Date: 02/02/12 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
srsly who's cutting the onions??? jesus that was sad:(
Author's Response: mmm, sorry about that. :)
Date: 10/21/08 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
AWH MEG.
We corrected this story for an hour, I guess it payed off. ;)
Author's Response: :) I have another in mind but with my hand, its going to be a while before it gets on the site.. lol or maybe not. haha
Date: 10/19/08 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really liked it, and I would read it if you write another one!
Author's Response: Awww really. *hugs* Thanks. I already have another in mind. :)
Date: 10/19/08 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was good.
pretty sad
but i liked it
Author's Response: Yeah it was sad. I can't even beleive i was able to write a sad story, i can't stand it reading sad ones because i get emotional and most of the time start to cry. :P and Im glad you liked it *hugs*
Date: 10/19/08 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
OH MY FUCKING AND HOLY GOD!!!! WHAT THE HELL HAVE YOU BEEN ON???? THIS IS SO AMAZING!!!!! I CRY LIKE I'VE NEVER CRIED BEFORE!!!!!!! GOD IT'S GREAT!!!!
Author's Response: Haha, Im glad you liked it. I cry as well reading sad stories, even my own sometimes :P
Date: 10/19/08 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
It was a cute first story. A bit choppy and some repitition of stuff we already knew that didn't need to be repeated. However there were some really good points in there, like when Bill was sitting by Tom's grave talking to him (before he passes out w/ the g's). You have a lot of potential. Use it. You're a better writer than you think.
Author's Response: Thank you *hugs*. I did realized i repeated a couple stuff, and i'm going to make sure i don't repeat anything, or much in my next story.. :P
Date: 10/19/08 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!
(: Write more!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it *hugs* .. i already have one in mind, but it might take a bit for me to get it just right.. so in the next week or so i might have a chapter up for my next story. :)