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Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/08 07:09 pm Title: I promise you I will look for no mistakes
Date: 10/18/08 07:09 pm Title: I promise you I will look for no mistakes
Very sweet, girl. You're right, his legs are quite thin. The boy works hard, though, and he is young.
I understand your thought, though. I love to Tomi for always being there for his brother. Thanks for letting me know when you posted, I enjoyed it! *hugs*
Author's Response: Awh, you're so sweet *melts* thank you for this, ç_ç I hope there will be more people who disagree with me though, I hate to think him skinnier than he already is :/
Reviewer: bloomsgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/08 06:55 pm Title: I promise you I will look for no mistakes
Date: 10/18/08 06:55 pm Title: I promise you I will look for no mistakes
Nice, but he's always been thin, it's just his tall and lanky frame. Tom would look the same if his clothes weren't 8 sizes to o big. I do admit though, Bill could use a little pudge :P
Good story!
Author's Response: Thank you ^^ I swear I see him thinner :o
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