Date: 11/20/08 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
awww seriously you guys are awesome and a half!! i will be writing more sometime this week!!!
Date: 11/20/08 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 3
:) write more! and make Saki to come back and Tom to find out whatīs going on... I Really like your fic :)
Date: 11/20/08 03:54 am Title: Chapter 3
Pretty cool and sad, I wanna read more :D
Date: 11/11/08 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 3
loved the twin time. made me wish Tom would pick up on something... damn i could kill Tobi right now... i love your story more and more with each chapter! bravo!
Date: 11/11/08 11:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Short but AWESOME.
Author's Response: awww thanks guys!! I am writing a twincest one shot that i needed to get out of my head then i will get back to this story. :)
Date: 11/11/08 09:21 am Title: Chapter 3
AHHHH!!!! NO!!!! PLEASE Finish!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm gonna die if you don't!!!!!!!!!I hte anticipation!!!!!
Date: 10/28/08 04:53 am Title: Chapter 2
i feel bAd 4 bill he gets raped all the time
Date: 10/26/08 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
Like what you got going on here:) Poor Billa!
Tom is gonna find out soon right? and make it all better for Bill... canīt wait for chapter 3!
Date: 10/26/08 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
i love it i love it i love it.........
Author's Response: awww thank you so much!!! I will try to get another chapter up tonight!
Date: 10/26/08 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
the question is why hasn't Bill told anyone about this? what's Tobi got on him?
Author's Response: well for anyone out there that has been abused, you'd know that you are scared, and vulnerable, and ashamed, and usually you'll believe that people will think you're dirty and not believe you.rnrnthat and Tobi being a long time friend and basically trusted family member for the boys as well adds to it.
Date: 10/26/08 04:28 am Title: Chapter 2
i hate you for making Bill hurt. :(
But the story is good.
So... You're forgiven. ^__^
But please continue soon!
*puppyeyes*
Date: 10/25/08 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
NOOOOOOOO!!!!! POOR BILLA!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! FINISH AND GET TO THE PART WHERE TOMI SAVES HIM OR SOMETHING!!!!!! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!!!!!!
Date: 10/25/08 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 2
wonderful wonderful story. I love the motifs of blood and water found in this story. Lovely job and I am stoked about the inclusion of a motherly Dunja. It's something I also include and I love it. Great job!
Author's Response: aww thank you!! I figured that I would add characters that are honestly usually only mentioned periodically in the background. you know give them a chance. lol glad you guys like it!!rnrnxx
Date: 10/25/08 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
Pooor billa!! =O
I actually liked chapie its gud nw that tom knows sumthing is wrong with bill
Date: 10/25/08 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
*sniffles* I miss Papa Saki!
Date: 10/25/08 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 2
Gosh! Please continue!
I want Tom to save him now! Goddamnit!
Date: 10/24/08 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
hell yeah you should continue... i love this story already too much to let it go to waste! i want more :)
Author's Response: writing as we speak guys. :)
Date: 10/24/08 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Continue! Continue! It's not like I like to see Bill suffering, but this is a good story and it's not even half finished! Give the people what they want! XD Keep writing like the awsome person you are!!!
Author's Response: awwww *blush* you guys are super amazing. I am going to get my nails done fast then I will be back and writing. give me a few hours! lolrnrnmuah!!
Date: 10/24/08 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is sad but I like sad so I love this!!!Q!! (I thought of taking the Q typo out but I'm leaving it in because you're story is quewl ^_^ yeah I'm that dorky) anywho I really like it so continue it or I'll cry. GOOD JOB!!!!! ^_^
Date: 10/24/08 10:46 am Title: Chapter 1
oh! You have to continue. I've never seen Tobi as the bad guy and I'm kind of liking it. Not that I don't like Tobi. I love the man but this story is amazing so far. I can't wait to see where this goes.