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Reviewer: marri88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/08 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

Really good Story ^^

Author's Response: Thanks! xD

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/08 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ummmm. I, uh....eeerrr....*fans self*

I was reading this, and didn't even realize my mom was calling me from the other room xD When I finally finished and went in, my mouth was wide open and...uh...there was MAYBE a hint of drool? :D God, that was awesome.

*sips from glass o' cold water*

Author's Response: LOL Thanks for making me giggle. I'm happy that you enjoyed it that much. Good thing your mom waited and didn't come see what you were reading! O_o Thanks so much for reviewing, I do appreciate it :)

Reviewer: Luna8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/08 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Author's Response: Should I take that to mean you liked it, Luna girl? lol I know this wasn't anywhere NEAR your favorite pairings, so thanks for reading it, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: MarieTH Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/08 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

O-M-G *____*
That was.... HOT x'o
I love well written Billshido (L)

Author's Response: Thank you! I've been overwhelmed by the response to this, and I'm happy you liked it, as well. Thank you for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Chayenne7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/08 04:20 am Title: Chapter 1

Shit. That was hot. HOT.
I'm always in for a bit of Billshido, but it was something new to read about them in this scenario. Very naughty. Excellent.

Author's Response: Oh my, thank you! I'm a big fan of your work, which makes me even happier that you enjoyed this so much. Yeah, it is pretty naughty, Bill and the teacher getting it on, but when the teacher is Bushido, that's a hell of a visual.

Thanks for reviewing this, it really means a lot to me.

Reviewer: Betje Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/08 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

They’d been discussing whether Bill should run for Prom King or Prom Queen this year and had just been wiping the tears from the corners of their eyes when the History teacher’s voice sobered them up.

LMAO! xD
watching others while getting off...
Nice^^

Author's Response: Thank you! Don't know which he has a better chance at, but I'm leaning toward Prom Queen. lol And I'm a huge fan of voyeur fics, so I thought that would be nice in there. Turns out, yeah! *grin*

So thank you for reviewing and letting me know you liked it. I do appreciate it :)

Reviewer: MiikaMaelstrom Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/08 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

O_O wow. just wow. i usually don't like Bill/Bushido, but this... holy crap. O_O i swear, you're a genius. i LOVE this story.

Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for making me grin like a fool lol

I don't know so much about genius (okay, definitely not), but I love the O_O! I'm so happy that you enjoyed it that much. Thank you so much for telling me, I do appreciate it! :)

Reviewer: musicmaniac Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/08 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

oh man that was fucking awesome!

Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: Pump Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/24/08 09:18 am Title: Chapter 1

My two fave pairings in one fic, and a highschool fic...BRILLIANT! Fantastic job! Hope you'll write more in the future ;)

Author's Response: I definitely plan on it. These guys are too hot NOT to write about. I'm glad you liked the story that much! Thank you for letting me know, I do appreciate it! :)

Reviewer: billliebttom Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/08 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh my god, that was amazing. * 3*

I'm going to kill my mother one of these days, though.
She almost ruined it for me by calling me into the other room as Bushido started undoing Bill's pants. XD
I had to close my eyes for a second and let my breath even out before I talked to her. Haha!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it that much! XD

Yeah, I don't blame you at all, truly. My mom would have wondered what the hell I was looking at, and that wouldn't have been good. I'm happy worked it out *nods* And hey, thanks for your review, I appreciate it. :)

Reviewer: bloomsgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/08 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was hawt!!!! No other words... :D

Author's Response: Well, thank you! No other words... XD

Reviewer: Katjana1989 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/22/08 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm normally not so fond of Bill/Bushido, but this was hot! I also like Torg a lot!
Nice work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I do appreciate it! :)

Reviewer: himisoko Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/08 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like it when the twins are all slutty -- yum, yum!

Author's Response: Oh, me too. Definitely. Thanks :)

Reviewer: catmio Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/08 11:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow! Great story!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you liked it. :)

Reviewer: bleepbloopbanana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/22/08 11:29 am Title: Chapter 1

-flutterclap- You did it! When Lena first told me there was a new Billshido I was a little skeptical because you know we don't get many good ones around here but then I saw your name and went o__o! And then my computer refused to load this fic for FIVE FREAKING HOURS, but that's a tale for another day. (Or never, actually)

SO, I'll be honest, as per usual. I saw "Mr. Ferchichi" and a pretty severe reaction - repulsion, as it were, because I love Bushido but -hate- his last name. And then I saw History teacher and burst into a fit of giggles because I can see that happening but NOT ending well at all.

