Date: 11/10/08 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 11: My jollies like getting you off too xD
this was a really good chapter!! i loved it. cant wait to read the next ones.
Author's Response: awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.....i LOVE reviews, they make me squealgigglecough xD I'm soo happy that you like it ^_^ I'll be posting the next, insanely long chapter soon danke fur reviewing ^_^
Date: 11/09/08 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 11: My jollies like getting you off too xD
I wanna HUGGLEEEE!!!! *I love huggles* I WANNA FEEL GOOOOOOODDDD!!!! Plus, I absolutly LOVE this story!!
Author's Response: *HUGGLEEEE**HUGGLEEEEE**HUGGLEEEEEEEEE* I'm glad i made you feel good. O.O woah xDDDD I'm glad that you love this story ^_^ i love you for loving it xD
Date: 11/09/08 09:41 am Title: Chapter 11: My jollies like getting you off too xD
*Cries* oh mein GOTT!!!! That was such a beaufiful and hateful chappie! I loved it! Now they're in luuuuuuv! yay! Please continue!
Author's Response: LMAO...i'm soooo happy that you loved it ^_^ you're reviews always make me laugh xDDDD abd yea, they're in love...or like...whatever i havent decided xDDDD oh and its not oh mein gott...its oh mein shelly (xD thats my nameeeee) ugh...i am way too hyper lmfao
Date: 11/09/08 08:27 am Title: Chapter 11: My jollies like getting you off too xD
*crying* So beautiful! *wipes her eyes*
Really... I love this chap! x3
Author's Response: awwwwwwww *hands you a tissue* Im sooo happy that you love this chapter ^_^ and i'm like O.O tears xDDD thanks for reviewing ^_^
Date: 11/09/08 07:32 am Title: Chapter 11: My jollies like getting you off too xD
Awwww, oh my fucking God. *-*
Even if I already read some lines, you managed to glue my eyes to the screen! *-*
I loved it so much, because it was just the twins, kissing and slapping and arguing, they were so exciting! xD
I mean that I liked that they are together now. Even if I personally appreciated the part in which Bill slaps Tom. u.u
But poor Tom. *-* I'd never guessed he had suffered like that! :'( At least he has got Billa now. (:
Now I do hope you'll manage to go on soon, 'cause if the story is really that long ahem... you'll have got me curious for the next weeks. xD
I liked it so far, hon! Kisses.
Author's Response: xDDDDDDDD glad you liked it sweetie ^_^ as always, your reviews mean a lot to me. ^_^ i'm glad that you loved he slaps (even though that idea was totally my friend Izzy's xD) and yea...poor tomi...i feel abd for him...but we'll ahve to wait and see what happens to him and billa ^_^
Date: 11/09/08 01:25 am Title: Chapter 11: My jollies like getting you off too xD
omg i just love tis story even though it gets me kinda grossed out at spme points..lol...is tis the end of the chapter??? wats gonna happen wit tom und bill?????
Author's Response: lol...awwws thanks for sticking with the story even though it grossed you out ^_^ I'll try to keep grossing you out through the next like 10 chapters...thats my specialty, you know ^_^ thanks for reviewing sweetie
Date: 11/09/08 01:10 am Title: Chapter 11: My jollies like getting you off too xD
Aw!!! Yeah they are together. I can't wait to read more...please update soon
Author's Response: xDDDDD yea, they're together, i hope xPPPP i'll update soon i promise
Date: 11/08/08 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 11: My jollies like getting you off too xD
hah, you talk about being a procrastinator, and i am sitting here reading this instead of studying for my exam tomorrow, my excuse is that you are more important than my studying...
but it was well worth it, i loved this chapter, it was nice and long. and shit is finally sorted, but hopefully not for long, since you said there will be many more chapters (which alone makes me happy). by the way, i love that Tom went all out with telling bill how good his lips would look around his dick, made me giggle ;).
dont leave me hanging for so long next time, and i will send you kisses.
so now i am off to (probably not) study...
Author's Response: lmfao..dude..i've been trying to write chapter 12 to this and chapter 2 to another story for like 3 hours lmfao...instead im reading crank and i keep having to excuse myself to go outside and laugh xDDDDDD......and i'm glad you liked it....I wanted to let them take atleast 2 steps foward before taking 15 steps back LMFAO.....and yea...the lips around the dick comment, that was a fav. i had to put something funny amongst th fluff xDDDD....i'll try not to let you wait too long ^_^ and yay for kisses xDDDDDDD
Date: 11/08/08 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 11: My jollies like getting you off too xD
This chapter was so good. The intensity and vulnerability was amazing, please update soon!
Author's Response: awww thanks xD WB was kicking my ass the whole time, i thought it was too fluffy >.< nein!!!! xD thanks for reveiwing, i'll upload asap ^_^
Date: 11/08/08 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 11: My jollies like getting you off too xD
GIMME MAH HUGGLE! :P Yeah theres one or two tiepohs in hier, unt aye theenk tsat et ees grate! Half english half Billa speak! :)
Author's Response: *HUGGLE* um yea...you're weird xDDDDDD i still love you despite your weirdness.....oh god...we have to write Eurotrip before i get bored of the idea!!!!!!!, oh and thanks for revewing xD
Date: 11/08/08 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 11: My jollies like getting you off too xD
oooooo
LOOOOOVEEEE IT!!!!
finally the truth comes out between them!
haha.
really good chapter.
cliffy?!
your mean!
lolz
Update soon!
=D
Yay for 10-15 more chapters!!
