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Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/11 11:33 am Title: Chapter 1

this is a nice story!
i cant wait for the rest!

Reviewer: MoichiMindfreak Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/10 01:33 am Title: Chapter 1

Total hotness!!! :))

Author's Response: Thanks, haha ;)

Reviewer: MoichiMindfreak Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/10 01:33 am Title: Chapter 1

Total hotness!!! :))

Reviewer: paradox Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/08 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

Despite how much water sport squicks me, that was well hot!

Mmmm... Dominant Bill... My fave

Author's Response: Thanks very much! :-D

Reviewer: FairyBox Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/18/08 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

It was so hot ^_^ props for submissive Tom!

Author's Response: Thank you! Thank you, thank you! *gives cookies*

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/08 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

I thought that was amazing!! and they must be in love, or fuck, I would swallow piss for NO ONE, if I didn't love them, so FUCK.

Author's Response: Wow, uh, thanks! Yeah, that was the idea I was going for. But I have no idea why I wrote it, LOL!

Reviewer: longwayhome Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/18/08 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

ohmygod, my eyes D: I think you should have warned about the watersports. Heavy Kink doesn't really cut it. I think there should actually be a tag for that already...or else, omg warn people

Author's Response: Sorry, I didn't mean to offend anyone. First time I've written anything like that, sorry!

Reviewer: spreadxthexiubesc Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/08 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

it was great!

Author's Response: Thanks! lol.

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