Date: 10/08/24 11:22 pm Title: Keep Breathing
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 07/29/09 12:32 pm Title: Keep Breathing
Wow, this story was so good. I am so glad that I came across this story, because it is just amazing. The bit at the end from 'No, true love..' to the end made me cry so much because it's just so beautiful! *favourited*
Author's Response: Aw, thank you very much :) I stop writing cause I just don't have time. But i will continue any day now. Once again, thank you very, very much :D Angela xxx
Date: 10/28/08 02:08 pm Title: Keep Breathing
That story was so well written. I loved every single part of it, well done!
Author's Response: Aww, thank u :) im so glad u liked it :) it was worth all the work i had. I'll publish two more stories soon. Bye xxxx ;)
Date: 10/25/08 05:03 pm Title: Keep Breathing
do i stil have to tell you that i really liked it ?
omg , of course it was good!! it wasn't booring at all, belive me, you're good!
keep writing XD
and aww, the ending was so nice ;)
good job, sweety!
Author's Response: no you dont. u already did xD I hope so... i dont really like when my friends say that i write boring stories just because they only think about computers and video games -.-' But im happy u all liked it :DD I made my best ;) xxx
Date: 10/25/08 04:49 pm Title: The Sun will set for Me
again i loved it!
the first one has tom's perspective and this one has bill's one ...and this is really cool!!
wondering what the next chapter will be about XD
Author's Response: Yeah, i wanted to show both feelings and both perspective's, you know... I think it is quite good and unusual XD
Date: 10/25/08 04:43 pm Title: Bill's the Reason for my Teardrops
god, i loved it!
i told you that you're good! :)
and yeah, continue writing!^^
ps: i am Ioana XD
Author's Response: Hii! Im so glad you liked it... Oh, i will. today i thought of my new story and i think it'll be nice xD But i have to study math and i hate it and maybe tomorrow i wont have time to write some more :S Well, keep cheking my stories and if i update one, ill warn u ;) Thank u for coming here :)
Date: 10/25/08 04:02 pm Title: Keep Breathing
AWWEEEEE!
i love you.
and tom and bill.
*gives cookie*
Author's Response: awww.. thank u dear! :DDD Love cookies!! *o*
Date: 10/24/08 07:17 pm Title: Keep Breathing
awww sooo good! =] lovee it
Date: 10/24/08 07:17 pm Title: Keep Breathing
awww sooo good! =] lovee it
Author's Response: Oh, thank u dear. I made my best ;)
Date: 10/24/08 06:00 pm Title: The Sun will set for Me
I liked it. Please write some more.
Author's Response: Last chapter posted about some seconds ago ;)
Date: 10/24/08 07:12 am Title: Bill's the Reason for my Teardrops
lool
porque estamos a falar em inglês? não sei, quando estou neste site até penso em inglês. -.-"
De qualquer forma agora deixaste-me curiosa portanto é bom postares depressa ou viro "Achmed" and...I'LL KILL YOU!
Author's Response: Eu percebo. eu ate ja falo ingles com a minha twin sister -.-' o capitulo ja ta escrito. im gonna update.. agora msm xD Dont kill me, man. im a nice person. :*, Angela
Date: 10/23/08 02:17 pm Title: The Sun will set for Me
wiiiii...now this is going the way I like. Go, Bill! Go, Bill! GEEEEEHHHH! -.-"
I can't wait to read Tom's reaction when he sees Bill again.*O*
Author's Response: I know XD All of u asked me a happy end and im doing my best XD the next chapter will be great and the song is absolutely perfect to relate with the text :D His reaction will be... idk... Wait and read :3 U'll see, u'll see ;) Btw, why are we talking in english if ur as portguese as I am? -.-', :* Angela
Date: 10/22/08 11:02 pm Title: The Sun will set for Me
aww Bill feels the same way =) yay he got rid of that stupid girl! now run to Tom!!
Author's Response: Yeah.. Finally, she's really anoying XD Wait for the next chapter... U'll see, u'll see ;) :*, Angela
Date: 10/22/08 08:46 pm Title: The Sun will set for Me
:D
yay you wrote another chapter!!
yeah one more chapter should be the finish! :D
Author's Response: Lol, yeah! XD The end will be great :) and the song is absolutely beautiful :3 Wait and u'll see ;) :*, Angela
Date: 10/22/08 08:22 pm Title: The Sun will set for Me
hOMG!!! Your Guardian Angel! Your Guardian Angel!! Use Red Jumpsuit's Apperatus' Your Guardian Angel. :3 As I was reading, I got this vibe, and now I'm in a shake hold. *squeal* Absolutely amazing! More, more!!
Author's Response: Thanks for ur lovely words :) Sorry... I had already written the next chapter :S The song isn't that one you asked... Sorry, I didn't know it before i wrote :$ But it'll be amazing for sure! I love the song and i think it is the best song to relate with the story :D Thanks again, :* Angela
Date: 10/21/08 03:28 pm Title: Bill's the Reason for my Teardrops
good girl xDD
Author's Response: ^^
Date: 10/20/08 08:02 pm Title: Bill's the Reason for my Teardrops
oooooh, you're portuguese! *hi5*
-.-"
I'm so dense! I must be the third twin.
Author's Response: XD :)
Date: 10/20/08 08:01 pm Title: Bill's the Reason for my Teardrops
OMG! You made me cry! Of course you should continue writing. God, this was heart-breaking.
I wish Bill could open his eyes and see that Tom is right there and he's his soulmate and they should be together. argh, really, are Bill that dense? Seriously, you're the writer, tell me, Bill really didn't see the way Tom looked at him? okay, forget it's 1a.m I talking about non sense things, I should go and to sleep. xD
okay, think about a second chapter about how Bill went with Laura to jamaica but then, when they were there he realise how much Tom means to him and they could live happy until their dying day. The End. xD
/Yeah, I know, I'm going!/
Good job. ;)
PS: Jamaica? They should come to Portugal and visit me instead! lmao
Author's Response: Thanks :3 Lol, sorry. i didnt want u to cry XD Well, I'll think of a new chapter. But i have to find other song to fit the chapter :S ill handle it XD ill think of something. you're from portugal? well, so am I xD PORTUGAL!! :*, Angela
Date: 10/20/08 07:14 pm Title: Bill's the Reason for my Teardrops
you should, you must, please do
Author's Response: Ok sir, i understand, i will :)
Date: 10/20/08 07:08 pm Title: Bill's the Reason for my Teardrops
ohhh of course you should continue this, this story is too beautiful to end like this!!!!
i really like it=DDD
i hope you decide to make into a story=DDD
Author's Response: Hey! I'll think of something :) people are asking me for a happy end and i might think of it ;) Im gonna start at least 3 new stories, i already know how to begin one.. but i have to think the others off :P Thanks for reviewing :*, Angela