~vicks-the-one-and-only-cough-drop-i'd-ever-take-to-get-me-better-unless-it-was-tomixbilla-flavoured~
haha!
xD
Author's Response: xDDDD I'm glad you love it ^_^ writer's block was killing me, but I wanted to get this chapter out (plus izzy said she wouldnt let me see her story first if i didn't upload soon xDDD) and yea, truth, haha, there's gonna be sooooo much more drama happening teeheehee.....i'm glad that you've come to terms with your new name xDDDDDDDDDDD
Date: 11/08/08 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 11: My jollies like getting you off too xD
OMG!!!!!!!!!
I was just thinking about the story. I seriously thought Tom was getting Stockholm's Syndrome. You have to admit, pretty fucked up falling for someone who beat you and made you their slave.
This chapter was amazing and made my heart burst. Please update soon :)
Author's Response: xDDDDDD i'm glad you're so excited to see an update and whay naughty thoughts were you thinking about my sotry? xDDD I was gonna give him S.S.....but then i really don't beleive that's love, more like devotion, and i want them to ahve a real relationship, although it's gonna be a hella lot of chapters before they're all "i'd take a bullet for you" xDDDDD
Date: 11/08/08 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 11: My jollies like getting you off too xD
Yay! I luff huggles! -opens arms-
That was a good chapter =] I just wanna squeeze Tom, now. For what his mom and Nancy have done. That was shitty really. But at least both of them knows where the other stands! That's important, of course. Ooh, writer's block sucks xD I know...*lol* But don't you get it again!!! -wags finger-
Author's Response: *huggle* *huggle* *huggle* xDDDDDDDD I'm glad you liked it, and yea, i'm not too happy with Nancy or his mom either. I don't think Imma be happy with them ever xD and i lvoe that it took an ENTIRE chapter to get their "i think i like you"'s out. ugh!!! and i'll try my best not to get WB xDD
Date: 11/07/08 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 10: Can we have a tea party? Pretty, Pretty Please?
these last two chapters were awesome. very good twist with the drugs. cant wait for these difficulties on this site to be over so i can read more updates!!
Author's Response: xDDDDD i'm glad you think they're awesome ^_^ LOVED writing the alice in wonderland scene xDDDDDDDDD
Date: 11/07/08 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 10: Can we have a tea party? Pretty, Pretty Please?
Awwww I read it all the afternoon, and it's awesome! I liked the way Bill and Tom used to hate eachother, and then the inevitable happened. ^_^
And that master-slave thing was absolutely the best! OMG, when Tom was feeling fear I couldn't help but go on reading, seriously! *-*
And poor Bill, this is getting dramatic for him. I hope Tom will be able to save him from his madness. Hurry up, Tomi-boy. u.u
I added it to favourites so I know when you will update, okay? ^-^ And I hope you will go on soon. *-* I kinda NEED to read abou Bill feeling sooo much better and most of all, sooo HAPPILY in love, lol.
I did enjoy it, kisses.
Author's Response: lols. i LOVE your response sweety..and even though i know you wont read this until the morning (while its night for me xD) i still wanna say thanks for reveiwing and that you made me laugh and smiling, and want to get over this writer's block that's killing me xDDD i luv you ^_^ bacios (i hope that's right...my italian is SO off xD)
Date: 11/05/08 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 10: Can we have a tea party? Pretty, Pretty Please?
YAY! finally theyre both on the same page (nearly at least).
just so you know...i hate cliffhangers (unless im writing them lol) so ya know...you should make up for it by giving us some MORE ;). seriously, i am waiting for the next chapter.
so satisfy MY addiction and update soon gorgeous!
Author's Response: awww...Danke mein liebe fur Ihre review (i think my german has gotten better during the past week that i've been trying to learn it xD) and yea...i'm sorry that you hate cliffhangers, especially since every chapter i've written has had a cliffie type of enging xP.....i promise i'll update soon. have an awesome day/night mon cherie (dude...my languages are going ADD today xD)
Date: 11/05/08 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 10: Can we have a tea party? Pretty, Pretty Please?
loooooved it!!!
the ending of this chap. omg...too cute!
^ ^
i hope they really get together(for real) soon.
update!!!
=D
Author's Response: awwwwwwwwwwwssss...thanks vicks-the-one-and-only-cough-drop-i'd-ever-take-to-get-me-better-unless-it-was-tomixbilla-flavoured.....haha...thats an awefully long name hahahaha.....i'm glad you loved the ending (i preferred the beginning cuz a high bill is always funny to me) and i'm trying to get them together....i'm just waiting for the right moment. xP
Date: 11/05/08 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 10: Can we have a tea party? Pretty, Pretty Please?
WHAT. I just wrote out a LONG review and the thing decides to have an error...anyways...Billa can't be a crackhead! Noooes! He and Tom have pretty much reversed roles...and I feel so bad for Tomi! :( Bill too...Drugs are bad. Very bad. Don't do them. Great chapter and I'm sorry this review isn't as epicly long as the first one I wrote that the computer decided not to post!
Author's Response: O.O so you are reviewer number 9 for this chapter and 68 for the entire story...awesomeness izzy ^_^ so yea, internet sucks ballocks, and don't worry Billa will be fine...after all out talks of becoming reden girls you still don't trust me judgement? xD....oh and we STILL need to come up with an idea for our co-authored story....we need LOTS of twincest smut xD...
Date: 11/05/08 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 10: Can we have a tea party? Pretty, Pretty Please?
MORE MORE MORE!!! NOW!!!
Author's Response: lol...i'm trying, i'm writing, i'm editing xP....I;m glad that you loved it ^_^
Date: 11/05/08 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 10: Can we have a tea party? Pretty, Pretty Please?
omg this was beautiful it so cute how tom ask him
"i just want you to love me"
Author's Response: xD awwwws...i'm glad i made tomi say it to him.....i needed someone to get some sense into their head xP....too much drama going on lols