Date: 11/04/08 02:06 pm Title: It's all Downhill from Here
Oooohh the ironyyyy!! XD I can't wait for the next part; keep up the good work.
Author's Response: danke =D
Date: 11/04/08 11:58 am Title: It's all Downhill from Here
OMG..
Author's Response: hurray!! excitement!! i wasn't expecting excitement. xD
Date: 11/04/08 09:21 am Title: It's all Downhill from Here
more, please
Author's Response: yup yup =]
Date: 11/04/08 09:21 am Title: It's all Downhill from Here
i hopeyou take this is help andi really hope it doesnt hurt your feelings. alittle boring but not as bad as ihave read from other people. you have alot of talent. i have about 7 or 8stoires going but i dont put them up cause i get stuck andfuck it up so yeah. your other chapters are good so your alound one not so good. just keep them coming. i think in the next chap shouldbe a short part of the signing, they all meet the M.F. dude, and tom catchs M.F. trying to do something to Melly. i hope this helped.
Author's Response: yeah of course it did!!! i knew this chapter was kind of a filler, but i couldn't help it (i was tired as hell while writing it). my next chapter is gonna be more exciting because...well...let's just say the romance is going on more than in front of cameras. ;DD
Date: 11/04/08 05:08 am Title: It's all Downhill from Here
keep writing ^^
let's see where evrything goes ^^
still love it :)
*read ya soon*
Author's Response: yay thank u!! i was worried i lost most of the readers w/ this chapter. =/
Date: 11/04/08 04:59 am Title: It's all Downhill from Here
Wow i feel so honored, a chapter dedicated to me, thankyou, i feel special now lol, cant wait to find out more about michael, he must have really messed her up, i hope we get some romance with one of the twins too, thanks again!!
Author's Response: ur welcome!! haha i'm sorry it was kind of a boring chapter tho =[ yup he sure did, and u'll see ;D
Date: 11/03/08 07:07 pm Title: A Trip Down Memory Lane
omg
woah
eww what a perv a 25 yeard old
how was she back then ?
but i like it
it still feels gross though but asowmen
dude you r good at writing this
i cant wait for the next one !
Author's Response: lol yup. 10 year difference. ud be surprised how many times things like that happen 0.o what was she like? obviously antisocial and depressing xDDD not that she's much different now. but now she's even lest trusting. aww thank u! =D
Date: 11/03/08 09:09 am Title: A Trip Down Memory Lane
more now please
Author's Response: patience is a virtue, my friend. =P lol it's ok i'm the most impatient person i kno.
Date: 11/03/08 12:30 am Title: A Trip Down Memory Lane
liked it liked it liked it.
OOO! i bet his book is stuff from her journal! she should sew him!!! ahah thats what i would do.
Author's Response: hahaha well maybe. we shall see. and now i might make up something wacky to throw u guys off xDD
Date: 11/02/08 08:31 pm Title: A Trip Down Memory Lane
this is really interesting. :) i like how you write, and carmel's personality is great :)
Author's Response: woohoo!! thank u. i tried to make her odd but lovable. xD
Date: 11/02/08 08:24 pm Title: A Trip Down Memory Lane
poor carmel, explains why shes not very trusting, great chapter, please keep going!!
Author's Response: yes exactly! i think i might dedicate the next chapter to u since u always read/comment my stuff. =DD
Date: 11/02/08 04:34 pm Title: A Trip Down Memory Lane
:o
this explains everrrything!
(love it)
can't wait for next update :D
Author's Response: haha thank u!! i think so too =]
Date: 11/02/08 04:33 pm Title: A Trip Down Memory Lane
OMG. stupid mike!!!
he stole her 'life' :o !!
Author's Response: *nods* yup, he's a butt. using carmel for her talent >=[ lol i love how i'm getting angry at my own imagination. xDD
Date: 11/02/08 04:31 pm Title: A Trip Down Memory Lane
What an ass... -.-
Gahh... He´s an idiot.
But i love the chapter anyways... :)
Author's Response: haha yup he def is. =D
Date: 11/02/08 12:47 pm Title: Blast from the Past
more now ahh *faints*
Author's Response: haha. actually, ur gonna get ur wish. lol i have a chapter ready now so it'll be out soon.
Date: 11/02/08 08:50 am Title: Blast from the Past
uh great job :D
Author's Response: uh thank u. lol
Date: 11/01/08 09:34 pm Title: Blast from the Past
I just found this, I am so blind! Why are you asking me who this Foyer guy is? It's your story!
Which one hopes you'll be updating soon!
Author's Response: haha well it's a cliffhanger question. plus, i'm not completely sure yet. i keep changing my plans so that i can surprise ppl xDD
Date: 11/01/08 08:34 pm Title: Blast from the Past
awesome possum!!! haha =P
i bet Michael Foyer is a dude who raped her 0.o
zomg im a genious lol
Author's Response: lol hey don't jump to conclusions!! rape is way too obvious and i try to surprise ppl ;D
Date: 11/01/08 07:12 pm Title: Blast from the Past
nice! cliffhanger, cant wait for more!
Date: 11/01/08 05:29 pm Title: Blast from the Past
i'm in such suspense!!!
lol i really love this story =D
Author's Response: awesome!!! haha i love creating suspense x]