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Reviewer: Xtokioangelx Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 09:44 pm Title: Threesome? Oh, Guess Not.

you and your stupid cliff hangers aksdhagr!! grrr lol

Author's Response: i'm sorry, but i'm just addicted to ending my chapters with a 'DUN DUN DUUUUNNNN!!' =]

Reviewer: RockChickSinger Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 09:41 pm Title: First Encounter

Btw, i can assure you, as an english person, that we can cay Fuck just fine lol

Author's Response: lmfaooo. i'm sure, but i still wanna hear it. i'm not doubting ur verbal skills. xD

Reviewer: RockChickSinger Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 09:36 pm Title: Threesome? Oh, Guess Not.

Poor Tom, he seems to be taking it hard, but i love how Bill was really forward with her lol, looking forward to the next exciting installment!! (Cue cheesy theme music)

Author's Response: haha of course. forward is one way to put it xD yay!! thanks for the cheesy theme music. i appreciate it.

Reviewer: xNightwishx Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 09:34 pm Title: Threesome? Oh, Guess Not.

love it!

Author's Response: i can die happy now. x]

Reviewer: Zombiemovie8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 09:30 pm Title: Threesome? Oh, Guess Not.

ooooooohhh!!

:o

They got freaky! *does thrusting motions*

And my puddle melts are always good ;D

Author's Response: LMFAOOO!!! wow. i'm not dignifying that with a proper response. xDD yes. they got freaky. *does pelvic thrusts in return*

Reviewer: talyntokiohotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 08:59 pm Title: Probably Should Have Left it to Gustav

omg lol nicechap iloved it

Author's Response: cool beans!! yes. i said cool beans. i felt like it. =]

Reviewer: CheerBaton Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 06:10 pm Title: Probably Should Have Left it to Gustav

i'm like cryiing for Tom right now='[[[[[

Author's Response: lmfaoo aww im sowwy =[

Reviewer: unreachable102 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 06:06 pm Title: Probably Should Have Left it to Gustav

aww tom is going through so much shitt =//
lmaoo. but its getting interestingg :DD

Author's Response: and that is y i dared to put him through so much shit xDD if i was just making him suffer w/out making the story interesting then i'd probably get hate mail. lol.

Reviewer: _Schrei Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 01:53 pm Title: Probably Should Have Left it to Gustav

fuck shit fuck shit indeeedy!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

die cliffy die!

:]
JESSICAAAAAAAAAAAAAx

Author's Response: i honestly can't imagine a british person saying 'fuck'. ur gonna have to change that. ur OBLIGATED to change that or else it's the end of our ADL. =]

Reviewer: 10soley Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 11:46 am Title: Probably Should Have Left it to Gustav

Tom, I'll be your girlfriend instead! Key?
*-*

Author's Response: i'm sure that comforts him a lot. x]

Reviewer: bluebook Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 11:19 am Title: Probably Should Have Left it to Gustav

omg. DRAMA !!! [[:

Author's Response: YAYA!!! and not 'ja ja' bcoz i'm not trying to german. so just YAYA! hahaha.

Reviewer: luvme189 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 10:03 am Title: Probably Should Have Left it to Gustav

tom is STILL an asshole!
i dont blame you though.

p.s. nothing anyone ever writes, fiction or not, will ever make me stop loving tom =)

Author's Response: lol that's good. stay strong w/ ur love for him. and yes he still is an asshole. but...and idk if this makes it any better...he's an asshole coz he rly likes Carmel. =D

Reviewer: Connie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 05:27 am Title: Probably Should Have Left it to Gustav

Whooot?!?!? I feel sorry for them all, actually.

Author's Response: i kno. at this point, i might as well just kill all of them off. JUST KIDDING!! or am i =O

Reviewer: Zombiemovie8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 12:43 am Title: Probably Should Have Left it to Gustav

*melts into a puddle*

Author's Response: teehee x] i'm sry. this is a pretty crappy response. i realize that.

Reviewer: Xtokioangelx Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/08 10:37 pm Title: Probably Should Have Left it to Gustav

lol im like checking every chance i get to see if theres another chapter! and the whole "we heard another door opening and closing. tom was gone" yeah definitely want to find out what happens!

Author's Response: that's y i use cliffhangers ;DD haha i'm glad ur liking it. i update every day =D

Reviewer: RockChickSinger Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/08 10:31 pm Title: Probably Should Have Left it to Gustav

I loooovvveee this, god i wish they were fighting over me, ok ill get out of LALA land now, i cant wait to see how it turns out, so many possiblities, but i love the way its going, you rock!

Author's Response: tell me about it! it sux being jealous of ur own made up character. i'm never getting out of lala land! lol. thanks again!! =D

Reviewer: bubbles47 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/08 09:06 pm Title: Probably Should Have Left it to Gustav

Oh my god...She must really feel bad now! But great story, keep it up!

Author's Response: lol yeah i'd feel pretty crappy if something like that happened coz of me. thank u! i WILL keep it up! ;D

Reviewer: sunnyASHBA Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/08 08:39 pm Title: Probably Should Have Left it to Gustav

hahaa
GO BILL >,<
aww pooor tomi (:
greatgreatness

Author's Response: lol yeah i mean i feel bad for tom but i'm more into bill so...o wells =] danke!

Reviewer: bubbles47 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/08 08:33 pm Title: One Final Song

Lyrics are great if its you're first time! And as for the "Kaulitz Konflict", all I have to say is...Craaaaaaaaaaapppppppp! Bummer for her! Great story!

Author's Response: lmfaooo 'kaulitz konflict' xDD thank goodness there isn't another k in that or i'd be in trouble. lol. yeah it's my first time thinking about lyrics so danke =] and i wouldn't say it's a complete bummer. if i was in her situation i'd be very happy hehehe. thank yas!!

Reviewer: jellyxbeans Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/08 07:43 pm Title: Probably Should Have Left it to Gustav

wow i did not see that coming
lol
it's so DRAMATIC!
i'm so excited i can't wait to see what happens next =D

Author's Response: lol thank u very much. i think i'm slowly turning into a drama queen. the horror! haha yay =D

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