Date: 10/28/08 10:39 am Title: Chapter 1: Ready, Set, Go!
I absolutely love this! I'm even kind of crying now T_T
I love stuff that makes me cry. ... I guess I'm kinda weird like that. I love crying. Even pain xD
Anyways, I really love this.
Do not abandon all hope, whatever you do! This story deserves to live! THINK ABOUT THE LITTLE ONES!!!
Sorry, I get kind of hyper whenever I review xD
xx
Author's Response: Oh, please don't cry! It'll get better, promise. Well, my definition of "better" may be a little bit different than yours, but it'll get better nonetheless. xD I'll do my best to post the next chapter soon. :3 Thank you very much for your review and opinions!
Date: 10/27/08 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 1: Ready, Set, Go!
wow...more soon please...
im confused tho...can Bill like...see the future??
Author's Response: Bill can see the future kind of. He sees what might be, and in some cases what cannot be changed, almost like Alice from the Twilight series, or (less commonly) a Herald in Misty Lackey's Valdemar books, but Bill is a bit different. But the future is never set in stone, so what he sees may change, like in the prologue. There's a bit more to Bill's character, Foresight is only one small part.rnrnUhhm, that explained, is that any less confusing for you? This is what I'm asking for, and I'm debating whether to semi-explain Bill's Foresight in the coming chapters.rnrnAnyways, thanks for the question and the love! I enjoy it. :3
Date: 10/26/08 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 1: Ready, Set, Go!
DDD: NUUUUUUU!!! DDD"X It kinda has the same ending as the prologue ._. aber, das ist okies. O_O you have like... this amazing ability to write!!! lol I felt like I was there almost ;__; or maybe it's just me because I'm so into this story, I dunno lol. But now I'm sad and feel like crying DDDDDD"X
Author's Response: I was not overly pleased with the ending. It didn't sit perfect with me, but I couldn't think of any other way to end it. Anything more would have made the next chapter hard to write. Anything less wouldn't have met my word count standards. I knew what I wanted to do, but in hind sight, I can think of one other way to have ended it... But this one seems better now anyways. XDrnrn:3 Thanks for the complement, I'm glad I made you sad? Well... Not really, but I'm glad you like it. I'm pleased that I can call up such emotions. (Oh, yeah! I sounded smart to myself!!) But don't be sad. :O I'm not sure I can kill off Tom or Bill right now. I love this too much. VG is, like, my baby. XDDrnrnThanks for the heart-felt review. :3 It made me smile to know that you came back to read more!
Date: 10/26/08 01:10 pm Title: Prolouge
Me loves it so far ^^
Can't wait for the next chapter to be updated!!!
Seriously, I really do agree with your teacher; this is really epic and has amazing potential.
x
Author's Response: Really?! Thanks for the love. :3 I'm gonna start brainstorming songs for the opening of Chapter 2 so I can write it this coming week.rnrnFwah! Thanks for the love, I'm serious!
Date: 10/19/08 12:35 am Title: Prolouge
My little liebchen, you have one of the most brilliant minds I've ever had the privelege of delving into. So help me, if you don't keep this going, I will march my happy but to your door and kick deine arse personally.
Author's Response: A threat?! *gasp!* Well, it's okay, I guess. o.o I plan on continuing it, hopefully with a post by tomorrow evening. Which means I should either go to bed early and get up early... or write bunch then wake up semi-early anyway. And anyway, if you were going to march to my house, your feet would hurt so much that you probably wouldn't want to kick me. :3 So, to save you the trouble, I shall not let it die?
Date: 10/17/08 07:34 pm Title: Prolouge
*sniffles* You've read my story...? ;__; But anyway... I really like this story. And I can't wait to see what happens next O_______________O
Author's Response: Uh, yeah, I've read your story! I think that Verboten was one of the first stories I ever started reading as a member of THF. I think you'd just updated when I first logged in. :3 I remember so, because I was literally bouncing off the walls because I'd realized that Tom and Bill were a totally accepted pairing here. XD
Date: 10/17/08 05:18 pm Title: Prolouge
omggg!
I can't wait for moree!
this is such a cool idea.
reminds me a bit of fahrenheit 451, exept with music.
Author's Response: :D! You liked it? Thankis. :3 Fahrenheit 451??? Movie? THF story? Hmm.. I kinda wanna see it/read it now. xD Ahh, and the music... I like adding a verse or chorus into the story. I keeps me on the chapter's track, and I get done quicker. Expect an update by tomorrow, 'cause I'm working on it right now.
Date: 10/17/08 02:21 pm Title: Prolouge
Wow! Thats really great!!
As for crit. I think the only thing that could use some work is detail. You could add a little more discription and stuff!!
Author's Response: Okay, thanks. :3 I'll work on that in Chap 1.
Date: 10/17/08 04:34 am Title: Prolouge
LOVED IT!!!!
totally agreed with your english teacher!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so glad you liked it so much! There might be another chspter up before the end of Sunday if I get myself moving..
Date: 10/17/08 03:37 am Title: Prolouge
O_O oh my god, this is amazing... now it makes my own story, Verboten seem like crap ;__; *goes to cry in a corner*
Author's Response: *whines unhappily* Dun cry!! I absolutely loved Verboten! It is most certainly not crap!!