So in the beginning I was wincing at every "Ferchichi" and thought I was going to keep wincing through the entire fic until I saw "how that stubble would feel beneath his fingers, against his cheek, between his legs." and returned to my blissed-out state.

It was a smooth ride till the end, after that. I'd kind of fallen in love with your Bill in the beginning, after the Prom King/Queen comment, and continued to snicker at his thoughts, and your Bushido grew on me with certain phrases like: "Bushido’s voice was more breath than sound."

And then the Torg! Which, admittedly, I am not a huge fan of, but voyeurism is never unwanted and it was, y'know -fans self- And then unexpectedly sweet in between the smut: "Bill could hear just the faintest breath of a whisper between them." Yes. :)

So, was it okay? Pfft, don't even need to deem that worthy of a response. You know you did good, just like I knew you would. I'm always right! ;)

This is the first of many more to come, I hope. Much love for a lovely oneshot.

-Ella

Author's Response: Heh...I had been starting to wonder if you missed it. I was really looking forward to hearing your thoughts since I don't know if I would have even attempted this if it wasn't for...ehem...the poking and the prodding. XD

I do apologize about the "Mr. Ferchichi" thing, but it had to be done. I don't much like his name, either, but I had to convey the required respect (or at least the facade of respect), and Mr. Bushido just wasn't going to cut it. lol

The bit you mentioned, "how that stubble would feel beneath his fingers, against his cheek, between his legs" has been mentioned quite a bit, and I love that. Truthfully, I don't remember thinking much about it. Now I've seen it mentioned several times, I've sat back and thought about it, and damn if I didn't have to fan myself!

I'm happy you liked the Torg, too, especially because you're not that fond of it to begin with. It really makes me feel like I've pulled something off if I get people saying "I really don't like Billshido (or whomever), but damn this was hot!" I love it.

As usual, Ella, you made my day. I read your review over and over, grinning like a damn fool. Thank you so very much for that. Truly.

And yes, I plan to write more of this pairing, because you know, it turns out I kinda like it. ;)

Reviewer: diddlemouse Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/22/08 10:06 am Title: Chapter 1

guh, is ded. it was more then ok! freaking hot it was.

(came via Faye's lj)

Author's Response: Thank you for coming and reading this! I'm just bouncy happy that Faye and everyone liked it, and I thank you so much for all the kind words. :)

Reviewer: nodigirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/08 10:02 am Title: Chapter 1

Ok...you know that Torg is not my cup of tea, but even I found it HOT AS HELL!! Billshido AND Torg?! OMG that was so great! I really wasn't expecting that to happen! It was so well written that it's hard not to like some Torg when it's written like that, but I do prefer twincest, the twins are made for each other LOL *hugs*

Author's Response: Honey, I'm amazed you liked this at all! lol I really didn't expect you to, knowing you don't dig Torg and your thoughts on Bushido. I guess that it makes me even happier that you enjoyed it, knowing that. Thank you so much, girl...I'll talk to you later tonight...*hugs*

Reviewer: lirren Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/22/08 09:57 am Title: Chapter 1

Well done! Such an excellent response to the challenge!

Author's Response: Oh my! Lirren...I'm so happy that you read this and enjoyed it. I enjoy your writing so much, and your Biorg is absolute love to me. I was so excited to see your review. Thank you so much! :)

Reviewer: marhea Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/08 09:35 am Title: Chapter 1

*melts*
It was a bit more than OK.
"Mr. Ferchichi scowled from the doorway, his hands on his hips." heheheee, I should pay more attention to pairings, because I didn't even realize this would have Billshido. And the T/G? WOOHOOO! hotness.

Author's Response: *grins* I'm glad it was more than okay. I'm often unsure about my writing, so these reviews make me happier than you know. I'm so pleased that this hit the spot for you! :)

Reviewer: Mikaiyawa Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/08 08:17 am Title: Chapter 1

I think Bill ha been terribly naughty and Georg and Tom have too...

Bushido as a school teacher...who'd a thought... :D

Author's Response: omg...I think I would love for Bu to teach me a thing or two. Not in this lifetime, I guess, so I'll just daydream of him teaching Bill...and Tom... *drools*

Thanks so much for your review! :)

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