Date: 11/11/08 07:13 pm Title: Tom's Plan
whaat no! i dont want it to enddd!!
Author's Response: well...cheer up! still another 3 or so chapters to go =DD
Date: 11/11/08 04:46 pm Title: Tom's Plan
ahahaha tom IS an asshole!! omg if i were her, i would have kneed him in the groin and walked away...bahaha
oh who am i kidding? i would love it if tom did that to me!! =P
Author's Response: haha i was gonna say 'please, if u were in that situation, ud grab his ass right back!' not that i blame u since i would too. carmel isn't very bright, i guess.lol
Date: 11/11/08 03:31 pm Title: Tom's Plan
:O omg! i late it! i love it because I know its not true (sadly) but i hate it because Tom is being a dick xD
LMFAO
It rocked my fucking socks :D
sigh. want carmel to like Tom back. can you do a Tom/OFC just for me? please ? :D I'll love you forever & a day Shanaynay :)
Jessiicaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa x
Author's Response: lmfaoo nice rhyming. lol no worries my next story will be a Tom/OFC =] aww dont u already love me forever and a day?? i is sad now.
Date: 11/11/08 02:00 pm Title: Confusion
Aww I love Gustav... this chapter just made me love him even more.
Author's Response: lmfao i kno!!! gustav's just amazing.
Date: 11/11/08 01:52 pm Title: Locks
oooh boy! A love triangle between Carmel and the Kaulitz Twins...
Date: 11/11/08 12:50 pm Title: Tom's Plan
Naughty Tomi! >:o
loved the update!!
Author's Response: he most def is! but that's ok coz he's tom. thank u!! =D
Date: 11/11/08 08:58 am Title: Tom's Plan
well if bill will get her in the end she shall at least kiss tom once *-* (for the media)
Author's Response: lol the ass-grabbing wan't enough for u? haha.
Date: 11/11/08 07:43 am Title: Tom's Plan
Awesome love it [:
Date: 11/11/08 06:14 am Title: Tom's Plan
I feel sorry for Tom! Looks like he really likes Carmel =(
Date: 11/11/08 02:52 am Title: Tom's Plan
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
more please
(:
xx
Author's Response: yupyup =]
Date: 11/11/08 01:07 am Title: First Encounter
lol the guy/girl question was funny =]
Author's Response: haha thanx. it can be pretty confusing tho. lol...no offense to bill, of course. i adore him x]
Date: 11/11/08 01:06 am Title: Tom's Plan
;___; I feel so sorry for Tom, though I ship Team Bill.
Author's Response: i feel sry for...actually, i have no idea. lol. i rly did give tom a sucky part tho xD
Date: 11/11/08 12:26 am Title: It Would Have Been Better if it Wasn't True
“You just taste so good!”
"you can continue your…cuddling…later"
i loves those lines (:
haha
cannot wait for next chapter (:
Author's Response: haha thanx. i finished my next chapter so we just have to wait for the update =]
Date: 11/10/08 08:39 pm Title: It Would Have Been Better if it Wasn't True
once again
awwwwwwwwww poor tom =(
Author's Response: chyea. i'm feeling quite guilty over the situation i've created. lol
Date: 11/10/08 08:36 pm Title: It Would Have Been Better if it Wasn't True
i still love it.
i'll never love another dreadlocked player the same way =P
Author's Response: xDD of course. tom is special that way.
Date: 11/10/08 04:19 pm Title: It Would Have Been Better if it Wasn't True
omg i feel so bad for tom D:
i don't know which team to be on !!?
TOM ?..BILL ?
Great story by the way :P
Author's Response: lol i do too but sadly for him my fav is still bill. u can play on both teams if u want to! it would just be a little...challenging =P danke!!
Date: 11/10/08 01:06 pm Title: It Would Have Been Better if it Wasn't True
OMG OMG OMG OMG. that was top. this is beyond the rating scale. OMG ! GET BACK WITH HIM ?! GO TOWARDS BILL!? what the fuck to do ! HINT ME GURLIE !
ADL x
Author's Response: yayyy!!! thank u!! yes it is a very difficult decision. i only wish my problems were as amazing as carmel's xDD lol i can't hint when i'm not actually sure yet! lmfaooo...ADL RIGHT BACK ATCHA!! xoxo
Date: 11/10/08 01:04 pm Title: It Would Have Been Better if it Wasn't True
Carmel*
Date: 11/10/08 01:04 pm Title: It Would Have Been Better if it Wasn't True
caramel is so stupid!!! Oh God
Author's Response: =[[[ my heart has just ripped into shreads becoz of u. lol jk.
Date: 11/10/08 08:42 am Title: It Would Have Been Better if it Wasn't True
wow i missed so much, i have been away for a couple of days and returned to update heaven lol, i love how this is going, i love a jealous tom, keep going i cant wait to see how it ends!
Author's Response: haha i'm glad ur not disappointed. hope ur couple of days were nice. i need a vacation too =[