon!!!

Author's Response: thank you! and between Dunja and Natalie I saw Dunja being more of a motherly figure between the two. I think it's working out nicely.

Reviewer: slicedtopieces Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/16/09 03:38 am Title: Chapter 4

What?! You can't end the chapter there! I'm absolutely loving this story. You write exceptionally well. I'm looking forward to the next update

Author's Response: i am just finishing up a one shot then i will do the next chapter :)

Reviewer: Tokio Jax Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/15/09 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh no...u used my favorite guy as the bad guy! Why oh why?????? Saki was the mean one! But then again he was too old to do anything anyway....
I guess I'll have to look past it cause the story is good. Keep going!

Reviewer: MagicalGirl379 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/15/09 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 4

OMK, go on!!!

Reviewer: Jenna Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/15/09 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 4

I'm SO glad this story was updated!! Very intense chapter, I loved it. :D

Author's Response: thank you so so much. :) I will write when i am on the way home and hopefully ome up with another chapter within a day or two!

Reviewer: Onryo Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/15/09 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 4

OMFG! The story is awesome and it's really well written! I could imagine everything (even I wish I couldn't imagine the awful parts but so far I can't control my mind XD).
I am nervous right now! What will happen to Bill? Will Tobi do something to Tom or Bill? Will Tom kill Tobi whenever he finds out the whole crapy thing? I mean it I CAN'T WAIT! I almost fainted when I read that Bill was still bleeding... I ended up crying at that part! It was so emotional, I just saw Tom standing there looking at his pale for always beloved Bill and I felt like.. like... well, I really can't write it down but it was a very bad feeling, as if someone had pulled out a piece of my heart!
I said it before and I say it again: IT WAS AWESOME! And I am looking forward to read the next so please don't leave me with just this or else I think I'll die of anxious and sadness -kind of extremist, uh? XD-.
You're going to my favourites! That's a fact! See you when you publish the next chapter!

Kind Regards,

Onryo

P.S: excuse my mistakes n.nUu, english is not my mother language XD.
P.S: Just a question... why Tom calls Bill "Billa"? I don't know if it's real or not and I've read it in thousands of FanFics n.nUu. I would be glad if you clarify that little thing for me n.n

Author's Response: Thank you so so so much for taking the time to say all for that. I am glad you enjoy the story so far!rnrnand as for the Billa thing,.. I had heard that Tom calls Bill that as a nickname just like Bill calls Tom "Tomi" i just think it's cute so i use it. :)

Reviewer: dreamersalive414 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/15/09 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 4

oh no!!!!!! poor tomi!!!! and billa!!!!! and tobi needs to die a painful slow death in the middle of nowhere...

Author's Response: i like Tobias, I just made him the bad guy because i can honestly not think of another fic that i have read where Tobi is even a main character let alone the main villain. :) i thought it would be a change.

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/08 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 3

oh my! this is really good, great angst, poor billa! i love the relationship between him and tom. i hope tom figures things out soon. keep up the great work, both the angsty and sweet moments. update soon! =)

Author's Response: I am working on more right now!! It might be a little while though because i am also working on 2 more one shots and more chapters to "Come and Rescue Me" (which i have been neglecting.) lol

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